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My only question is why is Hatsune Miku on the front cover if it has nothing to do with her?
Loved the storyline[img=recommend] Excited to read the story of the quirky, sweet girl who is present in everyone, someway or the other[img=update]
I'm in awe! Especially with the writings. That's always the first thing that I notice whenever I read a story and urs r great. I love the simple narration but descriptive enough to conjure an image in my head. The other thing I love about your story is the world building, ofc. I can see the effort that you put in, cos even the name of the places don't sound like sth tht you randomly chose. But, the best part is I appreciate the additional details like the alchemy and magic. The brief analogy you provided in chapter 3 give a good enough explanation to at least guess how they work in ur story. Keep up the good work! <3
This novel has a good plot line and they do take great care to showcase the MC's personality. My only comment is that the writing style gives off a very young vibe as in it matches a YA novel? If you're okay with the style then the novel will be good for you!
Uwu... very nice story... now I miss my grandma too... I love how the story move.not to fast not to slow.. The way it was written is so smooth...and i love how you describe things.. so jealous.. haha.. have a hard time doing that... well.. goodluck, author..
Really love how this story started off with a lighthearted tone. I like how the thing with her being an unwanted child was delivered in a lighter blow, it made the narration stay at the calm flow until the end. Anyway, the novel is a must read and I can't wait for Red's story to unfold.
I really like this story so far! Red is cheeky, and I absolutely love how much she cares for her Nana. I also like how you explain that Alchemy is science. The writing style is amazing. It’s very descriptive without having info dumps, which is hard to balance sometimes, but this author did an amazing job! Keep it up author! This is staying in my library😁
The cuteness of the character made me stay, yes I liked the story and no doubt it is well written, I liked it a lot, I will follow to see the future development.
Woow, personally, I love those who cares for their family. And your mc is such a character. She is too cute, I just wanna squish her cheeks. Plot wise, the book is great. Keep it up.
I absolutely enjoyed it, I feel refreshed top to bottom, I perfectly loved the actions being portrayed by the characters in the story, I recommend this book, Keep it up author, Kudos to you!
When you search for a good romance story, this is what you find. I love it midnight. Keep freaking going! This book has everything. Love. Also, keep the plot.
A beautifully written story with a unique female protagonist. I am into royalty and romance so I immediately went ahead and read the book. The story is great so far. Also, best wishes for the author WSPAS 2021
All the Grannie's girl's raise your hands. !!!!!!! [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend] The story line is so great. I love everything about this book. I'm in love
A charming story that's well written and well paced. Quality: veryepic. World Background: although it felt a bit in-your-face, with the servants trying their best to explain the magic and alchemy, it still sounded very interesting to explore. I hope the author does a great job of expanding on the magic, since I love hard magic systems very much. And they can also get very tricky, so please be careful of breaking the balance of things. But judging from the title and the genre, the novel will prob more focus on the romance aspect, so maybe magic will be just a nice little flair to the character development. Character: Red's introduction is done in such a clear and uncomplicated way, while hinting at some other troubles and details that might come in the future, like her issues with her parents... you can't really ask for anything more. I'm still early in the story, so I can't really say anything about the other charas though. Story development. I've only read the setup chaps so I can't say much here either, sowwy. But it's going on a nice pace for now, so there's that.
The MC is a lovable character, she would make you want to learn more about her, especially when she mentions her nana. As a grandma girl I became hooked. Love, love, love!
5/5!! This book is just wonderful, for lack of a better word. the only downside to it is the lack of chapters. GIVE ME MORE!!! I won't go and spoil the contents, so go READ IT!!! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
Superbe!!! A surprisingly well-written gem. I love the Red character; she reminds me of a little rabbit sometimes...maybe it's the name. I don't know why, lol. Personality is one of the biggest points of any story, and you definitely nailed it as the story continues to get richer the more you dive in, making you smile the more you see her interact with those around her. Aside from that, there are some grammar errors but nothing is lost but rather gain as you will cramp up from smiling reading each chapter. (^///^)
Liked the story so far, could sympathize with the characters, especially Red early on. Good she had her Nana. Grammar's also good, could see the author trying to create something cool. Would say to also describe sceneries the way characters are described, that'll give the book a new dimension. Good work author.
This novel is interesting and refreshing! I like how you develop the characters and how your narrate it! Looking forward for more exciting chapters! Nice work, author!
The author has chosen a fresh and unique concept for the story, and I must say she had done incredibly well at portraying it. It is quite easy to picture the scenes as we read. Now, I am curious about Red and her father, who does not seem to be normal. Also, I am curious about what awaits Andrew. Definitely a good read. Thank you author for such an amazing book.
5/5 ~(=^‥^)ノ☆ It is a very interesting story! V(=^･ω･^=)v Well-written, scenes are described properly, and the mood for each scene is appropriate and well-thought of! |n＾ω＾|η Great job author! =( ^>w< ^)=
this is so interesting! the characters and wonderfully written and i will say no more! the 5 stars speaks so much! lovely novel, best of luck dear author! looking forward for this novel to rise up!
Reading the story really consumes your time without you realizing how much time you already read it. 3 Chapters passed by as if they were nothing because the flow of the story is workd out very well. For the character, i like Red so far and it sounds like she's a young, maybe a bit naive but pure and kind woman who gets dragged into more that she can understand with her simplicity of life.
A lovely book!! The way the author writes has an air of magic and mystery about it- the story was easy and compelling to read, and I found it pretty easy to get hooked! I enjoyed the plot twists and how the story developed, and the author has a great skill of mixing the characters thoughts with the narration, which really adds depth and flow to the story. The main character is really strong, though I think maybe some more detailed description is needed for some of the side characters. I found it hard to visualise them as they were often only mentioned in passing. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this! It was light, refreshing, and well crafted! Good job
An interesting concept. I never read something like this in webnovel and even if there is, I haven't find a book about it. It's nice to have a new theme/idea in the platform. Keep up the good work author!
Membuka SPOILER
Loved it! This was a pretty refreshing story and I loved the MCs interactions with the other characters. I can't wait to see how this all plays out in the next chapters. Keep it up!
This is such a refreshing story! The narration and the world building are so good that I easily got hooked. Red is such a bubbly and cute character, and I am excited to know more about her and her life in the coming chapters. There are more interesting details here, so I recommend this to the readers. Keep doing a great job, dear author! ^^
The author has a good amount of creativity and credibility in what she writes. It was easy to the eye. I only read the first three chapters so can't tell much about the plot. I like the synopsis, it promises what the writer is trying to deliver, what you expect from the book without reading it. So the readers don't have to read 20 chapters to understand what the story is about. so my advice is if you don't like the synopsis don't read the book, I don't know if the author would agree with me...
So far, so good! Honestly speaking, this is the best romance thus far I have read in webnovel. I'm not even kidding. I'm in the middle of my class right now while flicking through the pages, and I love it! I will continue reading this soon~ 100/100 (5 stars aren't enough to rate this novel!)
I love this story. I have been looking for a good story to read I this one is definitely in my top 3. It has such a good background. I hope for it to continue.
My only question is why is Hatsune Miku on the front cover if it has nothing to do with her?
Loved the storyline[img=recommend] Excited to read the story of the quirky, sweet girl who is present in everyone, someway or the other[img=update]
I'm in awe! Especially with the writings. That's always the first thing that I notice whenever I read a story and urs r great. I love the simple narration but descriptive enough to conjure an image in my head. The other thing I love about your story is the world building, ofc. I can see the effort that you put in, cos even the name of the places don't sound like sth tht you randomly chose. But, the best part is I appreciate the additional details like the alchemy and magic. The brief analogy you provided in chapter 3 give a good enough explanation to at least guess how they work in ur story. Keep up the good work! <3
This novel has a good plot line and they do take great care to showcase the MC's personality. My only comment is that the writing style gives off a very young vibe as in it matches a YA novel? If you're okay with the style then the novel will be good for you!
Uwu... very nice story... now I miss my grandma too... I love how the story move.not to fast not to slow.. The way it was written is so smooth...and i love how you describe things.. so jealous.. haha.. have a hard time doing that... well.. goodluck, author..
Really love how this story started off with a lighthearted tone. I like how the thing with her being an unwanted child was delivered in a lighter blow, it made the narration stay at the calm flow until the end. Anyway, the novel is a must read and I can't wait for Red's story to unfold.
I really like this story so far! Red is cheeky, and I absolutely love how much she cares for her Nana. I also like how you explain that Alchemy is science. The writing style is amazing. It’s very descriptive without having info dumps, which is hard to balance sometimes, but this author did an amazing job! Keep it up author! This is staying in my library😁
The cuteness of the character made me stay, yes I liked the story and no doubt it is well written, I liked it a lot, I will follow to see the future development.
Woow, personally, I love those who cares for their family. And your mc is such a character. She is too cute, I just wanna squish her cheeks. Plot wise, the book is great. Keep it up.
I absolutely enjoyed it, I feel refreshed top to bottom, I perfectly loved the actions being portrayed by the characters in the story, I recommend this book, Keep it up author, Kudos to you!
When you search for a good romance story, this is what you find. I love it midnight. Keep freaking going! This book has everything. Love. Also, keep the plot.
A beautifully written story with a unique female protagonist. I am into royalty and romance so I immediately went ahead and read the book. The story is great so far. Also, best wishes for the author WSPAS 2021
All the Grannie's girl's raise your hands. !!!!!!! [img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=exp][img=recommend] The story line is so great. I love everything about this book. I'm in love
A charming story that's well written and well paced. Quality: veryepic. World Background: although it felt a bit in-your-face, with the servants trying their best to explain the magic and alchemy, it still sounded very interesting to explore. I hope the author does a great job of expanding on the magic, since I love hard magic systems very much. And they can also get very tricky, so please be careful of breaking the balance of things. But judging from the title and the genre, the novel will prob more focus on the romance aspect, so maybe magic will be just a nice little flair to the character development. Character: Red's introduction is done in such a clear and uncomplicated way, while hinting at some other troubles and details that might come in the future, like her issues with her parents... you can't really ask for anything more. I'm still early in the story, so I can't really say anything about the other charas though. Story development. I've only read the setup chaps so I can't say much here either, sowwy. But it's going on a nice pace for now, so there's that.
The MC is a lovable character, she would make you want to learn more about her, especially when she mentions her nana. As a grandma girl I became hooked. Love, love, love!
5/5!! This book is just wonderful, for lack of a better word. the only downside to it is the lack of chapters. GIVE ME MORE!!! I won't go and spoil the contents, so go READ IT!!! (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*.✧
Superbe!!! A surprisingly well-written gem. I love the Red character; she reminds me of a little rabbit sometimes...maybe it's the name. I don't know why, lol. Personality is one of the biggest points of any story, and you definitely nailed it as the story continues to get richer the more you dive in, making you smile the more you see her interact with those around her. Aside from that, there are some grammar errors but nothing is lost but rather gain as you will cramp up from smiling reading each chapter. (^///^)
Liked the story so far, could sympathize with the characters, especially Red early on. Good she had her Nana. Grammar's also good, could see the author trying to create something cool. Would say to also describe sceneries the way characters are described, that'll give the book a new dimension. Good work author.
This novel is interesting and refreshing! I like how you develop the characters and how your narrate it! Looking forward for more exciting chapters! Nice work, author!
The author has chosen a fresh and unique concept for the story, and I must say she had done incredibly well at portraying it. It is quite easy to picture the scenes as we read. Now, I am curious about Red and her father, who does not seem to be normal. Also, I am curious about what awaits Andrew. Definitely a good read. Thank you author for such an amazing book.
5/5 ~(=^‥^)ノ☆ It is a very interesting story! V(=^･ω･^=)v Well-written, scenes are described properly, and the mood for each scene is appropriate and well-thought of! |n＾ω＾|η Great job author! =( ^>w< ^)=
this is so interesting! the characters and wonderfully written and i will say no more! the 5 stars speaks so much! lovely novel, best of luck dear author! looking forward for this novel to rise up!
Reading the story really consumes your time without you realizing how much time you already read it. 3 Chapters passed by as if they were nothing because the flow of the story is workd out very well. For the character, i like Red so far and it sounds like she's a young, maybe a bit naive but pure and kind woman who gets dragged into more that she can understand with her simplicity of life.
A lovely book!! The way the author writes has an air of magic and mystery about it- the story was easy and compelling to read, and I found it pretty easy to get hooked! I enjoyed the plot twists and how the story developed, and the author has a great skill of mixing the characters thoughts with the narration, which really adds depth and flow to the story. The main character is really strong, though I think maybe some more detailed description is needed for some of the side characters. I found it hard to visualise them as they were often only mentioned in passing. Overall, I really enjoyed reading this! It was light, refreshing, and well crafted! Good job
An interesting concept. I never read something like this in webnovel and even if there is, I haven't find a book about it. It's nice to have a new theme/idea in the platform. Keep up the good work author!
Membuka SPOILER Loved it! This was a pretty refreshing story and I loved the MCs interactions with the other characters. I can't wait to see how this all plays out in the next chapters. Keep it up!
This is such a refreshing story! The narration and the world building are so good that I easily got hooked. Red is such a bubbly and cute character, and I am excited to know more about her and her life in the coming chapters. There are more interesting details here, so I recommend this to the readers. Keep doing a great job, dear author! ^^
The author has a good amount of creativity and credibility in what she writes. It was easy to the eye. I only read the first three chapters so can't tell much about the plot. I like the synopsis, it promises what the writer is trying to deliver, what you expect from the book without reading it. So the readers don't have to read 20 chapters to understand what the story is about. so my advice is if you don't like the synopsis don't read the book, I don't know if the author would agree with me...
So far, so good! Honestly speaking, this is the best romance thus far I have read in webnovel. I'm not even kidding. I'm in the middle of my class right now while flicking through the pages, and I love it! I will continue reading this soon~ 100/100 (5 stars aren't enough to rate this novel!)
I love this story. I have been looking for a good story to read I this one is definitely in my top 3. It has such a good background. I hope for it to continue.