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i havent read this yet but im not sure if i should i hate the harem genre so much but people are saying is good so ill give a 3 for now and if its good ill change it
Good story, translation is a bit off at some points and the translators constant patron ads are kinda annoying as they take up a large amount of every chapter.
Achei esse livro incrível acho que está muito bom o livro é longo porém não cansativo oque eu achei legal de você conseguir fazer bem escrito com um inglês incrível mesmo eu tendo encontrado um ou dois erros de ortografia
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Te doy 5 estrellas porque me a gustado bastante la historia y como los uchihas probablemente se salven de su destrucción y como Minato y Kushina siguen vivos
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Usually, I hate Chinese novels, especially fanfics, because they suck. However, I'm not that narrow minded to not even give them a chance. And I'm so glad that I gave this one a chance. This is clearly the best. And I mean that literally. This is the best Naruto fanfic ever created. After finding it here, I found the raw version and just recently finished reading it, I loved it. It was amazing.
hallow thor, I come from Indonesia, honestly I really like your fanfic novel, which I think is interesting and good, and every word is funny, and I hope this novel will continue unlike other novels that stop in the middle of the road.. and I have a suggestion. .. it would be nice to skip a few years of thor so that I can quickly enter/go to another world
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5/5 for translation. 3/5 for OG story. I directly skipped chapters about system items. And only read story focused chapters. Currently at chapter 76, its good so far
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Aku memberikan 2 power stone untuk cerita ini! Menurutku pembangunan karakter Makoto sudah sangat baik. Yang benar-benar harus diwaspadai adalah perubahan plot sebelum kanon sudah terlalu banyak, artinya walaupun setiap arc kanon masih bisa digunakan, perubahan yang substansial masih akan tetap terjadi. Pra kanon seperti penculikan Hinata tidak akan menjadi relevan karena Konoha masih sangat kuat sekarang. Dengan membaiknya hubungan Uchiha dan desa, Shisui tidak perlu mati, Itachi tidak perlu bergabung dengan Akatsuki dan jelas Sasuke akan demotivasi karena tidak perlu membalas dendam (padahal dalam kanon Sasuke menarik semua string plot). Dan mungkin masih banyak lagi. Tapi justru ini yang membuatku tertarik dengan perkembangan cerita, bagaimana penulis akan mengembangkan plot kedepannya.
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I'll be honest this is probably a few couples of good naruto fanfic out there that not messing up the timeline. The translation is alright, although there are some minor mistakes regarding the name and stuff. But, it doesn't affect the quality of the story.
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So.. the story is good definitely one of the best naruto fics out there. 'Translation' quality was good at beginning but after like 50 chapters I started seeing some mtl leftovers (not that I care about that so much but as someone who read some mtled novels it's kinda annoying to see translator remembering his readers about 4682 patreon tiers every single chapter if he might just be copying google translated raws and pasteing them here.) I love the system present in this story since it's well balanced. MC can get coins & item components (like in Teamfight Tactics) from killing ninjas and use them to create/buy items that would boost him. He also occasionaly gets quests and some interesting rewards from them that doesn't make him too OP. Sadly like one of the many chinese novels this one also lacks any good romance (even if mc x mei is kinda flagged) I would gladly appreciate link to the raws..
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i havent read this yet but im not sure if i should i hate the harem genre so much but people are saying is good so ill give a 3 for now and if its good ill change it
Good story, translation is a bit off at some points and the translators constant patron ads are kinda annoying as they take up a large amount of every chapter.
Achei esse livro incrível acho que está muito bom o livro é longo porém não cansativo oque eu achei legal de você conseguir fazer bem escrito com um inglês incrível mesmo eu tendo encontrado um ou dois erros de ortografia
More pls.~~~[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Usually, I hate Chinese novels, especially fanfics, because they suck. However, I'm not that narrow minded to not even give them a chance. And I'm so glad that I gave this one a chance. This is clearly the best. And I mean that literally. This is the best Naruto fanfic ever created. After finding it here, I found the raw version and just recently finished reading it, I loved it. It was amazing.
hallow thor, I come from Indonesia, honestly I really like your fanfic novel, which I think is interesting and good, and every word is funny, and I hope this novel will continue unlike other novels that stop in the middle of the road.. and I have a suggestion. .. it would be nice to skip a few years of thor so that I can quickly enter/go to another world
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5/5 for translation. 3/5 for OG story. I directly skipped chapters about system items. And only read story focused chapters. Currently at chapter 76, its good so far
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Aku memberikan 2 power stone untuk cerita ini! Menurutku pembangunan karakter Makoto sudah sangat baik. Yang benar-benar harus diwaspadai adalah perubahan plot sebelum kanon sudah terlalu banyak, artinya walaupun setiap arc kanon masih bisa digunakan, perubahan yang substansial masih akan tetap terjadi. Pra kanon seperti penculikan Hinata tidak akan menjadi relevan karena Konoha masih sangat kuat sekarang. Dengan membaiknya hubungan Uchiha dan desa, Shisui tidak perlu mati, Itachi tidak perlu bergabung dengan Akatsuki dan jelas Sasuke akan demotivasi karena tidak perlu membalas dendam (padahal dalam kanon Sasuke menarik semua string plot). Dan mungkin masih banyak lagi. Tapi justru ini yang membuatku tertarik dengan perkembangan cerita, bagaimana penulis akan mengembangkan plot kedepannya.
😂 🤣😊 😇 🙂 🙃 😉 😌 😍😘 😗 😙 😚 😋 😛😝 😜 🤨 🧐 🤓 🤓 😎🤩😏 😀 😃 😄 😁 😆 😆 😅👋🏻 🤚🏻 🖐🏻 ✋🏻 🖖🏻 👌🏻✌🏻 🤞🏻 🤟🏻 🤘🏻 🤙🏻 👈🏻 👉🏻 👆🏻 🖕🏻 👇🏻 ☝🏻 👍🏻 👎🏻 ✊🏻 👊🏻 🤛🏻 🤜🏻 👏🏻 🙌🏻 👐🏻 🤲🏻 🙏🏻
Membuka SPOILER I'll be honest this is probably a few couples of good naruto fanfic out there that not messing up the timeline. The translation is alright, although there are some minor mistakes regarding the name and stuff. But, it doesn't affect the quality of the story.
(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)(✯ᴗ✯)
So.. the story is good definitely one of the best naruto fics out there. 'Translation' quality was good at beginning but after like 50 chapters I started seeing some mtl leftovers (not that I care about that so much but as someone who read some mtled novels it's kinda annoying to see translator remembering his readers about 4682 patreon tiers every single chapter if he might just be copying google translated raws and pasteing them here.) I love the system present in this story since it's well balanced. MC can get coins & item components (like in Teamfight Tactics) from killing ninjas and use them to create/buy items that would boost him. He also occasionaly gets quests and some interesting rewards from them that doesn't make him too OP. Sadly like one of the many chinese novels this one also lacks any good romance (even if mc x mei is kinda flagged) I would gladly appreciate link to the raws..
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Will it really good one i want to see it's end.. ................................................. .................................................
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