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Good potential hope you not dropped. The mc was good but let see more ...............................................................................
You have a story with very good potential, and so far entertaining, the only problem I see is that you do not focus when writing, you have many stories started and many more abandoned, I hope you give this a chance and dedicate your time, can become one of the best on the page
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Хорошая новела с интересной идеей,предыстортей и необычным сюжетом, стоит потерпеть корявый перевод от гугл-переводчика ради этой истории .
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Good potential hope you not dropped. The mc was good but let see more ...............................................................................
You have a story with very good potential, and so far entertaining, the only problem I see is that you do not focus when writing, you have many stories started and many more abandoned, I hope you give this a chance and dedicate your time, can become one of the best on the page
don't drop good story. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. ... ....... .. ........ ..... ... . . . . . .. . . . .. .. .. .
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Dude this is about spartans, the greatest force there was! if you don't like and subscr-wait wrong thing...uhm...if you don't stone the author....what that's not it either...give the author support for his amazing work....yeah that sounds better
Хорошая новела с интересной идеей,предыстортей и необычным сюжетом, стоит потерпеть корявый перевод от гугл-переводчика ради этой истории .