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So far the "female lead" seems to be a bit dumb even though I think the author is trying to give us a strong female lead. It feels like she is just being manipulated the entire time and I say this after reading almost 70 chapters she hasn't come to the realization that something fishy is going on and she is being manipulate by a stranger she met and the guy who is suppose to be her mate (hardly know anything about as well) marks her without her knowing. just feels like a bunch of males pushing their will on her and she just going along without knowing but trying to assert that she's independent and capable. I gave up reading and even with the free read decide to give another try but I'm not tempted to finished sadly 🙃 😩
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I dont understand the story the girl is submissive and dumb she is so desperate for being adjusted and making friends being recognised that she follows any Abc or XYz person. I don’t understand female character at all she is just so dumb and annoying at times[img=faceslap]
it was a really nice read. loved the character development. Five stars wouldn't be enough for this novel. I highly recommend ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I loved this book from the first chapter. Totally unique tale with awesom male and female characters. Well done loolong forwards to reading more of this author x
I am on chapters 156. Author what you need immediately is an editor. Do you dictate the chapters and English is not your spoken language? Words are mixed up. Mate is written as made. Names are misspelled! Have to put our own words to understand what is being said! in whole, the beauty of the story is lost because of the writing quality!
The story is interesting with many twists and quick flow. The talk to speach program used is really bad, as many sentences are random. Needs an editor
Just read it guys 🌝 You'll love the story and characters...I can't believe I completed more than half the story in just a few hours😂✨[img=recommend]
This book seems really interesting so far. If you’re fond of fantasy genre with, vampires etc then is sure shot book to read for Halloween….
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Probably a good story line, but I cannot get past the writing - jumbled timeline, strange dialogue, and unnecessary explanations of certain topics. There was too much that didn’t make sense so I eventually couldn’t finish it.
Another masterpiece in works by this amazing author! The synopsis had me hooked! The cover is just magnificent and the writing is spot on! The storyline is so interesting. this books checks all the boxes🤩
A very interesting read! Amazing characters came to life with the lively words of the author. Such an amazing world with awesome characters. Do add it to your library. You will enjoy the book. ❤️
The book is neatly written. If you like baby wolves, and mommy wolves and three wolves instead of three bears, It's just the story for you. It got that little punch, a bit of adorable ness and lots of supernatural drama. give it a try. you will love it.
Boom 💣💥 sypnosis... The Author has really made it very well and interesting... No doubt that it will make a huge hit in future💞 Best of Luck Author san...
everything from the prologue had me hooked. At first I was a bit hesitant to read, but after just the first chapter I was hooked. I cannot reccomend this enough. come on people, read this book! Author your book is Amazing truly
5/5 🌷 The synopsis is good, the plot is good, the author's writing technique is good! 🌺 The pacing of the story is just right 🌻 I got hooked after reading the first few chapters! 🌲 Added it to my library!!! 🏵
This story deserves five stars. Within the few initial chapters, I got hooked on the story. The description is very nice. Looking forward to reading more of this novel. [img=recommend]
Review for the earlier cchapters. The author is well learned with the make over of the initial drama in the story. Looking forward the development.
OH MY GOD!!!!💓💓💓💓💓 I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS💞💞💞💞💞.. This is just soooo good!!!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ I just love your story line...♥️♥️♥️ It's neither too slow nor too fast..I am just waiting for more updates....😁😁🥰... N the chemistry between the lead characters..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
It's really awesome.... I loved it.....😍😍😍❤️ Thank you so much for publishing thiss.... I hope i read more like thiss.... Waiting for more stories like this....❤️❤️❤️ Amazing..
AMAZING READ! Update soon! So much excitement for what happens next T.T The chemistry between Xavier and Adeline is just wow! Do read! Won't be able to leave with just one chapter
This is such a great story. The author is really able to pull you into their world. Excellent premise and development. It has been one of my favorites for months now. Although it is apparent that voice-to-text is used because many of the errors are based on sound phonetics (ex.."made" when its supposed to be "mate"). It was distracting at first, but by the time it became more frequent, I was so engrossed in the story that I tried to read as if someone was talking instead of the meaning of the words. An editor or running a spell/grammar check would make this book darn near PERFECT. But LET ME BE CLEAR-- I love this book and I look for updates everyday. I continue to pay for all the privilege tiers because the story is worth it. And if you're reading this review, you should definitely get into this book also :)
So far the "female lead" seems to be a bit dumb even though I think the author is trying to give us a strong female lead. It feels like she is just being manipulated the entire time and I say this after reading almost 70 chapters she hasn't come to the realization that something fishy is going on and she is being manipulate by a stranger she met and the guy who is suppose to be her mate (hardly know anything about as well) marks her without her knowing. just feels like a bunch of males pushing their will on her and she just going along without knowing but trying to assert that she's independent and capable. I gave up reading and even with the free read decide to give another try but I'm not tempted to finished sadly 🙃 😩
Membuka SPOILER I dont understand the story the girl is submissive and dumb she is so desperate for being adjusted and making friends being recognised that she follows any Abc or XYz person. I don’t understand female character at all she is just so dumb and annoying at times[img=faceslap]
it was a really nice read. loved the character development. Five stars wouldn't be enough for this novel. I highly recommend ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
I loved this book from the first chapter. Totally unique tale with awesom male and female characters. Well done loolong forwards to reading more of this author x
I am on chapters 156. Author what you need immediately is an editor. Do you dictate the chapters and English is not your spoken language? Words are mixed up. Mate is written as made. Names are misspelled! Have to put our own words to understand what is being said! in whole, the beauty of the story is lost because of the writing quality!
The story is interesting with many twists and quick flow. The talk to speach program used is really bad, as many sentences are random. Needs an editor
Just read it guys 🌝 You'll love the story and characters...I can't believe I completed more than half the story in just a few hours😂✨[img=recommend]
This book seems really interesting so far. If you’re fond of fantasy genre with, vampires etc then is sure shot book to read for Halloween….
Membuka SPOILER Probably a good story line, but I cannot get past the writing - jumbled timeline, strange dialogue, and unnecessary explanations of certain topics. There was too much that didn’t make sense so I eventually couldn’t finish it.
Another masterpiece in works by this amazing author! The synopsis had me hooked! The cover is just magnificent and the writing is spot on! The storyline is so interesting. this books checks all the boxes🤩
A very interesting read! Amazing characters came to life with the lively words of the author. Such an amazing world with awesome characters. Do add it to your library. You will enjoy the book. ❤️
The book is neatly written. If you like baby wolves, and mommy wolves and three wolves instead of three bears, It's just the story for you. It got that little punch, a bit of adorable ness and lots of supernatural drama. give it a try. you will love it.
Boom 💣💥 sypnosis... The Author has really made it very well and interesting... No doubt that it will make a huge hit in future💞 Best of Luck Author san...
everything from the prologue had me hooked. At first I was a bit hesitant to read, but after just the first chapter I was hooked. I cannot reccomend this enough. come on people, read this book! Author your book is Amazing truly
5/5 🌷 The synopsis is good, the plot is good, the author's writing technique is good! 🌺 The pacing of the story is just right 🌻 I got hooked after reading the first few chapters! 🌲 Added it to my library!!! 🏵
This story deserves five stars. Within the few initial chapters, I got hooked on the story. The description is very nice. Looking forward to reading more of this novel. [img=recommend]
Review for the earlier cchapters. The author is well learned with the make over of the initial drama in the story. Looking forward the development.
OH MY GOD!!!!💓💓💓💓💓 I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS💞💞💞💞💞.. This is just soooo good!!!! ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️ I just love your story line...♥️♥️♥️ It's neither too slow nor too fast..I am just waiting for more updates....😁😁🥰... N the chemistry between the lead characters..😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
It's really awesome.... I loved it.....😍😍😍❤️ Thank you so much for publishing thiss.... I hope i read more like thiss.... Waiting for more stories like this....❤️❤️❤️ Amazing..
AMAZING READ! Update soon! So much excitement for what happens next T.T The chemistry between Xavier and Adeline is just wow! Do read! Won't be able to leave with just one chapter
This is such a great story. The author is really able to pull you into their world. Excellent premise and development. It has been one of my favorites for months now. Although it is apparent that voice-to-text is used because many of the errors are based on sound phonetics (ex.."made" when its supposed to be "mate"). It was distracting at first, but by the time it became more frequent, I was so engrossed in the story that I tried to read as if someone was talking instead of the meaning of the words. An editor or running a spell/grammar check would make this book darn near PERFECT. But LET ME BE CLEAR-- I love this book and I look for updates everyday. I continue to pay for all the privilege tiers because the story is worth it. And if you're reading this review, you should definitely get into this book also :)