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EVEN IN THE LATER CHAPTERS MC IS STILL WEAK ASF. HE SUPPOSEDLY TRAINED AS A WITCHER FOR 7 YEARS AND A DRUID FOR 2 AND YET HE CANT EVEN HANDLE 4 PEASANTS.
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best witcher fanfiction I've ever read!!! Is there any reason you're not uploading anymore? such shame aswell not many good witcher fanfictions out there
Unfortunately, the story is ruined by a lack of understanding of the Witcher universe, with there being inconsistency in universe, I could understand if it was an AU but it's not, but the major issue I have with the story is the main character personality, he's supposed to be scheming, cunning, intelliegent, and manipulative, but he somehow can't resolve a conflict between him and 3 other children for years? Like really? He couldn't have just Idk, accidentally upped their intake of hazardous substances? Or falsely taught them, so he's still at the top? Another thing is the main character's thinking/talking, he talks like an edgy 14-year-old, and xanxia protagonist, with 'hating all humans' having extreme hatred towards minor grievances, etc...
mc is overly edgey. writer as 3 year old acting like adults and lack understanding of witcher lore xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxcxxxxxx
Мне очень понравился этот фанфик по Ведьмаку, и честно признаться, я довольно долго ищу фанфики по этому фандому. Конечно было неудобно читать с переводом, но это уже моя вина, что не знаю английского языка. Большое спасибо автору за такой чудесный ФФ.
One of the best things I've ever read!...........................................................................................................................
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One of the best witcher fan-fic ever. The story, character background everything good. [img=update] I just hope you don't drop this hidden jewel. I just love it.
this is absolutely wizard please don't drop this.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Wow, this was awesome dude! This isn’t some cliche or OP character stories, this was real life reactions and emOtions and I thoroughly enjoted this work.
Haven't even read it yet, but there are so few Witcher fanfiction automatic 5/5. Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher
Заранее хотелось бы сказать, что я из России и очень часто читаю фанфики на webnovel. Несомненно, этот фанфик заслуживает похвалы. Давненько я не читал столь интересного произведения. Персонажи проработаны очень грамотно, манеры поведения схожи с оригиналом. Прочел все главы что есть на данный момент на одном дыхании. Автор, продолжайте работу, уважение вам.
honestly one of the better fics, I personally don't like certain story elements but I am looking forward to the Ciri romance that seems to be appearing. please continue the Ciri romance btw, thanks.
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It's a good book. One of the better ones about 'The Witcher' universe, in my opinion. It's also a positive that the MC isn't some omnipotent God within the first dozen or so chapters either - it's a slow building story and I wouldn't have it any other way. This type of story brings out the best of 'The Witcher' and how gritty/realistic it can be. MC isn't given everything on a silver platter and nor does everything he does work out. For example, what the MC did with Emhyr worked out for a little while before it backfired massively on him and he lost his entire family. That alone should tell you the MC isn't some Gary Stu who gets everything he needs. My only gripe is that the MC can be a little edgy at times. And a little inconsistent. Other than that, he's not too bad a character, honestly. Overall, I'd recommend this book to people who don't want an MC covered in plot armor. I enjoyed the reading experience and I'm hoping for more chapters soon.
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Havent even finished the 1st chapter but you get 5 stars just for the proper grammar and syntax that most fanfic here don't seem to have.
Honestly, the author has a really good understanding of the Witcher, so I was really interested in this. The thing is... reading 20+ chapters about a child is really effin boring. The direction the story is going is just not something I want to read... but you may be different. Give it a go.
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The quality is great and the story is engaging, however my gripes with the story are an enormous blunder in my opinon, without spoiling anything, let just say that the MC is smart, except when he isn't, he doesn't trust anyone, except when he does, does types of issues. The events leading to chapter 21-24 seem forced, the story needed him to make mistakes, so he made them. Well anyway, my rant is over. The fic is great, give it a shot and decide for yourselves.
I am torn on this story. The author has some serious flow to his writing making you want to read more and more, but there are some poor plotting decisions and characterization that make me less than enthused about the direction of the story. The character seems like an incel. I don't know if that is what the author hoped for or not. I think this story is a fun read for the most part but anyone claiming this is the best it gets and this is a must read is lying to you.
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Я русский читатель и скажу сразу, история очень хорошая, мне интересно будет ли тут романтика и если да, то интересно кто именно. Так же сам персонаж, за ним интересно наблюдать. Надеюсь не будет такое, что наш oc будет тупым или мучеником.
Five star fanfic without a doubt, I recommend this to anyone looking for something good to read.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]
I love how the author plays out the Witcher world as it is, filled with wars, monsters. Also the political plays are very interesting, the way the MC negotiates and schemes is brilliant. You're very intelligent author. Wish you luck and sucess as your novel has potential and a lot.
First review so lets get it going. W.Q - Its pretty well written without grammar mistakes as far as i can see. The problem are interactions between characters, more show dont tell type of thing. oh, and the formatting its a bit clunky lets say, too much text without paragraphs .. etc S.U - No problems here , 1 update per day or something like that its very good for a fanfic, S.D - Very good i like where this is going and honestly it always keeps me at edge and waiting for more. C.D - Pretty nicely fleshled out protagonist notinh to comment here, the only problem i have a the other characters, you need to make me( as a reader) care for them or have an emotion about them , basically what i have to say is that sometimes it cames as boring or stale character and i lose interest but nothing alarming. W.B - Witcher . Nothing to say here.The character ( you know who) you added its a good addition and something in the likes of Gaunther O´Dimm. TLDR - Its a good story and i honestly hope to see you succed in completing this story. Witcher Fanfics are rare and a good fanfic are even harder to find. Thank you for the amazing work , and keep at it, i always (when i remember) vote for your work. Sorry for misspelng but im pretty tired and hopefully you can understand what im tring to say.
Very Well written. Promising story for the futur. There are juste 2 points that I dislike : First, he was supposed to be « misanthrope », so he should prefer loneliness and stay away from others. I don’t see anything relating to this, or I don’t feel it at all .. I was a bit disappointed. Second, the romance is too damn fast, and fking weird, a woman liking a 10 yo .. and it was a bit cringy. Sad. Have a nice day, your story is nice except what I said previously.
I love the story so far please keep writing it. I love an evil character that knows he is evil and does not go out of his way to try to be something his not. I also like that he knows that loving anything is a weakness, but he does so anyway. It shows that he is well balanced and not a cold machine that chat feel joy.
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EVEN IN THE LATER CHAPTERS MC IS STILL WEAK ASF. HE SUPPOSEDLY TRAINED AS A WITCHER FOR 7 YEARS AND A DRUID FOR 2 AND YET HE CANT EVEN HANDLE 4 PEASANTS.
I do not know English.......................................................................................................................
best witcher fanfiction I've ever read!!! Is there any reason you're not uploading anymore? such shame aswell not many good witcher fanfictions out there
Unfortunately, the story is ruined by a lack of understanding of the Witcher universe, with there being inconsistency in universe, I could understand if it was an AU but it's not, but the major issue I have with the story is the main character personality, he's supposed to be scheming, cunning, intelliegent, and manipulative, but he somehow can't resolve a conflict between him and 3 other children for years? Like really? He couldn't have just Idk, accidentally upped their intake of hazardous substances? Or falsely taught them, so he's still at the top? Another thing is the main character's thinking/talking, he talks like an edgy 14-year-old, and xanxia protagonist, with 'hating all humans' having extreme hatred towards minor grievances, etc...
mc is overly edgey. writer as 3 year old acting like adults and lack understanding of witcher lore xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxcxxxxxx
Мне очень понравился этот фанфик по Ведьмаку, и честно признаться, я довольно долго ищу фанфики по этому фандому. Конечно было неудобно читать с переводом, но это уже моя вина, что не знаю английского языка. Большое спасибо автору за такой чудесный ФФ.
One of the best things I've ever read!...........................................................................................................................
-Continue author 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
One of the best witcher fan-fic ever. The story, character background everything good. [img=update] I just hope you don't drop this hidden jewel. I just love it.
this is absolutely wizard please don't drop this.///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Wow, this was awesome dude! This isn’t some cliche or OP character stories, this was real life reactions and emOtions and I thoroughly enjoted this work.
Haven't even read it yet, but there are so few Witcher fanfiction automatic 5/5. Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher Witcher
Заранее хотелось бы сказать, что я из России и очень часто читаю фанфики на webnovel. Несомненно, этот фанфик заслуживает похвалы. Давненько я не читал столь интересного произведения. Персонажи проработаны очень грамотно, манеры поведения схожи с оригиналом. Прочел все главы что есть на данный момент на одном дыхании. Автор, продолжайте работу, уважение вам.
honestly one of the better fics, I personally don't like certain story elements but I am looking forward to the Ciri romance that seems to be appearing. please continue the Ciri romance btw, thanks.
Membuka SPOILER It's a good book. One of the better ones about 'The Witcher' universe, in my opinion. It's also a positive that the MC isn't some omnipotent God within the first dozen or so chapters either - it's a slow building story and I wouldn't have it any other way. This type of story brings out the best of 'The Witcher' and how gritty/realistic it can be. MC isn't given everything on a silver platter and nor does everything he does work out. For example, what the MC did with Emhyr worked out for a little while before it backfired massively on him and he lost his entire family. That alone should tell you the MC isn't some Gary Stu who gets everything he needs. My only gripe is that the MC can be a little edgy at times. And a little inconsistent. Other than that, he's not too bad a character, honestly. Overall, I'd recommend this book to people who don't want an MC covered in plot armor. I enjoyed the reading experience and I'm hoping for more chapters soon.
Membuka SPOILER Havent even finished the 1st chapter but you get 5 stars just for the proper grammar and syntax that most fanfic here don't seem to have.
Honestly, the author has a really good understanding of the Witcher, so I was really interested in this. The thing is... reading 20+ chapters about a child is really effin boring. The direction the story is going is just not something I want to read... but you may be different. Give it a go.
Yamete ku da saiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
The quality is great and the story is engaging, however my gripes with the story are an enormous blunder in my opinon, without spoiling anything, let just say that the MC is smart, except when he isn't, he doesn't trust anyone, except when he does, does types of issues. The events leading to chapter 21-24 seem forced, the story needed him to make mistakes, so he made them. Well anyway, my rant is over. The fic is great, give it a shot and decide for yourselves.
I am torn on this story. The author has some serious flow to his writing making you want to read more and more, but there are some poor plotting decisions and characterization that make me less than enthused about the direction of the story. The character seems like an incel. I don't know if that is what the author hoped for or not. I think this story is a fun read for the most part but anyone claiming this is the best it gets and this is a must read is lying to you.
Goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood
Я русский читатель и скажу сразу, история очень хорошая, мне интересно будет ли тут романтика и если да, то интересно кто именно. Так же сам персонаж, за ним интересно наблюдать. Надеюсь не будет такое, что наш oc будет тупым или мучеником.
Five star fanfic without a doubt, I recommend this to anyone looking for something good to read.[img=recommend][img=exp][img=coins][img=update][img=faceslap]
I love how the author plays out the Witcher world as it is, filled with wars, monsters. Also the political plays are very interesting, the way the MC negotiates and schemes is brilliant. You're very intelligent author. Wish you luck and sucess as your novel has potential and a lot.
First review so lets get it going. W.Q - Its pretty well written without grammar mistakes as far as i can see. The problem are interactions between characters, more show dont tell type of thing. oh, and the formatting its a bit clunky lets say, too much text without paragraphs .. etc S.U - No problems here , 1 update per day or something like that its very good for a fanfic, S.D - Very good i like where this is going and honestly it always keeps me at edge and waiting for more. C.D - Pretty nicely fleshled out protagonist notinh to comment here, the only problem i have a the other characters, you need to make me( as a reader) care for them or have an emotion about them , basically what i have to say is that sometimes it cames as boring or stale character and i lose interest but nothing alarming. W.B - Witcher . Nothing to say here.The character ( you know who) you added its a good addition and something in the likes of Gaunther O´Dimm. TLDR - Its a good story and i honestly hope to see you succed in completing this story. Witcher Fanfics are rare and a good fanfic are even harder to find. Thank you for the amazing work , and keep at it, i always (when i remember) vote for your work. Sorry for misspelng but im pretty tired and hopefully you can understand what im tring to say.
Very Well written. Promising story for the futur. There are juste 2 points that I dislike : First, he was supposed to be « misanthrope », so he should prefer loneliness and stay away from others. I don’t see anything relating to this, or I don’t feel it at all .. I was a bit disappointed. Second, the romance is too damn fast, and fking weird, a woman liking a 10 yo .. and it was a bit cringy. Sad. Have a nice day, your story is nice except what I said previously.
I love the story so far please keep writing it. I love an evil character that knows he is evil and does not go out of his way to try to be something his not. I also like that he knows that loving anything is a weakness, but he does so anyway. It shows that he is well balanced and not a cold machine that chat feel joy.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAABBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB
DROPPED TOO. THIS IS BS BRO. 1 STARRRRRRR.