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Almighty Bloodline System!
4.36 (14 peringkat)
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Xenon is an orphan, he was found in a jungle. Xenon is an absolute trash with a weak body and was bullied and abused by those his age. He was bullied because of his lame and useless ability. He has the ability to change his eye color to crimson red.
But not until he was on his verge of death, a crimson panel appeared right in front of him.
[Kill and eat it, and if failed you're going to die with in 0.03 Second]
[Do you accept?]
[Yes | No]
Witness as this young man, unlocks the true identity of his Bloodline.
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If you're into systems with a dash of action and lovable characters then this your next favorite book! An incredible portrayal of the world with detailed character personas and story-telling; Uncomplicated systems descriptions that are easy to understand and interpret; And an endless amount of plot development to keep you coming back for more. I truly enjoyed reading this, can't wait for more!
the book is worth the read, the revised chapter is way better that the last one, hoping for more update, and by the way i really like the new Cover! it can attract more readers! keep up the good work author :)
The story is good overall even though we only have 8 chaps have some good potential and there are only few grammatical errors and most importantly EXPP
random review!! the novel itself is very interesting, the flow is super smooth although there are small errors but you can work that, but its worth the read guys!
Isn’t this like a plagiarized version of The Bloodline System? Anyone who has read the two will be able to instantly tell Why don’t you try being original, I mean create a novel based on your own idea.
I'm at chapter 11 and these are my thoughts character design 2.5 l I'm sticking with that for one reason the main character and Jared these character`s are so dumb apes look like advanced civilizations and the other characters have not shown much personality but it feels like it would with some time, now to elaborate on how dumb they are ill pick 2 examples 1-when he unlocks the system and gets monarchies cloak, after like 2 days of ownership HE SELLS IT FOR 100,000, AND THE WORST PART IS THE BUYER IMMEDIATELY AGREES HOW COULD THAT NOT TIP HIM OFF it's WORTH MORE THAN YOUR GETTING ANY WHY WOULD YOU SELL IT 2- in the first chapter there is this guy named Jared he antagonizes the mc for no reason and is not shown hurting others, it seemed forced but he could be slightly fixed by showing him bully other students so it didn't look like a reverse plot armor move world background 3- not much yet but hopefully its good story development 3.5- it's actually pretty good forgetting how dumb the mc is and Jared updates ??? unclear haven't checked Writing design 2- it's fine but suffers from being slightly bland and the mc and Jared. in conclusion, the mc is a dumb baboon in human skin with its young master descendent Jared everything else is fine except they're a bit bland as its the start but it has a lot of potential and i will come back after there are more chapters
Amazing Storu with Amazing system. i've read 5 chapters and i like the story so far. i somehow believe that this novel has the potential to satisfy my apetite.
A very intriguing piece of work. I would definitely recommend this. The characters seem three dimensional and well fleshed out. The storyline is original and thought provoking. I enjoyed reading this and I plan to share it with others.
i love it. It's sooo friggin good. the best i have read in a while. the update schedule could go up, but go at your own pace. If you're still revising, then just go at your own pace. Anyways just keep going its good
A little twick with the grammar and the story would be amazing! Over all the story progress is smooth and along with the friendly system. Keep up the good work author!!!
The title is intriguing already. First chapter is interesting enough to make the readers read more. I didn't spot any grammatical errors. The synopsis is also interesting. Readers would like to read more of this, especially it has system-like plot.
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Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right? I hope you guys like this novel, it's my first time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws. Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing. I hope you all have a wonderful day!