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It would've been an awesome fanfic if you could stand the grammatical errors. I highly recommend having a proof reader nor reading an English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. still, kudos!
If you have already read the original novels, then it will be a good experience, basically a mc who knows future and is always winning, he also seem to have, completed his harem, and completed his journey, thus becoming invincible existence. Gotta say that it was good read, kinda of wishfulfilling. Thanks Writer For Writing This Treasure 😁😁😁
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this is fanfic of original with little change in the story that MC start cultivate 5 years early, the story is written in broken English and even MTL novels are better than this.
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some of the sentence doesn't make sense😑😑😑😑😑 so much word needed to post. need tk write more. omg why is it need many letter to post. cih!!!
Me ha encantado, como lector de la novela original puedo decir claramente que te has saltado pasos y as cambiado algunas cosas, pero las decisiones de este lin Dong me han gustado mucho, muchas ideas muy originales que seguramente se podría hacer hecho en el original pero no se hizo.y me encanta el harem de lin dong
If you already read the Original then don't bother reading this. Nothing chance from canon its just more powerful lin dong thats it. No additional girl to harem. No additional plot. Lols
I kind'a like the story to tell the truth but grammar is a bit of its hard to understand the other paragraph but i like the story when it comes to reincarnation and i suggest that after u finish it please re read ur story so that the wrong grammar can be removed
Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem?
Hmm i cant read this grammar it wasnt so bad but if it too much then it became unberable.. .................................................
hate the fucking mc, he acts ridiculously in the scenarios when he's robbing someone, it's like he's the one who has no choice in the matter.
The story was super good, but i dropped this in chapter 370 or sth the chapter that he slept with the fox clan. The MC’s love is just...you can say it’s like he fed his love to the dog!!! Do frustrated with him!!!
is mc OP or not?? From few chapters I read, MC is weak as **** and just follows canon. All canon happens but a little earlier?? or MC is strong as ****?
I would like to say this is a top ranker in my list of best fanfics even novel,the way the mc is portrayed as op bit without any reincarnated cheats has me wanting more . I hope to see more fanfics especially the two novel related to Wu dong qian kun, Battle through the heavens and The Great ruler respectively. I would read them even if I have to farm keys.^_^^_^(✷‿✷)
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Liked the story very much. Very good updating done for this story. Nothing to say more on the novel as it was already completed. But didn't expected cultivation novel fanfic to be this good. Thanks for this novel.
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the reason for only 3 stars in writing quality is for the reasons listed below it's very clear that English is not your first language there are many mistakes in the sentence formation in the earlier chapters, I won't talk about the layer ones as I haven't yet gotten around to reading them my suggestion is that you look up grammar and sentence formation along with maybe increasing your vocabulary. Either that or getting someone to edit the chapter before posting this will ensure a greater experience for the readers and increase the reader count as well other than that yeh story is a good read
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This Immortal Ancestor has come down to enlighten thou peasants! Rejoice as I share my blessings! This humble Immortal has seen the future! There will be more than 500 chapters! It will be completed!
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It would've been an awesome fanfic if you could stand the grammatical errors. I highly recommend having a proof reader nor reading an English dictionary to broaden your vocabulary. still, kudos!
If you have already read the original novels, then it will be a good experience, basically a mc who knows future and is always winning, he also seem to have, completed his harem, and completed his journey, thus becoming invincible existence. Gotta say that it was good read, kinda of wishfulfilling. Thanks Writer For Writing This Treasure 😁😁😁
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
this is fanfic of original with little change in the story that MC start cultivate 5 years early, the story is written in broken English and even MTL novels are better than this.
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some of the sentence doesn't make sense😑😑😑😑😑 so much word needed to post. need tk write more. omg why is it need many letter to post. cih!!!
Me ha encantado, como lector de la novela original puedo decir claramente que te has saltado pasos y as cambiado algunas cosas, pero las decisiones de este lin Dong me han gustado mucho, muchas ideas muy originales que seguramente se podría hacer hecho en el original pero no se hizo.y me encanta el harem de lin dong
If you already read the Original then don't bother reading this. Nothing chance from canon its just more powerful lin dong thats it. No additional girl to harem. No additional plot. Lols
I kind'a like the story to tell the truth but grammar is a bit of its hard to understand the other paragraph but i like the story when it comes to reincarnation and i suggest that after u finish it please re read ur story so that the wrong grammar can be removed
Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem? Is this a harem?
Hmm i cant read this grammar it wasnt so bad but if it too much then it became unberable.. .................................................
hate the fucking mc, he acts ridiculously in the scenarios when he's robbing someone, it's like he's the one who has no choice in the matter.
The story was super good, but i dropped this in chapter 370 or sth the chapter that he slept with the fox clan. The MC’s love is just...you can say it’s like he fed his love to the dog!!! Do frustrated with him!!!
is mc OP or not?? From few chapters I read, MC is weak as **** and just follows canon. All canon happens but a little earlier?? or MC is strong as ****?
I would like to say this is a top ranker in my list of best fanfics even novel,the way the mc is portrayed as op bit without any reincarnated cheats has me wanting more . I hope to see more fanfics especially the two novel related to Wu dong qian kun, Battle through the heavens and The Great ruler respectively. I would read them even if I have to farm keys.^_^^_^(✷‿✷)
Membuka SPOILER thanks for all the chapter👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Liked the story very much. Very good updating done for this story. Nothing to say more on the novel as it was already completed. But didn't expected cultivation novel fanfic to be this good. Thanks for this novel.
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the reason for only 3 stars in writing quality is for the reasons listed below it's very clear that English is not your first language there are many mistakes in the sentence formation in the earlier chapters, I won't talk about the layer ones as I haven't yet gotten around to reading them my suggestion is that you look up grammar and sentence formation along with maybe increasing your vocabulary. Either that or getting someone to edit the chapter before posting this will ensure a greater experience for the readers and increase the reader count as well other than that yeh story is a good read
Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job! Good Job!
Membuka SPOILER This Immortal Ancestor has come down to enlighten thou peasants! Rejoice as I share my blessings! This humble Immortal has seen the future! There will be more than 500 chapters! It will be completed!
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it was a very good fan fiction i like it