Reincarnated Into A Transformer In Cybertron With A System

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GodsAre_Stupid

Hey guys, author here This is my first novel, so please bear with me. I will try updating it every day. I hope you can give some suggestions to improve my novel as I want the best for your guys. And... I HOPE YOU GUYS ENJOY MY BOOK!!!

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Storio

the best transformers fanfiction, continue ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Abyssal_CrabGOD

good idea hope it doesn't drop. wish you luck..............., ....',......., ........, ..............., ........_.........//&*>]...............

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Monolithian

Now i’ll be honest, despite the potential and Concept of using transformers “pre-war” is a truly great idea. It has quite a few issues aswell. Pros: 1. The concept is wonderful and clearly a hidden Gem. Cons: 1. Everything is basicly handed on a silver platter for the character. 2. The main character isn’t realistic in origin, skill and authority. 3. the character from what i can perceive a few chapters in is pretty much a “Mary Sue” *attention sucking blackhole with plot-armor as cherry on top* 4. Most of the other reviews doesn’t make any sense despite the full star votes and leads to a false impressions. Summary: great idea, poorly executed... Solution: Start with a somewhat humble or older character could be one. That’s merely one solution that probably won’t fix anything at this point. Comment: Author did note his inexperience and it’s fair quality for a first~

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Matrixshado

this is way too easy he literally gets everything he wants no ones suspicious and the thirteen primes are acting like they are kids with no intelligence it's like everyone's IQ in the novel is ridiculously low

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GodsAre_Stupid

Hey guys, author here, I am sorry, but I will have to drop this novel for the time being. I am no genius in studying and is very difficult for me to catch up with my studies if I write this novel. Please forgive me, guys Please forgive me, guys Please forgive me, guys Please forgive me, guys If I ever get the chance, I will continue this novel Thanks for supporting me guys Good-Bye

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GodsAre_Stupid

Hey guys, author here, I wanted to say that for a few upcoming days I may or may not update the chapters cause I will be a bit busy. I am sorry but as much as I want to write, I might not be able to. Thank you for reading this and have a good day.

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fnaf_fnaf

honestly it's an amazing read and I love it used to come home from school almost everyday and check there was an update and now I'm just hoping that it really is just a break cuz I understand if it's a break it can be stressful but you can recover and you've got this you're doing amazing so far it's excellent I understand if there's something happening in your life and I know you'll get through it and I'll still be here waiting

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Darius_Chromwell

I can get why it’s rated so well I mean it’s transformers, but that doesn’t excuse the poor quality i feel that people reviewed it before reading.

KKK....So NICE STORY TOTALLY AWESOME ENJOYED IT HOPE U DONT DISCONTINUE THE STORY PLEASE KEEP UPDATING IT.... VERY BIG FAN OF THIS NOVEL...

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t650825t

Goooooood gooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooood start start gooooooooooooooooo

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IDLE_Khaos

This is a good novel so please don't drop it and if you can upload more chapters please. 📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖📖

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GAMING_IS_MUST

idea was really really great but the execution was really really bad. dude if you don't know how to write wuxia novel the .dont try it, and this night shadows character he doesn't even have a straight personality,it's like AUTHOR is mind controlling him so he can manipulate the plot or something like that.... well all the authors do that because they write the story so there's no other way but they make their characters have at least a straight personality not random multiple. there is no explanation in world background, imagine you were told that in Naruto people uses chakra and become ninja and you have to figure out how chakra works and it's theory and all, that's how the world background is explained.

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SuperMaster_1o1

why he gotta be human ish again? I just hope he wont turn human again I dislike when a monster or some creature gotta evolve into human like we got a whole multiverse with different characters why we think human form is the best?

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SinOfSorrow

I need that new chapter bro whatcha doin bro I neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee33e3ed ittttt plzzzzzzzzzzzzz oooooooooooooffffffffffffffffffffff

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Gate_Way_Guardian

This is one of the most interesting novel that i have read in this crappy app. I just hope that you, "Mr. author." Would stop making wuxia jokes like the time Night Shadow first walked in the cybertron soldier facility cuz its making me cringe, like a lot. If u can do that then this novel would be much more better since if u add wuxia jokes like that then this novel would be much more interesting to read. Ps. You have no idea how wuxia things are ruining a lot of novel these days, they make a novel sound like b*llsh*t.

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XlouS

The fanfic is amazing recommend to read good writing quality and the storyline is good hope to see more chapters to read. .

keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........keep up the good work..........

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NLinCH

This Novel has a lot of potential if it continues its pace. The idea is great, male protagonist, transformers. As long as the Protagonist won’t suffer a huge fall and the author keeps writing I will continue to read.

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Somebeegdeem

Hey man don't stop you are the only one doing something fannfic related to Transformers afaik so yeah keep on just hope for more faster updates