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sungguh, ayolah author, lanjutkan cerita novelmu ini, novelmu sangat menarik dengan menceritakan tentang sang MC berpetualang 2 dunia fantasi, dan kesan saya diawal sampe bab terakhir bukannya bosan malag semakin penasaran
Cerita sungguh menarik antara One Piece terselip cerita Naruto di masa lalu-nya. Cerita tidak terlalu monoton seperti fanfinc lain-nya, ini bagus terutama cerita sudah seperti mengikuti canon tapi tidak terlalu merubah cerita asli-nya sehingga tidak terlalu memaksakan (God job thor)😁
Ohh hell yeah! more good novel!! Bro this novel soo good for me and by the way dont drop this fucking good novel ok!! I'm support you bro!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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sungguh, ayolah author, lanjutkan cerita novelmu ini, novelmu sangat menarik dengan menceritakan tentang sang MC berpetualang 2 dunia fantasi, dan kesan saya diawal sampe bab terakhir bukannya bosan malag semakin penasaran
Cerita sungguh menarik antara One Piece terselip cerita Naruto di masa lalu-nya. Cerita tidak terlalu monoton seperti fanfinc lain-nya, ini bagus terutama cerita sudah seperti mengikuti canon tapi tidak terlalu merubah cerita asli-nya sehingga tidak terlalu memaksakan (God job thor)😁
Ohh hell yeah! more good novel!! Bro this novel soo good for me and by the way dont drop this fucking good novel ok!! I'm support you bro!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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