CONQEROR

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Jayvee_Magno

Has a potential to be one of the top kingdom building novels. Though it only has a few chapters so far you can already imagine the direction it will be going. Steady development of the story in which you can understand the situation well. So far i cant determine if the MC will have the characteristics (ruthless) that is somewhat expected for one to become a conqueror. As of now im quite satisfied with the MC's decision when attacking other villages but the problem is that those villages are monster villages, i hope he will not become someone like a pacifist (or to kind) when he starts to encounter humans.

LV 2

KN808

Mediocre and not in the good way. Also how you finna have the book cover with the correct spelling of "conqueror" but have it be wrong as the TITTLE of the book LOL. Now to the actual review. Story: The story is bland, it's nothing new. And even if it was made out to be a rehash/mix-match of all of the other similar "died then reincarnate as a godly abomination with a system", it's still bland. If there was an outline of this genre of a novel, this would sadly be it. With that said it might improve later on, but I would have no ability to know that as it is currently locked after only 18 CHAPTERS. And I would genuinely be surprised if anybody spends even their fast pass let alone god forbid coins on this novel. And as far as characters and interactions between characters go, it sounds and behaves like you would expect of this novel...unrealistic and off-putting. And also oddly demanding as well. I also understand that this "author" is not a fluent English speaker, but with that said, Grammarly is free and he/she would greatly benefit from such a service. All in all, I would not recommend this novel, check it out if you so wish, but I would advise against spending your coins or passes on this novel.

LV 13

KingGladiator

Does the writing quality get any better? I'm currently on chapter 18, and at the beginning there were alot of mistakes. Now I still see the same mistakes being repeated. Don't get me wrong the story is very intriguing! It keeps me at the edge of my seat wanting more!! It's just the spelling, and punctuation that make me a bit confused at times. For example the Author uses her instead of him at times, and it makes it very hard to tell the persons gender especially when you first introduce them.

LV 12

LovesSystemNovels

AUTHOR u have me excited this looks awesome so ima read and tell u if good bad but some will be options some facts and i wont be only one just know u have my support SO DONT DROP THIS NOVEL OR IM TAKING IT AND YES DAT A FRET cant wait for more

LV 4

Uncle_Sheogorath

Fendrel who was on 'her' way home after buying a food on a grocery store, suddenly felt something had hit her head and lost consciousness. The next moment, when 'he' regained consciousness. He found himself in a middle of a Forest, when 'he' was thinking and panicking what to do. GENDER BENDER? OR TERRIBLE GRAMMAR or spelling mistakes?

LV 15

Leonholdt

understandably, this fiction has a fairly interesting start with a non human protagonist. the down side is that the author, yes im sure they don't speak English as a primary language and have adjusted to that, but there is no noticeable improvement or effort to improve the multitude of glaring vocabulary mistakes the characters have no real "meat" to them, no substance or relatability. they are very one deminsional with little growth - to me at least. the story is a cookie cutter bit with a slight twist with the system. You can ignore similarities or the boring monotony thanks to that twist. Author does update steadily. the world itself doesn't appear horribly built - have not Ben able to read much past 50. it started hurting my brain. as a whole, the fiction is one you'd likely read once and waste time with. at least the free chapters. having read at least half of the available chapters - at this time - I can say it isn't worth reading past the premium status. no actual improvement is done in the authors writing and it isn't worth spending cash on.

LV 12

BLACKangelmarl

Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel. First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you. Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters. Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world. Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided. I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.

LV 14

Fry_lad

it's not horrible but the author definitely needs to get an editor to go over the chapters. the grammar isn't unreadable but it's still pretty bad.

LV 2

ChaosSorted

Well, The story's pretty average but I read too goodies so my remarks are that jumped right into LVL 49 from LVL 1 in a single chapter and didn't explain much about the world or the character and too many grammatical mistakes(even the novel name, not disregarding author's hard work but gotta say the truth)........ I endured reading till 30 but no great story, world or character development.... SORRY FOR GIVIN AN ASS REVIEW SORRY

LV 12

BLACKangelmarl

Don't mind me, I'm just supporting my lonely book. Ganbatte author...........................................................................

LV 12

BLACKangelmarl

Hi, shameless author passing by, I know the title is wrong spelling. I already updated it, but nothing happens. So I don't really know, and the cover is a bit messy, sorry for that I'm not an expert.... I hope you like my novel.

LV 3

Dretno

Honestly the story is one of the best I have read. It is great, intriguing and keeps the readers wanting for more. The writing quality is however a bit of a problem. The author doesn't really know a lot about tenses (keeps using present simple almost everytime in the beginning chapters etc). But fortunately the quality keeps on improving as the story progresses. The characters are great and likeable but could have been better. The author should have given more depth to the characters to make their choices in the story understandable to the readers. The world is like majority of western fantasy novels. A magical world ruled by with elves, Goblins, dragons, humans etc. (Has a system type class system) The updating stability is 'ok'. Not too good but not bad either. Overall a great read, if you like kingdom building novels. The mc is focused on his goal of conquering, building and improving. 😃

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homeofthelostqueen

LOVE IT PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Nisa_Casiano

If people could look past the grammatical errors, you'd enjoy the concept. Authors are human too! And FYI writing is hard, especially with an audience. Lighten up, because this is a diamond in the rough!

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LV 15

Indulge_Life

I realized I haven't reviewed this so my review is .........................................................................................

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Tiger_Prakash

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Lucifer_07

I have read 100 chapters. Lots of spelling mistake. No edit. I kinda fed up with these mistakes. Please, hire a editor or edit it yourself. So many mistakes. I can't continue this novel anymore.

LV 1

PurpleSalt

I like the novel and just hopes it doesn't get dropped ............................................................................................................................................................................................................

LV 15

ghost981

While yes the story has potential i cannot get any more from the story itself because of the chapter locks after chapter 18 causing me to really question why the auther did so and I am very mad for that reason as most chapter locks are at chapter 40+