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The story was utterly amazing. There were a few grammatical errors but not many. The story was very well thought out and it has been my favorite book so far. Amazing job author, I hope you make more books like this.❤️❤️
The story was simply amazing. The characters were powerful but not invisible, which only made it more real. There were so many twists in the story that had me on the edge of the seat. I loved it. I recommend it to everyone. The ending was fantastic. I mean I really thought it was a tragedy for a second. Great job writer.
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(Sorry. I posted my review a couple days ago but I guess it didn't go through.) I love the storyline. I love it because it wasn't the typical over-powered mafia leader. The main guy felt real and human versus the other typical unrealistic type who were supposed to be god-like. He's human so of course he gets hurt, he has a weakness, and we got to understand his feelings. I felt more attracted to him than any other romantic mafia-related book because of his realistic abilities.
I love the detailed description the author uses, will applaud her for that it's amazing. I love the plot and the way Marie's life changed after meeting the criminal it's amazing, am so obsessed with this novel
The book cover is pretty cute and the title is interesting. This book is written very good. It's a pretty cute teen romance story that is making you hook when reading. I love it! Keep writing!!!
This is such a breath of fresh air from all those CEO and mafia leader romance thingy. I love author's new approach on making the ML an assassin in action instead, a legit criminal, rather than a wowza (big shot). This add more realistic element into it without being too realistic. The writing style itself is already nice. Though there maybe some part being a little awkward, overall it is a great read. A very light reading and entertaining. This is definitely the book you're looking for if you want a relax read after working all day! Keep up the good work, Author!
Do you remember the feeling when you eat your favorite flavor ice cream on a lazy Saturday afternoon? That is what it feels like when you read this story. The classic written so skillfully and sharply, this story will give any Mills and Boons story a run for their money. Wayyy above 10 stars. Possibly the best web novel romance I read so far. The writing is par excellence. Sentences flow smoothly like honey. You feel the immediate spark between the SC and Marie. And oh boy, they are such great characters. I would not spoil it, go find for yourself lol. The best part is it already has 90 chapters, so I have a large chunk of chapters that I can binge on now. Really fortunate that I came across this story. Thank you so much, author. I cannot wait to see the love blossoming between SC and Marie.
Had never read a Teen Romance like this before (ㆁωㆁ) Though I wasn't that far ahead yet, I could tell that the storytelling was quite absorbing. There are the emotions, the mood and the atmosphere - nicely described. Writing quality can still be improved along the way, but since I have not read that much yet, I think that the start is good enough (✿^‿^) The plot is intriguing, and the character leads appear to have a good chemistry. Interesting even (≧▽≦) Overall, this can be such a fun read! Great work completing it, author!
This is fantastic 👏 great job author 😶😶 this is a brilliant piece of writing a story that revolved around a criminal and a teenage girl 💃🤗
This story is so good, I just started reading it and I'm already in love with the writing style and how the characters are drawn. It's well written as well, the story seems so be developing quite nicely, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is finished work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️
Okay i really recommend this book. I am going to be honest it is a little long but it is so worth it. I was on tears is some of it and super excited in other parts. It has a bit of everything, action, romance, tragedy, and even sin. I loved it. Couldn't stop reading it. The amount of twists were unbelievable and had me at the edge of my seat. [img=coins]
I enjoyed your novel author, keep it up. Looking forward to read more novels written by you, the main characters was awesome, this is a good read
The story was utterly amazing. There were a few grammatical errors but not many. The story was very well thought out and it has been my favorite book so far. Amazing job author, I hope you make more books like this.❤️❤️
The story was simply amazing. The characters were powerful but not invisible, which only made it more real. There were so many twists in the story that had me on the edge of the seat. I loved it. I recommend it to everyone. The ending was fantastic. I mean I really thought it was a tragedy for a second. Great job writer.
Membuka SPOILER (Sorry. I posted my review a couple days ago but I guess it didn't go through.) I love the storyline. I love it because it wasn't the typical over-powered mafia leader. The main guy felt real and human versus the other typical unrealistic type who were supposed to be god-like. He's human so of course he gets hurt, he has a weakness, and we got to understand his feelings. I felt more attracted to him than any other romantic mafia-related book because of his realistic abilities.
I love the detailed description the author uses, will applaud her for that it's amazing. I love the plot and the way Marie's life changed after meeting the criminal it's amazing, am so obsessed with this novel
The book cover is pretty cute and the title is interesting. This book is written very good. It's a pretty cute teen romance story that is making you hook when reading. I love it! Keep writing!!!
This is such a breath of fresh air from all those CEO and mafia leader romance thingy. I love author's new approach on making the ML an assassin in action instead, a legit criminal, rather than a wowza (big shot). This add more realistic element into it without being too realistic. The writing style itself is already nice. Though there maybe some part being a little awkward, overall it is a great read. A very light reading and entertaining. This is definitely the book you're looking for if you want a relax read after working all day! Keep up the good work, Author!
Do you remember the feeling when you eat your favorite flavor ice cream on a lazy Saturday afternoon? That is what it feels like when you read this story. The classic written so skillfully and sharply, this story will give any Mills and Boons story a run for their money. Wayyy above 10 stars. Possibly the best web novel romance I read so far. The writing is par excellence. Sentences flow smoothly like honey. You feel the immediate spark between the SC and Marie. And oh boy, they are such great characters. I would not spoil it, go find for yourself lol. The best part is it already has 90 chapters, so I have a large chunk of chapters that I can binge on now. Really fortunate that I came across this story. Thank you so much, author. I cannot wait to see the love blossoming between SC and Marie.
Had never read a Teen Romance like this before (ㆁωㆁ) Though I wasn't that far ahead yet, I could tell that the storytelling was quite absorbing. There are the emotions, the mood and the atmosphere - nicely described. Writing quality can still be improved along the way, but since I have not read that much yet, I think that the start is good enough (✿^‿^) The plot is intriguing, and the character leads appear to have a good chemistry. Interesting even (≧▽≦) Overall, this can be such a fun read! Great work completing it, author!
This is fantastic 👏 great job author 😶😶 this is a brilliant piece of writing a story that revolved around a criminal and a teenage girl 💃🤗
This story is so good, I just started reading it and I'm already in love with the writing style and how the characters are drawn. It's well written as well, the story seems so be developing quite nicely, I can't wait to read the rest of it.
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is finished work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️
Okay i really recommend this book. I am going to be honest it is a little long but it is so worth it. I was on tears is some of it and super excited in other parts. It has a bit of everything, action, romance, tragedy, and even sin. I loved it. Couldn't stop reading it. The amount of twists were unbelievable and had me at the edge of my seat. [img=coins]
I enjoyed your novel author, keep it up. Looking forward to read more novels written by you, the main characters was awesome, this is a good read