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an interesting plot but needs editing. It's like a chess board with both teams playing white.
MC is very stupid, he sells the company's shares without even researching before, he easily believes in roberth, he could hack the cameras and see if he was cheated but he doesn't do it, the work begins by saying that he is a genius of technology but it is stupid that yes
It's an interesting story with a lot of intrigue, but it feels more like a Chinese novel with mid-level translation rather than an original fanfic written for this site. (just saying it feels like this) Overall grammer is pretty frustrating and its also pretty annoying about how much back-stabbing is going on. Its still really nice, but you have to interested in cloak and dagger business to like it.
Well.. there is alot of spelling and grammar mistakes which makes reading the story difficult , Other than that its all good................
La mejor novela que yo leí, espero que actualices pronto. Estoy acompañando la novela por patreon y esta yendo muy bien espero que nos dejes de escribirla.
Dude if it's possible give us the link of the other novel, A magician in search of the truth .
an interesting plot but needs editing. It's like a chess board with both teams playing white.
MC is very stupid, he sells the company's shares without even researching before, he easily believes in roberth, he could hack the cameras and see if he was cheated but he doesn't do it, the work begins by saying that he is a genius of technology but it is stupid that yes
It's an interesting story with a lot of intrigue, but it feels more like a Chinese novel with mid-level translation rather than an original fanfic written for this site. (just saying it feels like this) Overall grammer is pretty frustrating and its also pretty annoying about how much back-stabbing is going on. Its still really nice, but you have to interested in cloak and dagger business to like it.
Well.. there is alot of spelling and grammar mistakes which makes reading the story difficult , Other than that its all good................
La mejor novela que yo leí, espero que actualices pronto. Estoy acompañando la novela por patreon y esta yendo muy bien espero que nos dejes de escribirla.
Dude if it's possible give us the link of the other novel, A magician in search of the truth .