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I hope you're doing well author! I will continue to wait for updates on this gorgeously written story 🥹
ahh the world building to the characters and the story is just so amazing and the author really does an fantastic job of painting the picture for you. the characters are engaging ans pull you in and the story is really fun and makes you want to continue! I love everything about this story and can't wait to read more! I hope the author continues 🙏 I will be waiting eagerly!
I read a lot of fanfiction so my opinions may be a bit biased. If you've read a lot of fanfiction I'm sure you'd agree, but fanfiction can be of a very poor quality. Compared to most of what I've read in my life this is of a pretty high quality. I personally love this story, the dialog is solid and by that I mean it feels like plausible human conversation. The pacing isn't atrocious or wacky in any way I can discern. Generally I can't find any problems pertaining to the novels quality. As for why I rate it so highly, I would have to leave that to my own personal interests pertaining to the story's premise as well as how invested I've become in the characters and plot.
If there was a higher rating I would have definitely given it, this is literal gold !! To fall in love with every single character is the biggest proof that the author knows how to play on the strings of our hearts!! Love this.
This story is truly fantastic and worthy of 5 stars. Usually stories are very predictable for me but this one took turns at every step and I found myself unable to put it down. It is interesting and engaging and I cant wait to see what happens next.
I absolutely love this book. The writing quality is on point. The story line quite interesting and most importantly the MC is absolutely delicious. On top of his game coupled with sass. While it may be a re occurring trope of bad guy meets good guy and does a 180 turn around, the characters are still quite engaging to give one a good read.
I can without a doubt say that there's nothing I wish was different in this novel. Why? Because the mind of the creator of this AMAZING, complex, fun, and not to mention CREATIVE web novel is just something else!! And the impeccable writing, grammar, and interesting characters are what add to the already amazing novel. I'm glad I stumbled upon this! This is a MUST-READ!
Fantastic, a really amazing piece of writing, the character development is amazing, world building great, grammar awesome, no complaints. The Author wasn't happy with how they continued after the Silisia arc, but I loved the pace and how it is progressing so far, if the author isn't happy with how good it is I can't wait to see what they do to it now. I eagerly await the new chapter, thanks for the great book
Ok love the new cover ,I was very confused when I found this in my library but anyways love it This book is honestly amazing ,I love the development though slow its refreshing and you don't get bored The mc is my favourite character...still have mixed feelings about the ml Anyway people should really give this book a chance,it will be worth your time
This book is amazing. I like all the characters here especially Red 😅😂😂😂 . I can't stop reading I laugh and cry here. The dialoges are so comic 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Okay, I've been sitting on the story for three days now to read through everything. Best novel I’ve read so far here. Great plot and many interesting characters. I'm looking forward to the future chapters! (I really can't describe how great I think the story is! ❤️)
It’s crazy cakes how much I like this. The characters make me laugh, cry, angry, worried. And the writing’s excellent in making that emotional connection.
I adore this book and characters. I love how the author always manages to take us to new directions and makes each arc more exiting than the other, while not loosing what binds it all together. The characters are hilarious and each a menace in their own way. The band of misfits that slowly grows feels like your own family. This novel feels like home 💜
Author here. I'm giving myself an honest 2.6 stars our of 5 because I think this is what I deserve. As mentioned by the glowing reviews I have received, I started out with a great plan for what I wanted to do with this novel. And I think I pulled that off till the Silisia arc. But from there, my story changed because I had so much happening in my life, and I wasn't left with the energy nor time to write. despite this, I forced myself to write because I felt bad for the readers who were waiting for more. As of Dec 2021, I don't like where I am at in my writing and this novel. I've taken two hiatuses to try and salvage my novel and get it back on track. I hope I can do better. Anyway, I think that you'll all enjoy the story till the Silisia arc so give it a try :) Thanks for checking out my book.
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Well I’m having the time of my life reading this novel. The dev is interesting the characters crazy, the plot fancy and the universe well built ! Reader if you like fantasy, cocky MC with a fool mouth and dark inner desires go for it
I love it, but sad to say I can't continue coz I need to pay 😭. It's so frustrating, I guess I have no choice but to pay. Salute to the author
Story about new life...our demon lord is realistic and smart person, who try to help other people, which he didnt meet or they passed in awful way. In contrast to other novels, in this on we can see that our MC is in love with hero from the beginning, but doesnt want to show his love. He lived a cruel life and hopes that everything will change.
Love all the characters and the story plot. Gives you all the fluff, all the angst, and all the nitty and gritty drama! Can’t wait to see how this amazingly, chaotic adventure ends!
okay I like how well fleshed out all the characters and how well they interact with one another within the story. but..not gonna lie, I did come here even after seeing the multiple potential love interest tag by the author, which was what's been putting me off for a while, but since I was running out of something to read, i decided to give it a try and oh boi... well, how the romance was set up really wasn't my cup of tea 🥲. Its a really good story but *sigh* should've listened to to the tags
A rare book that’s written so good and hard to find. Especially a story of a Demon Lord in love with his Hero. Writing Quality - It’s amazing! It feels so real, I can feel the character’s emotions, I can understand what each character is thinking and it feels like I’m connecting with them as the story progresses. Grammar is minimal and easily overlooked because it just gets you so hooked. Story Development - In the first half of the free chapters, the development is slow and consistent. But then the second half, it’s inconsistent and there are loopholes. Timeskips are confusing because the ages get mixed up. Otherwise the story unravels the characters, their relationships, and there’s good character development. Character Design - Each character is unique in their own way, they feel alive because each have their own opinions and feelings. I love every single character (except ones that are made to be hated). Although I admit that some things in the first half was morally grey in terms of Syryn’s age (12/13) and how he interacted with guys a few years older but because technically he’s 100+yrs older in the body of a 13yr old makes it morally grey. Nothing explicit happens thankfully but it’s heavily implied that there are romantic relationships in development. Around chapter 70+ I think Syryn is 17, nearing a legal adult age (18) so readers are already expecting development of many male leads or at least one of them. World Building - It’s very good. There’s much to learn still but we understand how dark and awful the world is and how the weak suffer so much. We also learn that there are still good people there for those who feel like the world is against them. It’s heartwarming but at the same time I like how the author maintains their original character when Syryn was a demon lord. Syryn doesn’t care much for humans and he doesn’t go out hurting them unless they absolute deserve it or to protect those he cares for. He is still a demon and he makes it fairly clear. Considering how many chapters this story has, I’m sure the world will only become bigger. TLDR; Worth the read! Some things may irk you a bit since it gets real dark at times.
Webnovel deleted this review so I'm putting it back where it belongs. I swear the filters are so sensitive. There's a list of words you shouldn't use in the comments or reviews. I'm putting the list in the synopsis.
I just stumbled upon this amazing work by accident and I am hooked by it just from the prologue. I really like how the story is just taking its time to develop along with the main character and not abruptly jumping from one scenario to another. The plot twist are nerve wracking and I find myself wanting more. This is a great novel, highly recommended. You did a fantastic job author 😁😁
u don't understand how OBSESSED i am with this book ; i'm at the point where i think about it 24/7 😫🤚 pls pls pleaaaaassse read it and pls pls pleaaaseee continue writing - i love your work author 💫💞
The only thing stopping me from vivi f this story the 5stars it deserves is Ryn. I mean, can he be anymore shameless? My goodness! He got the good looks that come with being a half demon, the killer looks I mean. He got the power.... He got the man, he ducking got a second chance and he is being human too!!!!!! What will the rest be left with if he takes the humanity award as well?
Membuka SPOILER
I really love this book! Not only are the chapters fast (like insanely fast, don't hurt yourself author) but the story is so gooooddd! Syryn is one of my most favorite characters, he's engaging, funny, so interesting. I find it so facsinating how the author weaves such complex layers in such a short amount of time yet the story remains funny. (Although the first chapter had me cry)
I absolutely adore this novel! The writing is fabulous and beautifully discriptive. Each character is full of life and just so well done. Even though i hate harems, i kept shipping all the second leads with the MC because i fell in love with each character. Almost a pity the MC will end up with only Rowan.
If I could give a million stars, you best believe I would. I have just started reading but I’m Immersed so deeply into the story I don’t know if I’ll be able to put my phone down. Truly amazing. The choice of words, flawless grammar, gripping conversations and seeping emotions, all give goosebumps and spark more and more interest. I once read a beautiful book called “The Song of Achilles” and it struck my heart with how much beauty and love there was between the two men, two best friends, soulmates. This series is striking the same accord right now. So very thankful to the author for sharing such a beautiful story ❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🏼
I hope you're doing well author! I will continue to wait for updates on this gorgeously written story 🥹
ahh the world building to the characters and the story is just so amazing and the author really does an fantastic job of painting the picture for you. the characters are engaging ans pull you in and the story is really fun and makes you want to continue! I love everything about this story and can't wait to read more! I hope the author continues 🙏 I will be waiting eagerly!
I read a lot of fanfiction so my opinions may be a bit biased. If you've read a lot of fanfiction I'm sure you'd agree, but fanfiction can be of a very poor quality. Compared to most of what I've read in my life this is of a pretty high quality. I personally love this story, the dialog is solid and by that I mean it feels like plausible human conversation. The pacing isn't atrocious or wacky in any way I can discern. Generally I can't find any problems pertaining to the novels quality. As for why I rate it so highly, I would have to leave that to my own personal interests pertaining to the story's premise as well as how invested I've become in the characters and plot.
If there was a higher rating I would have definitely given it, this is literal gold !! To fall in love with every single character is the biggest proof that the author knows how to play on the strings of our hearts!! Love this.
This story is truly fantastic and worthy of 5 stars. Usually stories are very predictable for me but this one took turns at every step and I found myself unable to put it down. It is interesting and engaging and I cant wait to see what happens next.
I absolutely love this book. The writing quality is on point. The story line quite interesting and most importantly the MC is absolutely delicious. On top of his game coupled with sass. While it may be a re occurring trope of bad guy meets good guy and does a 180 turn around, the characters are still quite engaging to give one a good read.
I can without a doubt say that there's nothing I wish was different in this novel. Why? Because the mind of the creator of this AMAZING, complex, fun, and not to mention CREATIVE web novel is just something else!! And the impeccable writing, grammar, and interesting characters are what add to the already amazing novel. I'm glad I stumbled upon this! This is a MUST-READ!
Fantastic, a really amazing piece of writing, the character development is amazing, world building great, grammar awesome, no complaints. The Author wasn't happy with how they continued after the Silisia arc, but I loved the pace and how it is progressing so far, if the author isn't happy with how good it is I can't wait to see what they do to it now. I eagerly await the new chapter, thanks for the great book
Ok love the new cover ,I was very confused when I found this in my library but anyways love it This book is honestly amazing ,I love the development though slow its refreshing and you don't get bored The mc is my favourite character...still have mixed feelings about the ml Anyway people should really give this book a chance,it will be worth your time
This book is amazing. I like all the characters here especially Red 😅😂😂😂 . I can't stop reading I laugh and cry here. The dialoges are so comic 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
Okay, I've been sitting on the story for three days now to read through everything. Best novel I’ve read so far here. Great plot and many interesting characters. I'm looking forward to the future chapters! (I really can't describe how great I think the story is! ❤️)
It’s crazy cakes how much I like this. The characters make me laugh, cry, angry, worried. And the writing’s excellent in making that emotional connection.
I adore this book and characters. I love how the author always manages to take us to new directions and makes each arc more exiting than the other, while not loosing what binds it all together. The characters are hilarious and each a menace in their own way. The band of misfits that slowly grows feels like your own family. This novel feels like home 💜
Author here. I'm giving myself an honest 2.6 stars our of 5 because I think this is what I deserve. As mentioned by the glowing reviews I have received, I started out with a great plan for what I wanted to do with this novel. And I think I pulled that off till the Silisia arc. But from there, my story changed because I had so much happening in my life, and I wasn't left with the energy nor time to write. despite this, I forced myself to write because I felt bad for the readers who were waiting for more. As of Dec 2021, I don't like where I am at in my writing and this novel. I've taken two hiatuses to try and salvage my novel and get it back on track. I hope I can do better. Anyway, I think that you'll all enjoy the story till the Silisia arc so give it a try :) Thanks for checking out my book.
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Well I’m having the time of my life reading this novel. The dev is interesting the characters crazy, the plot fancy and the universe well built ! Reader if you like fantasy, cocky MC with a fool mouth and dark inner desires go for it
I love it, but sad to say I can't continue coz I need to pay 😭. It's so frustrating, I guess I have no choice but to pay. Salute to the author
Story about new life...our demon lord is realistic and smart person, who try to help other people, which he didnt meet or they passed in awful way. In contrast to other novels, in this on we can see that our MC is in love with hero from the beginning, but doesnt want to show his love. He lived a cruel life and hopes that everything will change.
Love all the characters and the story plot. Gives you all the fluff, all the angst, and all the nitty and gritty drama! Can’t wait to see how this amazingly, chaotic adventure ends!
okay I like how well fleshed out all the characters and how well they interact with one another within the story. but..not gonna lie, I did come here even after seeing the multiple potential love interest tag by the author, which was what's been putting me off for a while, but since I was running out of something to read, i decided to give it a try and oh boi... well, how the romance was set up really wasn't my cup of tea 🥲. Its a really good story but *sigh* should've listened to to the tags
A rare book that’s written so good and hard to find. Especially a story of a Demon Lord in love with his Hero. Writing Quality - It’s amazing! It feels so real, I can feel the character’s emotions, I can understand what each character is thinking and it feels like I’m connecting with them as the story progresses. Grammar is minimal and easily overlooked because it just gets you so hooked. Story Development - In the first half of the free chapters, the development is slow and consistent. But then the second half, it’s inconsistent and there are loopholes. Timeskips are confusing because the ages get mixed up. Otherwise the story unravels the characters, their relationships, and there’s good character development. Character Design - Each character is unique in their own way, they feel alive because each have their own opinions and feelings. I love every single character (except ones that are made to be hated). Although I admit that some things in the first half was morally grey in terms of Syryn’s age (12/13) and how he interacted with guys a few years older but because technically he’s 100+yrs older in the body of a 13yr old makes it morally grey. Nothing explicit happens thankfully but it’s heavily implied that there are romantic relationships in development. Around chapter 70+ I think Syryn is 17, nearing a legal adult age (18) so readers are already expecting development of many male leads or at least one of them. World Building - It’s very good. There’s much to learn still but we understand how dark and awful the world is and how the weak suffer so much. We also learn that there are still good people there for those who feel like the world is against them. It’s heartwarming but at the same time I like how the author maintains their original character when Syryn was a demon lord. Syryn doesn’t care much for humans and he doesn’t go out hurting them unless they absolute deserve it or to protect those he cares for. He is still a demon and he makes it fairly clear. Considering how many chapters this story has, I’m sure the world will only become bigger. TLDR; Worth the read! Some things may irk you a bit since it gets real dark at times.
Webnovel deleted this review so I'm putting it back where it belongs. I swear the filters are so sensitive. There's a list of words you shouldn't use in the comments or reviews. I'm putting the list in the synopsis.
I just stumbled upon this amazing work by accident and I am hooked by it just from the prologue. I really like how the story is just taking its time to develop along with the main character and not abruptly jumping from one scenario to another. The plot twist are nerve wracking and I find myself wanting more. This is a great novel, highly recommended. You did a fantastic job author 😁😁
u don't understand how OBSESSED i am with this book ; i'm at the point where i think about it 24/7 😫🤚 pls pls pleaaaaassse read it and pls pls pleaaaseee continue writing - i love your work author 💫💞
The only thing stopping me from vivi f this story the 5stars it deserves is Ryn. I mean, can he be anymore shameless? My goodness! He got the good looks that come with being a half demon, the killer looks I mean. He got the power.... He got the man, he ducking got a second chance and he is being human too!!!!!! What will the rest be left with if he takes the humanity award as well?
Membuka SPOILER I really love this book! Not only are the chapters fast (like insanely fast, don't hurt yourself author) but the story is so gooooddd! Syryn is one of my most favorite characters, he's engaging, funny, so interesting. I find it so facsinating how the author weaves such complex layers in such a short amount of time yet the story remains funny. (Although the first chapter had me cry)
I absolutely adore this novel! The writing is fabulous and beautifully discriptive. Each character is full of life and just so well done. Even though i hate harems, i kept shipping all the second leads with the MC because i fell in love with each character. Almost a pity the MC will end up with only Rowan.
If I could give a million stars, you best believe I would. I have just started reading but I’m Immersed so deeply into the story I don’t know if I’ll be able to put my phone down. Truly amazing. The choice of words, flawless grammar, gripping conversations and seeping emotions, all give goosebumps and spark more and more interest. I once read a beautiful book called “The Song of Achilles” and it struck my heart with how much beauty and love there was between the two men, two best friends, soulmates. This series is striking the same accord right now. So very thankful to the author for sharing such a beautiful story ❤️❤️❤️❤️🙏🏼