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probably one of the most stupidest stories I've ever read. like it's makes no sense at all I would just give up on writing 🤣 failure.probably one of the most stupidest stories I've ever read. like it's makes no sense at all I would just give up on writing 🤣 failure.
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قتلتني بضحك[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] هاهاهاها استمر يا صديقي قصة رائعة جدا و مضحكة للغاية اتمنى الا تتوقف عن الكتابة 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
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where can I read it in full here - https://b.faloo.com/f/797393.html when you reach chapter 54 it asks you to be vip where can I read it in full here - https://b.faloo.com/f/797393.html when you reach chapter 54 it asks you to be vip where can I read it in full here - https://b.faloo.com/f/797393.html when you reach chapter 54 it asks you to be vip
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Es un muy buen fic, pero no hagas al prota muy muy borracho bro, hazlo estilo rock lee, el estando en ese estado es capaz de reconocer aliados y distinguir enemigos y no atacar asi por asi. Me alegra que el prota sea un espadachin ya que en muchos fic los ponen con poderes op, pero si es con la espada esta bien ya que me gusta ver pelear a los espadachines xD.
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anda yakin ingin menerjemahkan dari faloo sangat susah untuk menerjemahkan dari faloo anda hanya menghabis kan usaha yg sia", karna anda paling tidak hanya sampai 50 chapter setelah itu tidak melanjutkan ny
BRUhhhh...IDK care what other people think. This mc can shit all the other dramatic main characters lol. I hope the author don't give up cause I can definitely see the potential. It'll be in Top 10 fanfics in the long run.
Morale Booster here! Unique story if i say, and the way the girl act in front of him is funny lol.... Wanna see when he go to war with sake and wine... Keep it up!
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Speaking from experience a lot of people fail when it comes to pulling off op protagnists i havent read yet but as OP Mcs are mt favorite category im a give you a 5 Star. Just remember there is more to life than strenght growth.
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This is a really good book in my opinion, However the romance feels a bit forced I guess? Also its written like a wuxia novel which is probably due to it being translated. All in all 9/10 would reccomend, it has an intresting premise, a well done execution, and is a new take in a system. Good job to the translator!!
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Don't ever drop,this is one of the most interesting naruto fan fiction I have ever read .love what you are doing .thanks mate 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Well i hate that I have to write 140 characters to be able to post a review... Well... good work until now.I love the idea and find it hilarious.
i dont give you the perfect score but is also good and ave a good potential :) normaly i dont give you 5 star for character design because is a fanfiction but you take the caracther and add something like kurenei and rin.
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probably one of the most stupidest stories I've ever read. like it's makes no sense at all I would just give up on writing 🤣 failure.probably one of the most stupidest stories I've ever read. like it's makes no sense at all I would just give up on writing 🤣 failure.
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قتلتني بضحك[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] هاهاهاها استمر يا صديقي قصة رائعة جدا و مضحكة للغاية اتمنى الا تتوقف عن الكتابة 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its good Its goodIts good Its good Its good Its good Its good
where can I read it in full here - https://b.faloo.com/f/797393.html when you reach chapter 54 it asks you to be vip where can I read it in full here - https://b.faloo.com/f/797393.html when you reach chapter 54 it asks you to be vip where can I read it in full here - https://b.faloo.com/f/797393.html when you reach chapter 54 it asks you to be vip
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Es un muy buen fic, pero no hagas al prota muy muy borracho bro, hazlo estilo rock lee, el estando en ese estado es capaz de reconocer aliados y distinguir enemigos y no atacar asi por asi. Me alegra que el prota sea un espadachin ya que en muchos fic los ponen con poderes op, pero si es con la espada esta bien ya que me gusta ver pelear a los espadachines xD.
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anda yakin ingin menerjemahkan dari faloo sangat susah untuk menerjemahkan dari faloo anda hanya menghabis kan usaha yg sia", karna anda paling tidak hanya sampai 50 chapter setelah itu tidak melanjutkan ny
BRUhhhh...IDK care what other people think. This mc can shit all the other dramatic main characters lol. I hope the author don't give up cause I can definitely see the potential. It'll be in Top 10 fanfics in the long run.
Morale Booster here! Unique story if i say, and the way the girl act in front of him is funny lol.... Wanna see when he go to war with sake and wine... Keep it up!
Can you give me the linke to the Original x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x c c c c c c c x c c c c c c c v v v v v f c f
Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work Good Work
Speaking from experience a lot of people fail when it comes to pulling off op protagnists i havent read yet but as OP Mcs are mt favorite category im a give you a 5 Star. Just remember there is more to life than strenght growth.
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This is a really good book in my opinion, However the romance feels a bit forced I guess? Also its written like a wuxia novel which is probably due to it being translated. All in all 9/10 would reccomend, it has an intresting premise, a well done execution, and is a new take in a system. Good job to the translator!!
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Don't ever drop,this is one of the most interesting naruto fan fiction I have ever read .love what you are doing .thanks mate 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
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Well i hate that I have to write 140 characters to be able to post a review... Well... good work until now.I love the idea and find it hilarious.
i dont give you the perfect score but is also good and ave a good potential :) normaly i dont give you 5 star for character design because is a fanfiction but you take the caracther and add something like kurenei and rin.
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