What Was I Thinking?

LV 1

caliel_tempest

I like how the author portrays the thoughts of the main character, the setting is good and the plot keeps getting better as the chapters pass. Keep it up!

LV 1

Lancee

The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.

LV 3

dominators_touch

The story seems interesting and promising, hope you don't mess it up........................................................................

LV 2

BatBatBatman

good

LV 2

lon_okami

Bruh I love this story so much. I wasn't expecting that sort of development all of a sudden but I'm loving it. Don't stop writing. Now, as for your writing, there is room for improvement but other than that this story is pretty great 🍀

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