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Writing quality: Fun at first. But started to get boring fast(explain in story development). Fighting sequence is somewhat fun to read. Main casts are slightly differ from cannon. Their development don't feel forced. . Story development: No divergence from cannon. MC do not attempt to interfere and change events. And sometimes she forget about plot and go along with event.... And inconsistency remembered plot when she noticed that author add more stuffs in fighting sequence to make it more interesting than cannon. Yeah, fighting sequence is only saving grace. . Character design: Main character don't look weird or out of place. . World background: Author tends to stick closely with cannon. Hard to know how much author understand naruto's lore. But nothing break so far.
The author is too fixed on the Canon. It's 95% the same. The OC is just average. As an reincarnator they shouldn't be this useless. They know the whole story up to almost the end of shippuden, but author is to afraid to make to many changes. That means, he isn't confident enough to make the story his. This makes this story a 4 at the absolutely most.
Really liked the story. Good grammer and character development. Even the background given of konoha is very precise. Other than the slow updates this is definitely one of the best ones to read.
me gusta pero enserio que espero su magekyo sharingan eterno o algun nuevo desarrollo para mantenerse al dia con sasuke y naruto, ademas que espero que tambien siga a orochimaru porque no creo que tsunade o jiraiya lo haga mejor
Worth My Time one of the best naruto fanfics....................................................................................................................................................................
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,No yuri please 🥺,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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Nice Story and a good Start. The Story has Potenial. i can't wait to read more of this Story. 👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Nice start. Really like it so far, can't wait for more🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Ayo fr though this is amazing af First off good writing and grammer Second I rhink the plot's good Idk i just like it a lot
It's good. Let's see how it progresses. .................................................................................................................................................
I love this story, it is realistic and I love it pls upload more ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Writing quality: Fun at first. But started to get boring fast(explain in story development). Fighting sequence is somewhat fun to read. Main casts are slightly differ from cannon. Their development don't feel forced. . Story development: No divergence from cannon. MC do not attempt to interfere and change events. And sometimes she forget about plot and go along with event.... And inconsistency remembered plot when she noticed that author add more stuffs in fighting sequence to make it more interesting than cannon. Yeah, fighting sequence is only saving grace. . Character design: Main character don't look weird or out of place. . World background: Author tends to stick closely with cannon. Hard to know how much author understand naruto's lore. But nothing break so far.
The author is too fixed on the Canon. It's 95% the same. The OC is just average. As an reincarnator they shouldn't be this useless. They know the whole story up to almost the end of shippuden, but author is to afraid to make to many changes. That means, he isn't confident enough to make the story his. This makes this story a 4 at the absolutely most.
Really liked the story. Good grammer and character development. Even the background given of konoha is very precise. Other than the slow updates this is definitely one of the best ones to read.
me gusta pero enserio que espero su magekyo sharingan eterno o algun nuevo desarrollo para mantenerse al dia con sasuke y naruto, ademas que espero que tambien siga a orochimaru porque no creo que tsunade o jiraiya lo haga mejor
Worth My Time one of the best naruto fanfics....................................................................................................................................................................
,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,No yuri please 🥺,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Nice Story and a good Start. The Story has Potenial. i can't wait to read more of this Story. 👍🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Nice start. Really like it so far, can't wait for more🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Ayo fr though this is amazing af First off good writing and grammer Second I rhink the plot's good Idk i just like it a lot
It's good. Let's see how it progresses. .................................................................................................................................................
I love this story, it is realistic and I love it pls upload more ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------