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It has good potential, please keep writing i love it so far :D [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
as long as its not harem :) ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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very good story..............................................................................................................................
there is a lack of approach with other characters does not exist ....................... ......................... ...............................................
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๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Write a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! โจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจ (โ๏พใฎ๏พ)โโ(๏พใฎ๏พโ)(โ๏พใฎ๏พ)โโ(๏พใฎ๏พโ)(โ๏พใฎ๏พ)โโ(๏พใฎ๏พโ) โฐ(*ยฐโฝยฐ*)โฏโฐ(*ยฐโฝยฐ*)โฏเผผ ใค โ_โ เผฝใคเผผ ใค โ_โ เผฝใค
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It has good potential. Just don't make him an edge-lord with a huge harem. .................................................................................................................................................
En serio se que escribes por diversiรณn pero traer darle un poco de sentido comรบn (-_-) (-_-)(-_-) (-_-)(-_-) (-_-) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Membuka SPOILER moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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It has good potential, please keep writing i love it so far :D [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
as long as its not harem :) ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
fire๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅfuc jcb j h.c Audi Tucson dixon Robinson snap kg cm zip jacuzzi zoo Jack BLM n mystic cub go zoo zoo chi zhivago jvc icici co viz zinc conch
very good story..............................................................................................................................
there is a lack of approach with other characters does not exist ....................... ......................... ...............................................
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๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Write a review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! โจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจโจ (โ๏พใฎ๏พ)โโ(๏พใฎ๏พโ)(โ๏พใฎ๏พ)โโ(๏พใฎ๏พโ)(โ๏พใฎ๏พ)โโ(๏พใฎ๏พโ) โฐ(*ยฐโฝยฐ*)โฏโฐ(*ยฐโฝยฐ*)โฏเผผ ใค โ_โ เผฝใคเผผ ใค โ_โ เผฝใค
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It has good potential. Just don't make him an edge-lord with a huge harem. .................................................................................................................................................
En serio se que escribes por diversiรณn pero traer darle un poco de sentido comรบn (-_-) (-_-)(-_-) (-_-)(-_-) (-_-) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Membuka SPOILER