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I love this book it was answer.... IDK y u stopped writing but I hope u start it again really soon it's awesome and sucks just to end it just like that and not give a proper ending and all that.
what's goin with this book it's awesome and now just stopped. if your not going to keep going the take it down so ppl don't get to like it and then you just leave them without anything!
hello my name is daruto adeyemi i am a new reader so when you continue please make their be no locked chapter thank you for listening bye bye
i really love this novel and I'm sure I'm not the only one. Can you PLEASE PLEASE update i realy love the story line . im in love with the main character
This is a fun and exciting adventure/action/fantasy story featuring a teenage girl who is reborn as a magical fox and begins to live her new life. Although the writing is a little awkward in the beginning and the MC comes across as over-excitable, the writing improves quickly, and the MC matures. She is naive at first due to being a child in a new world with no experience of her own, but she learns quickly and becomes deceitful on her own. She has character depth and development, and so do her friends. Furthermore, all the characters are distinct and recognizable based on their personalities. The story develops smoothly, even if the start is a tad cheesy. The sequence of events is logical and makes sense. There aren't any ridiculous plot holes, although it can be a little confusing when characters constantly change forms. The setting takes place in a xianxia world where spirit foxes have their own community and schools. Humans also have their own cities. Other creatures aren't to be neglected either. Each party has their own objectives, relationships, past histories, and so on. As the MC explores this new world, so do we as the readers. Overall, this series is a hidden gem and a delight to read.
I just recently discovered this story while searching for new novels to read and I love it so far! The writing quality is very good; it's much better than other novels I've read on the platform. The story development is pretty interesting, I can't wait to see where the story goes. The world background is also good; I can't wait to discover more about the world in the story. Although I wish we got a little bit more story about other species in the beginning, however, it seems that we will get more as the story progresses. Overall I love the story, I hope it gets more attention, and I can't wait for more~!! (PS: I like the fun questions at the end of the chapters) Round of applaud for the author 👏👏👏
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honestly really enjoying this so far, one recommendation is longer chapters, other than that its great really loving it. keep up the great work!
Sua história merece o prêmio feito de platina é excelente cheia de aventura, mistério, um personagem inteligente e calmo e cheia de interação, fico me perguntando se ela pode criar asas com a manipulação das sombras e incrível. E você criou uma personagem de inteligente,calma, misteriosa , e Super forte
Found this completely new book out of nowhere! Don't even know where to start haha~ The way you format the system makes it neat and easy to read! The plot is also very interesting so far! Can't wait to see where this goes :)
are you still working on this or has this been canceled if your still alive.
I love this book it was answer.... IDK y u stopped writing but I hope u start it again really soon it's awesome and sucks just to end it just like that and not give a proper ending and all that.
what's goin with this book it's awesome and now just stopped. if your not going to keep going the take it down so ppl don't get to like it and then you just leave them without anything!
hello my name is daruto adeyemi i am a new reader so when you continue please make their be no locked chapter thank you for listening bye bye
i really love this novel and I'm sure I'm not the only one. Can you PLEASE PLEASE update i realy love the story line . im in love with the main character
This is a fun and exciting adventure/action/fantasy story featuring a teenage girl who is reborn as a magical fox and begins to live her new life. Although the writing is a little awkward in the beginning and the MC comes across as over-excitable, the writing improves quickly, and the MC matures. She is naive at first due to being a child in a new world with no experience of her own, but she learns quickly and becomes deceitful on her own. She has character depth and development, and so do her friends. Furthermore, all the characters are distinct and recognizable based on their personalities. The story develops smoothly, even if the start is a tad cheesy. The sequence of events is logical and makes sense. There aren't any ridiculous plot holes, although it can be a little confusing when characters constantly change forms. The setting takes place in a xianxia world where spirit foxes have their own community and schools. Humans also have their own cities. Other creatures aren't to be neglected either. Each party has their own objectives, relationships, past histories, and so on. As the MC explores this new world, so do we as the readers. Overall, this series is a hidden gem and a delight to read.
I just recently discovered this story while searching for new novels to read and I love it so far! The writing quality is very good; it's much better than other novels I've read on the platform. The story development is pretty interesting, I can't wait to see where the story goes. The world background is also good; I can't wait to discover more about the world in the story. Although I wish we got a little bit more story about other species in the beginning, however, it seems that we will get more as the story progresses. Overall I love the story, I hope it gets more attention, and I can't wait for more~!! (PS: I like the fun questions at the end of the chapters) Round of applaud for the author 👏👏👏
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honestly really enjoying this so far, one recommendation is longer chapters, other than that its great really loving it. keep up the great work!
Sua história merece o prêmio feito de platina é excelente cheia de aventura, mistério, um personagem inteligente e calmo e cheia de interação, fico me perguntando se ela pode criar asas com a manipulação das sombras e incrível. E você criou uma personagem de inteligente,calma, misteriosa , e Super forte
Found this completely new book out of nowhere! Don't even know where to start haha~ The way you format the system makes it neat and easy to read! The plot is also very interesting so far! Can't wait to see where this goes :)
are you still working on this or has this been canceled if your still alive.