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You literally made an entire chapter about a the main character not wanting to bow down to any authority and I'm not even exaggerating the very next chapter he bows down and accepts to be a shield agent made me drop the fic entirely
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it's a great story and I can't wait to see the end.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
the story starts to get boring after chapter 20. I can't stand the nonsense school drama. I liked the first 17 chapters a lot but after 22 I think I won't keep reading it.
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One of the best MCU fanfic out there. Good character development and MC is not a wannabe hero behind avengers. Great fanfic!!! Upload it more author
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the only problem is missile is spelled wrong and also its either as mission or as missal...its annoying me lol .......................................................................................
It’s a good read, just need ya to have a updating schedule or somthing like that
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I was gonna complain about the updates but the story covered up for it I was gonna rate truthfully............……………….............................................. AND I DID!!!!😍
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ok so I suck at writing reviews but here is what I will say, the story is amazing it's an interesting twist on a MCAU story. the mc is very likable despite him being an edge lord (the good kind like sauske) the story build up is nice and all in all it's a pretty amazing story. the update stability is sorta slow but that's ok it's better than getting drowned in chapters. the background is also good it's somewhat descriptive but when it comes to the characters the description is very good.
I love this Fan-Fic and I love the author his writing quality is better than other Fan-Fics and the frequency of the updates is great. The story is somewhat different than the other fics which is great so thank you author for writing this 😊.
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Binge_review Writing Quality: 4/5. Biased cuz I am not a big fan of 1st person pov. Imo, 3rp person pov gives more space for us to write and makes the story more engaging, however, every author has his own style. Not complaining. Stability Of Updates: 5/5. Regular updates is what everyone wants. Story Development: 4.5/5. The story pacing is alright. We are only at chapter 18, so not much can be said, but yeah, I have high hopes from this fanfic. Character Design: 4/5. This is the only thing that I think needs improvement. I know you want a cold OP Mc, but I would recommend using more vocabulary(?) and go with 'show, not tell' approach (cutting the guards in two halves is not enough.) World Background: 5/5. There's no point in giving lower rating in this part. Marvel is like the ocean and this fanfic is a cruise. It's up to you, as the author, to sail through this, and it's up to us to enjoy our time. final thoughts: I read that you are going to make changes in the timeline. I only hope that things don't get entangled. Playing with timeline in fanfics is risky because the chances of plot holes is very high. Overall: 4.6/5 Thank you for this fanfic. You are doing a great job.
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You literally made an entire chapter about a the main character not wanting to bow down to any authority and I'm not even exaggerating the very next chapter he bows down and accepts to be a shield agent made me drop the fic entirely
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it's a great story and I can't wait to see the end.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
the story starts to get boring after chapter 20. I can't stand the nonsense school drama. I liked the first 17 chapters a lot but after 22 I think I won't keep reading it.
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One of the best MCU fanfic out there. Good character development and MC is not a wannabe hero behind avengers. Great fanfic!!! Upload it more author
Need more. Getting interesting. Need more. Getting interesting.Need more. Getting interesting.Need more. Getting interesting.Need more. Getting interesting.
the only problem is missile is spelled wrong and also its either as mission or as missal...its annoying me lol .......................................................................................
It’s a good read, just need ya to have a updating schedule or somthing like that
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I was gonna complain about the updates but the story covered up for it I was gonna rate truthfully............……………….............................................. AND I DID!!!!😍
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ok so I suck at writing reviews but here is what I will say, the story is amazing it's an interesting twist on a MCAU story. the mc is very likable despite him being an edge lord (the good kind like sauske) the story build up is nice and all in all it's a pretty amazing story. the update stability is sorta slow but that's ok it's better than getting drowned in chapters. the background is also good it's somewhat descriptive but when it comes to the characters the description is very good.
I love this Fan-Fic and I love the author his writing quality is better than other Fan-Fics and the frequency of the updates is great. The story is somewhat different than the other fics which is great so thank you author for writing this 😊.
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Cool NICE AND I THINK IT’S THE ONLY THING I NEED IS A LITTLE MORE EXPENSIVE TO GET A HOLD ON THE OTHER THINGS I NEED FOR A LITTLE MORE TO HELP YOU GET IT DONE BEFORE YOU GO OUT AND GET A NEW CONVERSATION AND I WILL BE ABLE YOU CAN MAKE A LITTLE BIT MORE MONEY AND I CAN SEE IT ON MY WAY HOME FROM THE STORE I HAVE A LITTLE MORE MONEY I NEED YOU A LITTLE MORE THAN YOU DO IT I CAN SEE IT ON THE BACK PORCH FOR THE DAY AND THE NEXT ONE THAT YOU WOULD HAVE A LOT MORE THAN YOU
this is some advanced confusion crap geammar mumbo jumbo with selective reading where you just ignore and move past the $%\^| .
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Binge_review Writing Quality: 4/5. Biased cuz I am not a big fan of 1st person pov. Imo, 3rp person pov gives more space for us to write and makes the story more engaging, however, every author has his own style. Not complaining. Stability Of Updates: 5/5. Regular updates is what everyone wants. Story Development: 4.5/5. The story pacing is alright. We are only at chapter 18, so not much can be said, but yeah, I have high hopes from this fanfic. Character Design: 4/5. This is the only thing that I think needs improvement. I know you want a cold OP Mc, but I would recommend using more vocabulary(?) and go with 'show, not tell' approach (cutting the guards in two halves is not enough.) World Background: 5/5. There's no point in giving lower rating in this part. Marvel is like the ocean and this fanfic is a cruise. It's up to you, as the author, to sail through this, and it's up to us to enjoy our time. final thoughts: I read that you are going to make changes in the timeline. I only hope that things don't get entangled. Playing with timeline in fanfics is risky because the chances of plot holes is very high. Overall: 4.6/5 Thank you for this fanfic. You are doing a great job.