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awful everything, world is one dimensional, characters are one dimensional, plot is forced into a direction where it doesn't need to go, mc is unreasonable.
yooo... are you still alive????are you still alive man.............................................are you still alive....
Siendo sincero... La historia es genial, a veces un poco forzada pero sigue siendo genial, realmente no te molestes por los que no les gusta tanto. Además no es como que se les haya ocurrido crear una combinación de mundos así, el MC es un personaje que pues a lo que percibí está roto. Pero es increíble estaré esperando los capítulos siguientes.
Membuka SPOILER
There will be an update?... the story is really good for the fan of RWBYand other connected series. . . a bit too much women in the Harem (a bit forced) but enjoyable in the reading. . . there will be a possible new travel on MonsterHunter world? after DoomSlayer obviously!?!
Gracias al autor por existir y gracias por crear esta historia está genial y es el mejor fanfic que e leído eres grande autor esperaré con ansias el siguiente cap :D
If I could give you less than 1 star I'd do it in an instant this is one of the worst fanfic I have ever read
Im just happy you are back!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................................................................................................
as someone who reads regularly on this site I enjoy lots of the books but I can't read anything with such terrible writing quality
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No me importó que perdonara a su familia, porque simplemente se manejó mal, pero el protagonista es malvado y realmente no puedo entrar en eso. Por alguna razón, pensé que ya había revisado esto, pero no estaba allí.
I really like the book. It has been almost a month since the last update so I can only how the story has not been dropped. Please continue to make more chapters.
Great book that I would love to continue. I would also like to support said book but I don't make enough to even begin to support it. Author you write great books and I would love if you continued to do so.
It was fine to read. So i wanted to write a short review but i need more words. Still need more words. Mm mmm mmmmmm mmmm mmm mm mm mmm mmm mmm
Excelente fanfic que recomiendo mucho , todo es muy entretenido e interesante ( ignoren los primeros 2-3 capitulos dónde todo parece demasiado forzado , mejora mucho después de eso ) es increíble la construcción del reino. La única queja en mi opinión sería los demasiados puntos de vista en momentos buenos de la historia u algunos errores en las palabras. Pero todo lo demás excelente 💪👍🤙
The kingbuild and crossover aspects are really well done, even the OCs are growing on me. I would enjoy a smaller harem, though, with less relationships each with more "screen time". But since weiss is too cute with her broken/brocon mind I can look past it. My fav rwby ff and top 3 overall ff
Love the story!! Better plots, better characters, better development all over!! Writings needs a few work and bam* We got the best RWBY fanfic.. [[Just a question for thought :- Why didn't you add the knowledge relic (which is a jinn in lamb that can answer three questions for a century and have many knowledge or very knowledgeable) in the library (royal library?) where this relic may show some kind of usefulness?
this is how much I can give after reading more than 300 chapter's, every character here has background and personalities which may be laking in other fanfictions. though sometimes because of size of the cast you may forget one and another character but that's okay, in a week expect atleast 1 chapter. though chapter's could be marked with * near their name if they are lewd
Membuka SPOILER
I like the story and the way multiverse is being introduce but I the only problem of mc is him being to subservient to girls and like if they just offer their self to him even if he knows that they just want something from him just accept. He is also a bit hypocrite saying he loves his family but just accept any girls even if their time is shorten in meet up.
Honestly I think it's a good story. but contains lot of mature content and female/male hypocrysy (what ever it mean what you are thinking). now back to comment don't read it if you want to maintain a healthy mindset and is on no fap November.
Good worth a read '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''’'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''’''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
The start is a bit rough but after the family drama its good so yeah,the mc is not good nor evil he can kill if needed,he's also a king(made his own kingdom,also family>kingdom),the mc also doesnt act like a virgin who hasnt seen seen a woman,He's op.Also pretty nice kingdombuilding(im no expert but i enjoyed it)also its multiverse/multicross(?)
The author's writing style is weird. Author combines other worlds to the story, and the result is a confusing story. The #Harry Potter tag is an exaggeration, it should be removed. Another important point is MC, he has a feminine face and body. Add tag: #Mc boy girly #MC trap
This is not HP fanfick. There is very minimal amount of HP lore and style here. Author butchered anything that resemblet HP style. MC is OP and its cringe ... you can feel forcefullnes of mc in everything he do. Forced plot and relly pointless. Nathing is explained well its all as if author writed from his head without any planing.
I liked the novel . this is a good work . But i wnna ask is this going to be updated anytime soon . its been a year since its updated. when is it goona update. tell me i am excited to see new chapters
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awful everything, world is one dimensional, characters are one dimensional, plot is forced into a direction where it doesn't need to go, mc is unreasonable.
yooo... are you still alive????are you still alive man.............................................are you still alive....
Siendo sincero... La historia es genial, a veces un poco forzada pero sigue siendo genial, realmente no te molestes por los que no les gusta tanto. Además no es como que se les haya ocurrido crear una combinación de mundos así, el MC es un personaje que pues a lo que percibí está roto. Pero es increíble estaré esperando los capítulos siguientes.
Membuka SPOILER There will be an update?... the story is really good for the fan of RWBYand other connected series. . . a bit too much women in the Harem (a bit forced) but enjoyable in the reading. . . there will be a possible new travel on MonsterHunter world? after DoomSlayer obviously!?!
Gracias al autor por existir y gracias por crear esta historia está genial y es el mejor fanfic que e leído eres grande autor esperaré con ansias el siguiente cap :D
If I could give you less than 1 star I'd do it in an instant this is one of the worst fanfic I have ever read
Im just happy you are back!!!!!!!!!! ..................................................................................................................................................................................
as someone who reads regularly on this site I enjoy lots of the books but I can't read anything with such terrible writing quality
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Goog GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD Good GOOD
No me importó que perdonara a su familia, porque simplemente se manejó mal, pero el protagonista es malvado y realmente no puedo entrar en eso. Por alguna razón, pensé que ya había revisado esto, pero no estaba allí.
I really like the book. It has been almost a month since the last update so I can only how the story has not been dropped. Please continue to make more chapters.
Great book that I would love to continue. I would also like to support said book but I don't make enough to even begin to support it. Author you write great books and I would love if you continued to do so.
It was fine to read. So i wanted to write a short review but i need more words. Still need more words. Mm mmm mmmmmm mmmm mmm mm mm mmm mmm mmm
Excelente fanfic que recomiendo mucho , todo es muy entretenido e interesante ( ignoren los primeros 2-3 capitulos dónde todo parece demasiado forzado , mejora mucho después de eso ) es increíble la construcción del reino. La única queja en mi opinión sería los demasiados puntos de vista en momentos buenos de la historia u algunos errores en las palabras. Pero todo lo demás excelente 💪👍🤙
The kingbuild and crossover aspects are really well done, even the OCs are growing on me. I would enjoy a smaller harem, though, with less relationships each with more "screen time". But since weiss is too cute with her broken/brocon mind I can look past it. My fav rwby ff and top 3 overall ff
Love the story!! Better plots, better characters, better development all over!! Writings needs a few work and bam* We got the best RWBY fanfic.. [[Just a question for thought :- Why didn't you add the knowledge relic (which is a jinn in lamb that can answer three questions for a century and have many knowledge or very knowledgeable) in the library (royal library?) where this relic may show some kind of usefulness?
this is how much I can give after reading more than 300 chapter's, every character here has background and personalities which may be laking in other fanfictions. though sometimes because of size of the cast you may forget one and another character but that's okay, in a week expect atleast 1 chapter. though chapter's could be marked with * near their name if they are lewd
Membuka SPOILER I like the story and the way multiverse is being introduce but I the only problem of mc is him being to subservient to girls and like if they just offer their self to him even if he knows that they just want something from him just accept. He is also a bit hypocrite saying he loves his family but just accept any girls even if their time is shorten in meet up.
Honestly I think it's a good story. but contains lot of mature content and female/male hypocrysy (what ever it mean what you are thinking). now back to comment don't read it if you want to maintain a healthy mindset and is on no fap November.
Good worth a read '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''’'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''’''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''
The start is a bit rough but after the family drama its good so yeah,the mc is not good nor evil he can kill if needed,he's also a king(made his own kingdom,also family>kingdom),the mc also doesnt act like a virgin who hasnt seen seen a woman,He's op.Also pretty nice kingdombuilding(im no expert but i enjoyed it)also its multiverse/multicross(?)
The author's writing style is weird. Author combines other worlds to the story, and the result is a confusing story. The #Harry Potter tag is an exaggeration, it should be removed. Another important point is MC, he has a feminine face and body. Add tag: #Mc boy girly #MC trap
This is not HP fanfick. There is very minimal amount of HP lore and style here. Author butchered anything that resemblet HP style. MC is OP and its cringe ... you can feel forcefullnes of mc in everything he do. Forced plot and relly pointless. Nathing is explained well its all as if author writed from his head without any planing.
I liked the novel . this is a good work . But i wnna ask is this going to be updated anytime soon . its been a year since its updated. when is it goona update. tell me i am excited to see new chapters