Bab 177: Bait, Funnel, and Trap
"It's Cleo Loras!"
"That's her? She's so beautiful!"
The men whooped in a low tone and slobbered at the appearance of the beauty, while the women revealed a false smile to hide their quivering sneers.
'I have to leave. NOW!' Markus's mind blared at him earnestly.
"And with that, the Outer Division Ranking Tournament comes to a close," the girl spoke with a pleasant, sing-song voice. The crowd around Markus turned silent and everyone assumed their seats.
'Shit! I can't leave now or else I will stand out.' Markus too sat down in his spot. His instincts were telling him to brace for the worst.
PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA 
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Fight begins. This is officially the second fight scene in this novel (after at least a hundred chapters lol). Anyways, I plan to write more action from now on. I need practice. Just reviewing my work for this fight gave me a lot of insights into the mistakes I make.
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