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this is good 5/5 except translations in 3/5 ...................................................................................................................
This should be taken down. The translator changed so many parts from the raws. It looks like they created a new novel with the same characters. This is not translating, this should be called changing the plot.
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there is almost nothing of substance to this book, the main character has not a single bit of development (at least in the first 10 chapters), it is an awefull MTL, and because of that most of the story just strait up doesn't make sense. the only positive is the concept, and that is very unfortunate.
this started okay but i am disappointed as the story continue. There are characters that were abandoned like his only maybe soon to be love interest. Well just read it and you well feel the same as I am (maybe).
Idk, the story was like ehh, but at the same time, why do I feel like I read this story before even though I didn't read this story before? Well, it's an okay novel for light reading, but if you are a picky reader, it really isn't that great of a book and the plot is way too inconsistent
please dont drop this as it us an awsome novel and it is very good so please dont drop it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Honestly I like the premise of the novel, but the writing or editing is terrible. There are large inconsistencies in timelines, and there seems to be missing chapters,even early on in the novel (less then 75 chapters). Until they fix these problems im dropping this novel.
Good at the start, starting to drop when it touches the "mysterious organization" (spooky wooooo). Also at some point of time, the battle start to be stretched for more word counts (I guess), the battle that should be easy after MC power up when he encounters them 2nd time still took long time to resolve with twist, then twist, oh another twist, twist again, and few more times before its done. :D Characters, well MC kinda have personality problem even at the start when he first time killing fellow human, he don't feel anything, no process of 'justified himself' or any reasoning with his mind to calm him down at his first time killing human, its just 'oh you want to rob me, I kill you' done. Imo "William" have better character personality, cause he express his emotion and the like, while MC emotional scenes are way less than "William" emotional outburst. I skipped chapters till ch 507 but along the way the MC expression still the same, I mean its hard to emphasize if there is nothing to emphasize to begin with.
I don't recommend this story for those who will read iit! ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ for first this story was really good but after it reach the chapter 50+ the translation become worse and there's a lot of plot holes and after it 100+ chapter he sacrificed his own pet for his own gain and willing to sacrifice his own dignity for the sake of gold chest "succubus".
you need 15 to 20 chapters to kill one enemy....boring man its to long..make it short..and waste reader time to much.....first you make mc easily handle enemy later it become harder...give us peace
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I read up to about chapter 150 or so. I truly enjoyed the concept. You have a mixture of survival, gaming, crafting, and a system. What could go wrong? The first few times the MC dug into a new chamber it was interesting. He would get some new items, fight some monsters, level up and upgrade... but by the time you have him going into the 50th, 60th, 70th chamber it gets mind numbingly boring and repetitive. The only thing that changes is the monster's name and maybe the skills he uses. You can even consider each chamber as a separate story and episodic section that happens in 1 or 2 chapters at a time that is self contained and doesn't really affect the plotline of the story other than be the mechanism for him to get new items.
really unbearable, good at start then falls later, there are many things to point at but I'm tired of this. ohhh one last thing to add. YOU CAN BASICALLY READ THE ENTIRE NOVEL JUST BY THE CHAPTER TITLES.
what happened to the Earth Dragon Nest around 58? The meat was made for the insects, and then nothing. It moved onto training and nothing came of the nest. Not to mention the issue with the Sand Troll. Not enough details. Made it seem that he set a trap then somehow reentered the catacombs he set the trap in. I can't read it like this. Sorry, this is one of the few books I have to drop. I'd love to continue reading, but not like this.
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I really like the story, its right up my alley but I'm struggling . the struggle is how the story has evolved into very extensively long 10 to 15 chapter battles. remember dragonballz and the powering up that lasted 3 episodes? It feels like that at times. I still like it, but just having to push through it.
The idea of the story caught my attention a lot I found it amazing and interesting! Items, companion animals. The stone woman, I laughed. The character's growth I thought was good, until he started fighting the first overlords in the world. It ended up getting too strong...after this event, I pushed myself to read another 100 chapters, to see if I would change my mind but it didn't interest me.
Brought straight to you by MTL. The quality is so bad to the point that a toddler can do better. The story has some potential, if you don't think so much about everything and enjoying the journey. It's kinda good mixture of adventure theme and game theme. Since you didn't get to know anything about who the mc is neither his goal, the character design has nothing to mention. It gave me the same feeling as I randomly open a MMORPG steaming where the steamer is farming loots. I dropped it, and not recommend this thing.
At first the story went as expected, but after the ch where players had to move to the lv 2 world, the story went against the title and the synopsis, which I quite enjoyed. But after the transfer to the 2 world, personally for me, the story started to go down hill, going against the title and synopsis in the process so I hope the story will go to it's original digging related storyline...
the story started fine and I was insanely interested but after around chapter 40 or so it just took a nise dive and is very confusing to read.
Good novel but it gets a bit repetitive sometimes.............................. ........... .... ....................... ...................
This is definitely an enjoyable read that has a lot of potential but author if you are reading this, please Stop spoiling the chapters with the titles, it takes Away from the suspense and leaves nothing to be a surprise.
This story generally speaking has too many broken moments in grammar and syntax count of certain statics or facts... I believe it fails to translate in English properly.
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A system help the MC, like a veteran gamer, do every little thing. The MC seems like smart person but we can't appreciate that as the system won't shut TF up. I don't like evil MC, personally, but for other it's seems he gonna be a shellfish MF.
First off most if not all of the issues I have might be entirely because of the "translator"/editor. There is very poor grammar, spelling and entire sections of the raw missing. I have reached chapter 170 but have decided to drop it because of these issues. As far as character growth there is none so far. As far as world building their are minimal hints as it so far.
i previously wrote a review at how disappointed i was because after chapter 50 there were a ton of mistakes and a really good story was screwed im guessing it had to do with the translator. but after sticking with it for another 15-20 chapters it seems to be back on track!!!!
a lot of missing paragraphs, approximately 5 paragraphs missing per chapter. too many grammatical errors and wrong translations. translator should just kill himself. pure useless trash
this is good 5/5 except translations in 3/5 ...................................................................................................................
This should be taken down. The translator changed so many parts from the raws. It looks like they created a new novel with the same characters. This is not translating, this should be called changing the plot.
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there is almost nothing of substance to this book, the main character has not a single bit of development (at least in the first 10 chapters), it is an awefull MTL, and because of that most of the story just strait up doesn't make sense. the only positive is the concept, and that is very unfortunate.
this started okay but i am disappointed as the story continue. There are characters that were abandoned like his only maybe soon to be love interest. Well just read it and you well feel the same as I am (maybe).
Idk, the story was like ehh, but at the same time, why do I feel like I read this story before even though I didn't read this story before? Well, it's an okay novel for light reading, but if you are a picky reader, it really isn't that great of a book and the plot is way too inconsistent
please dont drop this as it us an awsome novel and it is very good so please dont drop it 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Honestly I like the premise of the novel, but the writing or editing is terrible. There are large inconsistencies in timelines, and there seems to be missing chapters,even early on in the novel (less then 75 chapters). Until they fix these problems im dropping this novel.
Good at the start, starting to drop when it touches the "mysterious organization" (spooky wooooo). Also at some point of time, the battle start to be stretched for more word counts (I guess), the battle that should be easy after MC power up when he encounters them 2nd time still took long time to resolve with twist, then twist, oh another twist, twist again, and few more times before its done. :D Characters, well MC kinda have personality problem even at the start when he first time killing fellow human, he don't feel anything, no process of 'justified himself' or any reasoning with his mind to calm him down at his first time killing human, its just 'oh you want to rob me, I kill you' done. Imo "William" have better character personality, cause he express his emotion and the like, while MC emotional scenes are way less than "William" emotional outburst. I skipped chapters till ch 507 but along the way the MC expression still the same, I mean its hard to emphasize if there is nothing to emphasize to begin with.
I don't recommend this story for those who will read iit! ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................ for first this story was really good but after it reach the chapter 50+ the translation become worse and there's a lot of plot holes and after it 100+ chapter he sacrificed his own pet for his own gain and willing to sacrifice his own dignity for the sake of gold chest "succubus".
you need 15 to 20 chapters to kill one enemy....boring man its to long..make it short..and waste reader time to much.....first you make mc easily handle enemy later it become harder...give us peace
Membuka SPOILER I read up to about chapter 150 or so. I truly enjoyed the concept. You have a mixture of survival, gaming, crafting, and a system. What could go wrong? The first few times the MC dug into a new chamber it was interesting. He would get some new items, fight some monsters, level up and upgrade... but by the time you have him going into the 50th, 60th, 70th chamber it gets mind numbingly boring and repetitive. The only thing that changes is the monster's name and maybe the skills he uses. You can even consider each chamber as a separate story and episodic section that happens in 1 or 2 chapters at a time that is self contained and doesn't really affect the plotline of the story other than be the mechanism for him to get new items.
really unbearable, good at start then falls later, there are many things to point at but I'm tired of this. ohhh one last thing to add. YOU CAN BASICALLY READ THE ENTIRE NOVEL JUST BY THE CHAPTER TITLES.
what happened to the Earth Dragon Nest around 58? The meat was made for the insects, and then nothing. It moved onto training and nothing came of the nest. Not to mention the issue with the Sand Troll. Not enough details. Made it seem that he set a trap then somehow reentered the catacombs he set the trap in. I can't read it like this. Sorry, this is one of the few books I have to drop. I'd love to continue reading, but not like this.
Membuka SPOILER pwahahaha hahahahahahsahahahsay hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha hahaha
I really like the story, its right up my alley but I'm struggling . the struggle is how the story has evolved into very extensively long 10 to 15 chapter battles. remember dragonballz and the powering up that lasted 3 episodes? It feels like that at times. I still like it, but just having to push through it.
The idea of the story caught my attention a lot I found it amazing and interesting! Items, companion animals. The stone woman, I laughed. The character's growth I thought was good, until he started fighting the first overlords in the world. It ended up getting too strong...after this event, I pushed myself to read another 100 chapters, to see if I would change my mind but it didn't interest me.
Brought straight to you by MTL. The quality is so bad to the point that a toddler can do better. The story has some potential, if you don't think so much about everything and enjoying the journey. It's kinda good mixture of adventure theme and game theme. Since you didn't get to know anything about who the mc is neither his goal, the character design has nothing to mention. It gave me the same feeling as I randomly open a MMORPG steaming where the steamer is farming loots. I dropped it, and not recommend this thing.
At first the story went as expected, but after the ch where players had to move to the lv 2 world, the story went against the title and the synopsis, which I quite enjoyed. But after the transfer to the 2 world, personally for me, the story started to go down hill, going against the title and synopsis in the process so I hope the story will go to it's original digging related storyline...
the story started fine and I was insanely interested but after around chapter 40 or so it just took a nise dive and is very confusing to read.
Good novel but it gets a bit repetitive sometimes.............................. ........... .... ....................... ...................
This is definitely an enjoyable read that has a lot of potential but author if you are reading this, please Stop spoiling the chapters with the titles, it takes Away from the suspense and leaves nothing to be a surprise.
This story generally speaking has too many broken moments in grammar and syntax count of certain statics or facts... I believe it fails to translate in English properly.
[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp
A system help the MC, like a veteran gamer, do every little thing. The MC seems like smart person but we can't appreciate that as the system won't shut TF up. I don't like evil MC, personally, but for other it's seems he gonna be a shellfish MF.
First off most if not all of the issues I have might be entirely because of the "translator"/editor. There is very poor grammar, spelling and entire sections of the raw missing. I have reached chapter 170 but have decided to drop it because of these issues. As far as character growth there is none so far. As far as world building their are minimal hints as it so far.
i previously wrote a review at how disappointed i was because after chapter 50 there were a ton of mistakes and a really good story was screwed im guessing it had to do with the translator. but after sticking with it for another 15-20 chapters it seems to be back on track!!!!
a lot of missing paragraphs, approximately 5 paragraphs missing per chapter. too many grammatical errors and wrong translations. translator should just kill himself. pure useless trash