Truth and Family: A God's Journey

LV 1

MidnightEgg

There's not often you see somebody invest this much time and effort into a story, If you feel lost you can refer to the auxiliary chapters which explain certain components of the story's world. The story and the events which take place are appropriately grand and vivid, just the sheer scale of things is pretty impressive. My only pet peeves are related to a few grammatical errs and certain descriptives but it in no way breaks the story. If you're looking for a meaty story with hours of content and sprawling colors I would urge you to pick this one up.

LV 12

Sunny_Shad0w

As you travel your way through the eyes of two wanderers, Asahi and Aletha, what secrets are thou ready to be discovered from your wandering? What can you find about the origins of the world and the people who dwell in it? What happened to the other wanderer all those years ago? What is the Verity of this world, and most importantly, what is the reasoning for the wretched Creator's attack? These are questions that you must find out... for yourself. * * * * * This story is all pre-planned and it will have Eight volumes. Make sure to add the story to your library if you are interested! If it's slow-paced, please note that it will get better as the story goes on. To see the character illustrations, go to the archive and turn on paragraph comments! Thank you! ^-^

LV 3

Grandmasters

Grammar and quality is superb. I also like the storyline of the novel. A fun way to read one's work. The Characters were well crafted and very fleshed out. The pacing is also steady, not fast nor too slow. It needs more exposure. Hope you get more features soon. [img=recommend]

LV 14

Magecrafter

I'll be frank... This story surpasses 90 percent of the stories I've read. It's so engaging... Like, I can literally follow the characters on their journey. I also ship the siblings... Sorry, that's a ME thing. Lol. Great work author!

LV 1

Detroittwo

Everything in this novel looks beautiful. The writing, the wording, the characters, the emotions, the conflict, the mystery, the questions, this story has it all. The character design is really amazing, the plot of this story is rather unique, and the interactions from character to character really feel real. The landscape descriptions and the actions of some parts are very dynamic and fluid. I can easily picture a scene inside my mind with these chapters. I like how you plan ahead and make this world truly not empty. Keep up the good work, and continue to write!

LV 10

_shay

I love how the story starts. 😊 It is well-written and the words are carefully chosen. This kind of story is similar to some movies like for an example, you need to watch the movie again to be able to understand it. 😁 In short, this story is deep but well detailed and I love it. ❤️ Characters are well-written too. Good job on this, author!

LV 1

WorthyAdversary

A great novel, I have no idea why it hasn't been contracted yet, but, it's still a great novel anyways. 1. Writing quality is a lot better than most books on the platform, with there being only 4-5 writing mistakes every chapter. Also, for some reason, I don't know if it's just me, but I feel like the author uses the word "sneer" in the wrong context, and it just makes the story sound super weird at some points. Other than that, there's just a normal amount of errors per chapter that don't really take away from the story. 2. The stability of updates is kinda weird with really sporadic updates, don't know what that's about, but yeah it's pretty inconsistent. 3. The story development is pretty average right now, not a pacing that would make your heart race, but not a totally bad pacing either. It's a pretty average speed that's neither really good or bad. 4. The character design is, again, like the story development, pretty average, with characters that are pretty well thought out. I just felt that some character traits were forced into certain parts of the story, making it a little weird. 5. Now, this world background is outstanding. As of where I am right now, chapter 21, it's totally thought out in its fullest and just seems really intricate. It's really amazing, and I have no critiques on it. Overall, a good novel, and it's free. I mean, for some reason, a lot of the free novels are just a lot better than most contracted novels. Anyways, good job author!

LV 4

funkiller_562

Fifty chapters down, time to leave a review.The story is well written and we can tell the author took a lot of time to plan the world-building, it was not too complicated and the book catches you off guard from the beginning and before you know it, you find yourself reading more chapters to know what happens next.

LV 3

Kurai_Takahashi

From what I’ve seen thus far, this is great. The story is different from the usual I have read. I absolutely enjoyed the world-building and descriptions. Hoping this isn’t dropped. Keep working hard author. There are so many questions, yet not enough answers. Only by reading will I find them, anyways, this is an absolute read. Will definitely be a stable reader.

LV 13

MadScythe

The way the author tells the story is quite immersive as the pacing is neither slow nor rushed. I felt that I was watching a movie because of how the author makes it easy to imagine! The world where even gods were annihilated is already intriguing me. I can feel that the author put a lot of thought into this story. I'm looking forward to Asahi and Aletha's journey to find the perpetrator who destroyed their World.

LV 2

gacob

Please keep publishing daily, it's promising :) ......................................................................................

LV 12

Chestnutriceeee

I think I am in love with this novel. Definitely the best piece of work I've read on WN yet. With beautiful prose and an even prettier storyline to accompany it, Adtraic Verity is surely a great work flowing with care and passion. Asahi and Aletha are a charming pair of main leads, one mature and the other playful, they perfectly complement each other's personalities and clearly depend on each other. The way the author displayed their relationships with the masterfully crafted dialogue is astonishingly good, and that is just the beginning of things. Each chapter keeps getting better in terms of both the intrigue and the plot, the pace is perfect and the descriptions are jaw-dropping. This is definitely going to be a read of a lifetime for many people and I would highly recommend everyone to check it out.

LV 12

Kvng_zeno

This is very well done I can't find a better way to describe it the story is very intriguing and the stories pace is perfect you can tell a lot of thought wand time was put into it, it's very rare to see something like this I appreciate seeing it

LV 5

NobleQueenBee

Overall, I find the concept of thisnatory fascinating. The siblings obviously care for each other very much, which already makes me like the book. The massive scale at the very beginning is overwhelming, which is kind of the point. The characters emotions are genuine and the author uses very descriptive language. Chapters are long, which is good for those wanting a meaty read. Good job, Author!

LV 2

Scarlet_Wolf96

I never thought I could read a story like this. although I only read a few chapters. but i enjoy it so much.. really enjoyed the flow of the story. it makes me want to read it again. good job authors. i really like it 😊❤

LV 1

Wizedex

This is a review of the first 5 chapters of this to be long-running series. I don't have many complaints. The characters are great, there are plenty of questions left unanswered that will be answered eventually in time. It gives me a sense of odd unfamiliarity with the world that makes me want to continue reading on with it.

LV 14

Shade_Arjuun

Let's give credit where it is due... this novel is incredible. From the detail to the immersion experience as well the ethereal atmosphere..its all amazing... the character are grounded individuals instead of becoming a collective character, I appreciate that.. the world building is solid, and without going into spoilers I think this is a top tier read....

LV 12

Raksha1

The story began in a very interesting manner. The writing style is superb, descriptive but not boring. While you read you can envision the scenes very clearly. That's a big plus for me. Also, the setting is very mysterious, which adds another charm to the story. The author mentioned this will be a long time project. I'm happy for that, so I wish them the best of luck! Keep up the good work!🥰

LV 13

AngelLily

The grammar is great, the story is well written, you end up imagining as you read. the start was intriguing and amazing, I recommend the story to any of you

LV 13

Little_Foxxy

A wholesome adventure of siblings witha nicely put tension and cliffhanger. The pace of this story is all right, reader could easily follow. The grammar is nicely sharpened. Keep on going Author, keep on writing. Story must be told.