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Wonderful Story! The story is amazing, world-building seems perfect, captivating character designing, the narration is immersive, story development is very smooth, dialogues are very realistic, all in all, this story seems just magnificent. I especially like the writing style. So I'll definitely ask everyone to try out this story. It has few chapters as of now so please keep updating, I'll definitely read it once again after some more chapters pile up. Good job, author.
I like your writing style! It feels elegant as if I am inside a lavish room, with a butler beside me telling the story! It makes me feel engrossed with the novel, and I can't wait to read more!
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉 Dear readers, I hope this review will give you insights into the novel. Please give a chance to this author's work. I am sure she will surprise you in many ways! 🙏
This was wonderful, with amazing world-building, captivating characters like Beth, and such beautiful turns of phrase, like "Eden-green" for eyes and "twine-thin" - I could almost swear I was reading poetry. If you like slow burn romances with Dark Lords, add this, you won't be disappointed!
From the beginning nicely written! The storyline is interesting, your characters are expressive, the dialogues captivating. Well done! Wish you endless inspiration and o lot of great ideas!
Wonderful Story! The story is amazing, world-building seems perfect, captivating character designing, the narration is immersive, story development is very smooth, dialogues are very realistic, all in all, this story seems just magnificent. I especially like the writing style. So I'll definitely ask everyone to try out this story. It has few chapters as of now so please keep updating, I'll definitely read it once again after some more chapters pile up. Good job, author.
I like your writing style! It feels elegant as if I am inside a lavish room, with a butler beside me telling the story! It makes me feel engrossed with the novel, and I can't wait to read more!
Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady This is my review! Hope you like it! 😉 Dear readers, I hope this review will give you insights into the novel. Please give a chance to this author's work. I am sure she will surprise you in many ways! 🙏
This was wonderful, with amazing world-building, captivating characters like Beth, and such beautiful turns of phrase, like "Eden-green" for eyes and "twine-thin" - I could almost swear I was reading poetry. If you like slow burn romances with Dark Lords, add this, you won't be disappointed!
From the beginning nicely written! The storyline is interesting, your characters are expressive, the dialogues captivating. Well done! Wish you endless inspiration and o lot of great ideas!