A Possessive Mafia Leader

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NerdyBookworm_

I honestly don't know how there are so many good reviews on here. The grammar is awful, something I thought I would read past as there are some books that don't have amazing grammar but a good story line. But this made it very difficult to follow in some places, making me re read to see what character is speaking. The first couple of chapters basically repeat the synopsis of who each character is. It jumps from ML and FL pov but it just repeats what happens between them (which would have been fine I suppose IF it didn't just repeat using the same exact words what happened. So its just re reading what the previous chapter has been put except for their different days being the only difference) There are times that made me wonder if the author did research into the mafia world because from what I'd read (i think I made it to chapter 12) there weren't even 'soldiers' to do their dirty work. But anyway I don't want to keep ranting as I'm sure you will read it for yourselves.. but what threw me completely off from the story .. AFTER READING REVIEWS OF HOW REALISTIC THE STORY IS: Was how she suddenly felt she loved him. After one date .. a month apart of not seeing each other, the only thing he had been doing for such a 'possessive' man was texting and calling her in that time. But yeah that's my review. update stability .. well it's completed book. world background - yeah it's got the basics. All in all.. very disappointed

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lemone

Great story!!! I like the idea of mafias, they sound dangerous and condescending. the way the author writes the story was good, and how the story flows was perfect!! Good job author

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Web_Novel_977

Finally found a mafia romance novel. So happy🤭🤭🤭 The characters are really good. Czar and Siena, both are billionaires. 🤑 Eagerly waiting to read more chapters.

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Shianne_De_Kock

The synopsis is extremely interesting. Captivating story from the beginning, cant wait for more uploads. Characters are relatable and I grew fond of them as the story developed. Well written and easy to read. Excellent novel, well done. [img=recommend]

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catvi

The author is upfront about the character's shortcomings, especially the male leads. In most stories like these, authors portray the 'Male Yandere' characteristics as something good. Something doughy-eyed love-struck females crave for. Reality is different. Being stalked is terrifying, so is being blackmailed. The female lead's reactions are realistic and believable. Now with that disastrous start, I am curious as to how the female lead will fall for the male. Interesting is the least I can say.

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Fortheloveofbooks

The plot is good. The characters are all badass which makes it even better. I love how they relate. I love how the story is going and I can't wait to read more.

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BlaccLotus

A fascinating and quite well written story that I can't get enough of this book. The story line is so easy to follow and will trap you with its cliff hangers. I like author's style of writing, it's simple yet neat and very well written. This author updates regularly and has great characters design. As for the story, so far both leads are well described and the story is going to interesting direction. At first it's so easy to fall for Siena as she's really a sweet girl but I can't lie that in the beginning, I quite dislike the male lead from what he's introduced. But as the story goes, I'm beginning to like this Czar as actually he's not bad as I thought. In fact he's quite gentle and sweet when he's Siena. Overall it's really good reading experience and will continue see how the story is going. Dazzling five stars for your creative writing. Honestly I know it's extremely hard for new writers (us) to get easy recognition and decent exposure here in Webnovel, I hope you can write it to the very end. Best luck to you.

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Ken_5osuke

I Love how the main character keeps spamming his ability. I mean, that girl tho Hhahaha. Anyway, I love this novel. It's interesting to read :))))

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Sinadin

Just started the book and I'm loving it. Even though it isn't my cup of tea, this however still made me linger. The female lead's reactions are actually realistic and believable. Now with that dreadful start, I am interested as to how the female lead will fall for the male. Thrilling is the least I can say.

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foxyash

I loved the book...and it's my favourite category mafia...the book is very well written....the plot and characters are well developed. You have done a very good job.. definitely on my library... Kudos Author!

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Cass_Royal

This is a good book but the grammar is off and the story setting is pretty good all though Siena makes some non-smart deductions I thi k in my opinion his is a pretty good book!!!👍🏾

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Blessing_Ewetumo

This story is honestly so great and deserves all 5star ratings. I couldn't stop myself when I started reading it, and I just had to take a pause to drop this review. Highly recommend this to everyone, you should honestly check it out. You won't regret it.

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Glojade

Captivating storyline,I'm in love with the synopsis. An excellent writing skills.The first chapter started with a thrilling scene, it feeled me with exicting tention

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Aeipathy_02

A very intriguing novel. I feel so many thrills and excitement in shifts between povs within the female lead and male lead. The narratives too are very clear and cutting edge. The characters all have their own set of personas. Overall, this book is a great read. Greatly recommended to everyone! Great work author!

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ibbygal

Wow.. from the synopsis and the first few chapters I read, all I can say is Wow***w!!!!... I love the lead characters and the storyline is unique... I definitely recommend this one🖤🖤

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TheValQueen

Are You Kidding Me.....It Is So ****ing amazing that I fallen in love with it....The description of the male lead is giving me nose bleed while thinking about it....Dont Believe Me then check out this work I am sure you will all love it..

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maryamshairani

I think the way the characters are written is very fascinating! Especially the female lead, she has this great aura around her. Impressive! Keep up the good work! :)

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maddjadefantasies_

I think mafia stories are pretty steamy and interesting so needless to say your synopsis caught my attention immediately ! I love how descriptive you are with the characters. however as an honest reveiwer i must say there are a few grammar errors and gaps between dialogues, so if you correct them this story will be so much better 😌👏 I cant wait to see where this goes and Sienna is a strong female lead i’d love to see her progress. Go powerful female leads ! 🥳💪🏽💜👑

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Olive_Vashisht

The story revolves around the love -hate type of relationship where both the leads are rich and independent . the interesting thing is the female lead is quite strong with a possessive lover . Loving it so far . Definitely recommend it !!