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There are some small grammer errors but nothing you cant look past. its a pretty good fanfic otgerwiae keep up the good work.
Am I the only one who was thinking of a game of thrones fanfic from the title. By the way, I like the story..............................................
nice! I like the idea and changes u made. Im hoping for interesting things to happen. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This really good I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the new character and thank you for make him have an actual personality and I liked the think with the sister. I hope you are better <3
Ty, Great story keep it up ..............................................................................................................................
so far it's absolutely phenomenal I love the lion theme (funnily enough I've always said that klaus reminds me of a lion), and I think that it's a dope idea no one uses lions, because of short stamina, and tend to go with a tiger since it's practically the apex predator (**** everyone who disagrees I believe the only animal which can kill a tiger efficiently is a grizzly bear) But I've always loved lions so I'd like to see where you take this
There are some small grammer errors but nothing you cant look past. its a pretty good fanfic otgerwiae keep up the good work.
Am I the only one who was thinking of a game of thrones fanfic from the title. By the way, I like the story..............................................
nice! I like the idea and changes u made. Im hoping for interesting things to happen. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This really good I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the new character and thank you for make him have an actual personality and I liked the think with the sister. I hope you are better <3
Ty, Great story keep it up ..............................................................................................................................
so far it's absolutely phenomenal I love the lion theme (funnily enough I've always said that klaus reminds me of a lion), and I think that it's a dope idea no one uses lions, because of short stamina, and tend to go with a tiger since it's practically the apex predator (**** everyone who disagrees I believe the only animal which can kill a tiger efficiently is a grizzly bear) But I've always loved lions so I'd like to see where you take this