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Goddess of Ice; Reborn as Naruto's twin sister [Completed]
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How will the person who, in her previous world was known as the Goddess of Ice, deal with the world of Naruto?
This story will loosely follow canon and will focus on how a powerful, wise, and slightly insane person will affect the story and its characters. Slightly AU
Release schedule: 1 Chapter/day
I am currently releasing this fanfic only on scribblehub.com and webnovel.com. If you are reading this elsewhere, it was not released by me.
The early chapters had some writing and grammar mistakes, so I went over them a second time, which should have fixed most of the mistakes.
The cover was commissioned by me and was created by Liilica on fiverr
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Usually, I do not give out pure 5 stars as there is always a little something, that sours the experience for me. This time, however, it's impossible to give anything else! Every aspect of this story is superb. The quality of writing is very nearly flawless with only a minuscule chance of even typos appearing. The development of the story leans on the canon timeline of events. The tiny changes pile up though, and somewhere in the not-so-far future, canon will be wrecked. The characters... Oh god, the characters. Usually, this is where I lower the rating, since you'll either have copied characters from canon or heavily ooc ones. Instead, you'll get a single original character, who believably influences others. That's extremely hard to pull off correctly, but it's done fantastically well here. Updating Stability. We get lot's of chapters to fuel our addiction, nuff said. World Background: Here, I do not only rate the Naruto universe, but also her home dimension. It's been deliciously vague till now. We get snippets of information, that keep us interested but not so much that it feels like an info dump, which is a hard line to toe. Well done! Overall, we get a reinvented universe, a lovable main cast and all around a good feeling while reading this book. 5 stars are very much deserved and well earned! Keep up the good work!
honestly the name and synopsis of this fic is god-awful, and despite having it in my library for a while i could never bring myself to read it cuz i figured itd be terribly disappointing, like strongest talent in naruto, but then i actually read it and even just for the comedy factor alone its great, and despite the MC being a cultivator and so obviously from a CN world, she's not 'Chinese' if you know what i mean, all in all, i read 300 chapters (400k+ words) in 3 days, once i started this i literally, and i cant express this enough, LITERALLY, did not stop reading unless to eat, sleep, or toilet breaks. i just couldnt put it down, the writing is as good as it can be, but the Dialog, OoOOooohh~~ its sooo goooood, honestly the characters feel SO real, its impossible to not be immersed, and despite how this may be difficult to believe by my review so far, but i have quite high standards, yet i love this fic, in spite of the fact that i dont really even like the plot, fics where the MC is a part of narutos generation arent really my cup off tea and yet i love this one because it is just so well written. and finally, Author-san, if youre reading this i want you to know that i spend all my time reading because i hate my life and like this i can escape into the lives of others, and i just want you to know that even if it was only for 3 days, thank you so, so much for letting me feel happy again for a bit :> TL:DR: dont let the title and synopsis deceive you, this story is amazing, at least read the first 2 chapters and you wont be able to put it down
Here I go shameless 5 Star review. Had this story in my head for quite some time now. I started making notes where I want this to go about two month ago and now im finally bringing it on the screen. This will have a good mix of action, comedy and a little bit of romance, while occasionaly pointing out the weirdness that is the Naruto world. Hope you enjoy it.
I never thought that I would see a cultivator naruto fanfic that is worth reading. All things considered I would love to dump some PWR Stones to this fanfic. But 15k words which should of be met or maybe it needs ten reviews. Can you post multiple reviews for one book / fanfic?
Let All Mongrels Who Read This Know, That This Fanfiction Has This King's Stamp Of Approval. .................................................................................................................................................
I personally have never been a fan of fanfiction though I I find one that sounds interesting I'll always give it a shot. Sadly this falls pray to what most fanfics fall prey to in my opinion, and that's a lack of faith to the original personalities of the characters in favor of the authors portrayal in service to the story they are writing. I can accept that a new character will disrupt how events unfold, thus change the timeline a bit but I cannot accept when an author takes characters and subverts what/who they are and remakes them into someone completely different.
Honestly speaking, at first glance I thought this novel was a waste. I was searching for new novels, somehow saw this again and said "you know what **** it" and start to read it and let me tell you.....one of the best decisions i ever made. This novel is very funny(especially the comment sections), the story development is moving at a good pace and the writing quality is..well my brain autocorrects the mistakes so I don't think it necessary to say anything about it(only nerd *cough* I mean big brainers will say something about it)
Let me start by saying, I am not a big fan of Naruto but I absolutely love this novel. Normally fanfics tend to have a tendency of having characters with bland 1D personality. But, this novel really captures their original personality with Author own unique twist on it. The character interactions are really smooth & entertaining, never once I felt bored reading it. I really like the interaction between MC and Kurama, its really fun reading their banter. Also, the romance in the novel doesn't feel rushed, it feet more natural & smooth, especially Hinata & MC interactions are really damn cute (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ) . Author-san keep up the good work ヾ (≧▽≦*) o. I really hope Author-san complete this novel properly and wouldn't drop it halfway.
To be fair to the author for writing this fantastic novel I should have written this review sooner. Writing Quality 5/5 It's extremely hard to see grammatical errors and even when there are some, the author is fast to fix them when the readers point them out Stability of Updates 5/5 Daily uploads and every time the author is unable to post a day they always warn us, but to be fair it's rare that it happens Story Development 5/5 It's a little slow since the focus of the novel is more on the comedy but it's enjoyable nonetheless Character Design 5/5 (Can I place a 6/5 here?) The best part of the story in my opinion, all characters feel alive and the protagonist is one of my favorites and I love her personality World Background 5/5 the mix of Naruto and Xianxia is quite interesting and I want to see more of it
The whole plot, it doesn’t make any sense . Why would minato put kyubii in his daughter when he saw what child birth can do to his jinchuriki wife. So when his daughter will give birth the kyubii will break free. Minato is too smart to do that. I dont think this whole story makes sense . Plus lot of au and forced stuff . It has a harem which usually ruins any good story .
The story in itself is great but halfway through (like, chapter 120 or 130) the author completely changes the way he's writing and seems to have completely changed their direction of where the story is headed. I do recommend this story, but I personally am gonna stop reading because of personal preference. I was already skeptical because of some unnecessary changes to the Canon (and some ridiculous aspects about the MC), but the sudden shift is what made me stop. Great story and thank the author for writing it, it's just not for me.
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I honestly had very high hopes for this story, have read till chapter 100 but cant continue anymore due to how cringy it has become Firstly they ignore everyone’s opinion about themselves but are still loyal to the village, like they literally report every secret of theirs to the Hokage, i do remember that the author specifically mentions how the MC trusts very easily, but thats just plain BS, she was a cultivator, and as implied one of the strongest beings in her previous universe but still doesn’t know when to shut up, like literally in the first meeting, she is showing Kurama memories of her previous life The author tries to injest comic relief but it just comes out as cringey and dumbing down the MC Honestly it was a good concept, but the MC’s ideology, how about 50-70% of the novel is about joking and pranks, how much of a goody two shoes she is, just cant continue any longer
Membuka SPOILER
Shouldn't this be in the female lead section. reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
11/10 would come back and read it all over again. -11/10 would drop the novel. 10/10 would type the whole story in my notes so I can treasure it forever with the others I typed dilligently with a hint of ignoring my laziness. 10/10 would ask the author for permission to type this in my notes. 101/10 would put some random scale of something to surpass the 140 characters. 10/10 would sing a random song with no apparent reason.
author hopefully change the pairing (since would be for nothing to save her and end with Naruto in the end, everyone thought that it would end with the protagonist, because if in the end you make it end with Naruto, the whole drama is silly, you'd better have it left as the canon where they meet and would have continued with the story, you blew a good potential). - Surely the majority is bothered by the result of the pairing, everyone expected a development, but you leave us with this chapter. - I hope you cheer up and edit it and make naruto mate with another girl (people want the development of hinata's romance with the protagonist, if not, it won't do for you to save her).
after reading "in naruto reborn with three talent" makes this novel boring.........................................................................................................................
I really like the development of Yuna and the butterfly-effect with the second reincarnator. It is incredibly funny to see the chaos the different characters create (some without even trying).
I really like this book. The only problem I have is that the mc seems to face no real problems. All victories I read feel so unearned, I have reached a breaking point and I am most likely not going to continue reading which makes me feel bad considering how much I liked the characters. MC is op which is not a bad but it just gets boring reading the constant praises every character seems to give the MC. On chapter 65 tell me if this problem changes
Membuka SPOILERJilid 0 : Auxiliary Volume
Jilid 1
- 1 Reborn?! 3 years ago
- 2 Collecting Information 3 years ago
- 3 Kurama 3 years ago
- 4 Preparing for Birth 3 years ago
- 5 Being Born 3 years ago
- 6 How to Proceed 3 years ago
- 7 Change of Treatment 3 years ago
- 8 Henge no Jutsu 3 years ago
- 9 Is Ramen addiction Inherited? 3 years ago
- 10 Teaching Naruto 3 years ago
- 11 Living Arrangements 3 years ago
- 12 Selling por…a Love Story 3 years ago
- 13 Reactions 3 years ago
- 14 Meeting an Abandoned Bunny 3 years ago
- 15 Modifying the Seal 3 years ago
- 16 Training Hinata 3 years ago
- 17 Trust 3 years ago
- 18 Academy 3 years ago
- 19 Preparing the Pranks 3 years ago
- 20 Doing some Manipulating 3 years ago
- 21 Meeting Kurama 3 years ago
- 22 Kurama's Outburst 3 years ago
- 23 Who are you? 3 years ago
- 24 Meeting Kurama...again 3 years ago
- 25 A Teachers' Bad Day 3 years ago
- 26 ICE 3 years ago
- 27 Caught in the Act? 3 years ago
- 28 Decision 3 years ago
- 29 Sasuke Uchiha 3 years ago
- 30 Shikamaru Nara 3 years ago
- 31 An Uzumaki Clan Secret 3 years ago
- 32 Reestablishment!? 3 years ago
- 33 Negotiations 3 years ago
- 34 Chains 3 years ago
- 35 Unleashing the Lioness on a Doting Father 3 years ago
- 36 Ino Yamanaka 3 years ago
- 37 Questioning 3 years ago
- 38 Years pass by 3 years ago
- 39 Confrontation 3 years ago
- 40 Danzo Shimura 3 years ago
- 41 Iruka Umino 3 years ago
- 42 Yin Yang Balance 3 years ago
- 43 Graduation Exam 3 years ago
- 44 Mezu…Mize…err... dude 3 years ago
- 45 Blatant Bribery 3 years ago
- 46 Kakashi Hatake 3 years ago
- 47 Introductions 3 years ago
- 48 Stolen content and suggestions 3 years ago
- 49 Start of the Bell Test 3 years ago
- 50 Yuna vs Kakashi 3 years ago
- 51 Naruto vs Kakashi 3 years ago
- 52 Hinata meets her new Team 3 years ago
- 53 Hinata vs Kurenai I 3 years ago
- 54 Hinata vs Kurenai II 3 years ago
- 55 Complaining to Hiruzen 3 years ago
- 56 The first "Mission" 3 years ago
- 57 How to Defeat your Greatest Enemy 3 years ago
- 58 Meeting the new Sensei 3 years ago
- 59 Anko Mitarashi 3 years ago
- 60 How to Raid a Bandit Camp 3 years ago
- 61 Start of Wave Mission 3 years ago
- 62 Zabuza Momochi 3 years ago
- 63 Fighting Zabuza 3 years ago
- 64 At Tazuna's House 3 years ago
- 65 Meeting Haku 3 years ago
- 66 Combat Plan 3 years ago
- 67 Start of Combat 3 years ago
- 68 Killing a Meathead 3 years ago
- 69 Fighting Haku 3 years ago
- 70 Recruiting Zabuza 3 years ago
- 71 Gatou's Unfortunate Accident 3 years ago
- 72 The Massacre at Tazuna's House. 3 years ago
- 73 Returning to Konoha 3 years ago
- 74 Getting Pushed Down by Hinata!? 3 years ago
- 75 Talking with Hinata 3 years ago
- 76 A Breakthrough of the Mind 3 years ago
- 77 Removing Anko's Seal 3 years ago
- 78 Fooling Around 3 years ago
- 79 Meeting a Tanuki 3 years ago
- 80 How to Deal With a Tanuki 3 years ago
- 81 Quarrel Before the Chunin Exams 3 years ago
- 82 Confidence Crushing 3 years ago
- 83 The First Test 3 years ago
- 84 Start of the Second Test 3 years ago
- 85 Stalling for Time 3 years ago
- 86 Fighting Orochimaru 3 years ago
- 87 Movements in the Background 3 years ago
- 88 Aftermath of the Battle 3 years ago
- 89 Meeting Karin 3 years ago
- 90 Sasuke Awakens 3 years ago
- 91 A Special Kind of Genius 3 years ago
- 92 Preliminary Matches Part 1 3 years ago
- 93 Preliminary Matches Part 2 3 years ago
- 94 Rock Lee 3 years ago
- 95 Match Arrangements 3 years ago
- 96 Tricking a Pervert 3 years ago
- 97 Jiraiya of the Sannin 3 years ago
- 98 Gamabunta 3 years ago
- 99 A True Prodigy 3 years ago
- 100 My Body is Moving on its own 3 years ago
- 101 Meeting Ino's Parents 3 years ago
- 102 Talking with Ino's Parents 3 years ago
- 103 Growing Closer 3 years ago
- 104 A New Way to Improve 3 years ago
- 105 Cultivation 3 years ago
- 106 Revealing Secrets 3 years ago
- 107 How to be a Proper Young Master 3 years ago
- 108 Hinata vs Neji 3 years ago
- 109 The Hyuga's Curse Seal 3 years ago
- 110 The Bet 3 years ago
- 111 Yuna vs Sasuke 3 years ago
- 112 A Little Warm-Up 3 years ago
- 113 Yuna vs Naruto and Hinata 3 years ago
- 114 A Different Point of View 3 years ago
- 115 The Big Reveal 3 years ago
- 116 Start of the Invasion 3 years ago
- 117 Yuna’s Message for Hashirama 3 years ago
- 118 A Fight Between Angel and Devil 3 years ago
- 119 Anko vs Tobirama 3 years ago
- 120 Yuna vs Hashirama 3 years ago
- 121 Naruto vs Gaara 3 years ago
- 122 End of the Invasion 3 years ago
- 123 Who are you Loyal to? 3 years ago
- 124 Baiting a Toad? 3 years ago
- 125 Doubts about Yuna 3 years ago
- 126 Situation of the Uzumaki Clan 3 years ago
- 127 Preparing for the Gathering 3 years ago
- 128 Danzo's Arrangements 3 years ago
- 129 Start of the Gathering 3 years ago
- 130 Crowd Manipulation 3 years ago
- 131 Before the Mission 3 years ago
- 132 Quarrel before the Mission 3 years ago
- 133 Attack on the Uzumaki Compound 3 years ago
- 134 Yuna vs Sexy Jutsu 3 years ago
- 135 Gathering Information...Maybe? 3 years ago
- 136 Foolish Little...Sister? 3 years ago
- 137 Giving Sasuke "The Talk" 3 years ago
- 138 Inside the Tsukuyomi 3 years ago
- 139 Watching a Movie 3 years ago
- 140 Finding Tsunade 3 years ago
- 141 Fighting Tsunade 3 years ago
- 142 Naruto Joins the Dark Side 3 years ago
- 143 Trouble on the Way Back 3 years ago
- 144 Fighting the Sound Four 3 years ago
- 145 Finishing the Fight 3 years ago
- 146 Getting a Little Angry 3 years ago
- 147 Making an Enemy for Life 3 years ago
- 148 Reeducating Tayuya 3 years ago
- 149 Hiruzen Prepares his Scheme 3 years ago
- 150 The Real Reason? 3 years ago
- 151 The New Uzumaki Clan Compound 3 years ago
- 152 List of Intruders 3 years ago
- 153 Caught in the Act? Again!? 3 years ago
- 154 A Maid!? 3 years ago
- 155 The First and Second Hokage 3 years ago
- 156 Tsunade Enters the Uzumaki Compound 3 years ago
- 157 The usual Bribery and Blackmail 3 years ago
- 158 The New Hokage and the Council 3 years ago
- 159 Hiruzen's Realization 3 years ago
- 160 Future Plans 3 years ago
- 161 Sasuke's Departure 3 years ago
- 162 Finally 3 years ago
- 163 Fighting Danzo 3 years ago
- 164 Getting Very Angry 3 years ago
- 165 Making Another Enemy for Life 3 years ago
- 166 Into the Snow 3 years ago
- 167 Meeting in the Snowstorm 3 years ago
- 168 Family Reunion 3 years ago
- 169 The True Power of the Kyuubi 3 years ago
- 170 Isekai 101 3 years ago
- 171 A Reincarnators PoV 3 years ago
- 172 Hinata's Betrayal 3 years ago
- 173 Et tu, Anko!? 3 years ago
- 174 Not a Chapter 3 years ago
- 175 Ao from the Land of Water 3 years ago
- 176 Zampusa Uzumaki!? 3 years ago
- 177 Negotiations with Ao 3 years ago
- 178 End of Negotiations 3 years ago
- 179 Ino's and Haku's Training 3 years ago
- 180 Another Enemy for Life...maybe? 3 years ago
- 181 Chatting in Kirigakure 3 years ago
- 182 Negotiations with Mei 3 years ago
- 183 Ice vs Lava 3 years ago
- 184 Meeting two Stalkers 3 years ago
- 185 Obito and Zetsu 3 years ago
- 186 Bantering with Mei 3 years ago
- 187 Fighting Isobu 3 years ago
- 188 Convincing Isobu 3 years ago
- 189 The Innocent Isobu 3 years ago
- 190 Another Intense Battle 3 years ago
- 191 I will Definitely Win the next Time! 3 years ago
- 192 Hinata's Interrogation 3 years ago
- 193 Punishing a Naughty Maid 3 years ago
- 194 Bingo Book Entry 3 years ago
- 195 Yuna's Genin 3 years ago
- 196 Hisoka Hyuga 3 years ago
- 197 Feeling a Little Nostalgic 3 years ago
- 198 She's a Pervert, so it's Fine 3 years ago
- 199 Introductions 3 years ago
- 200 Hisoka's Abduction 3 years ago
- 201 Interrogating Hisoka 3 years ago
- 202 Unveiling Secrets 3 years ago
- 203 Unveiling even more Secrets 3 years ago
- 204 Story of the Past 3 years ago
- 205 A Matter of Age 3 years ago
- 206 Hot is Hot 3 years ago
- 207 Yuna vs Genin Team 3 years ago
- 208 Battle Evaluation 3 years ago
- 209 An Alternative Timeline 3 years ago
- 210 Kaguya Ootsutsuki 3 years ago
- 211 Training Progress 3 years ago
- 212 Killing Bandits 3 years ago
- 213 Hiruzen's Enlightenment? 3 years ago
- 214 Fox and Turtle 3 years ago
- 215 Raising a Flag 3 years ago
- 216 Naruto meeting Naruto 3 years ago
- 217 Father-in-Law 3 years ago
- 218 Persistence Leads to Success 3 years ago
- 219 Meeting up 3 years ago
- 220 Yuna Teaches Minato the Way 3 years ago
- 221 Corruption of Another Timeline 3 years ago
- 222 Time Travel 101 3 years ago
- 223 Hinata's new Jutsu 3 years ago
- 224 The Puppet Queen 3 years ago
- 225 Who are you and what have you done with Yuna!? 3 years ago
- 226 Three Stage Boss Fight 3 years ago
- 227 Teaching Manners 3 years ago
- 228 Through Time and Space 3 years ago
- 229 Neji Hyuga 3 years ago
- 230 A Minor Oversight 3 years ago
- 231 The Capable Pervert 3 years ago
- 232 Showing off Skills 3 years ago
- 233 Another Dao Appears 3 years ago
- 234 Start of the First Test 3 years ago
- 235 Explaining the First Test 3 years ago
- 236 Moaning in the Control Room 3 years ago
- 237 End of the First Test 3 years ago
- 238 Meeting Fuu 3 years ago
- 239 Yuna's new Skill 3 years ago
- 240 Jinchuuriki Get-Together 3 years ago
- 241 Are you Two Friends? 3 years ago
- 242 How to Become Friends with a Bijuu 3 years ago
- 243 Making 100 Friends? 3 years ago
- 244 Becoming Friends 3 years ago
- 245 Chatting with Gaara 3 years ago
- 246 The Second Test 3 years ago
- 247 Easy Oneshot 3 years ago
- 248 Are you a Good Girl, Fuu? 3 years ago
- 249 The Usual Pattern with a Different Person 3 years ago
- 250 End of the Second Test 3 years ago
- 251 Cold and Calculating 3 years ago
- 252 Preparing to have a Little Chat 3 years ago
- 253 Chatting with a Self Proclaimed God 3 years ago
- 254 The Dao Advances 3 years ago
- 255 For my Cute Sister! 3 years ago
- 256 Fuu Makes Another Friend 3 years ago
- 257 Not the First Wife!? 3 years ago
- 258 Did Somebody Order some Lemons? 3 years ago
- 259 The Next Morning 3 years ago
- 260 Bullying the Bully 3 years ago
- 261 What is this? Even more Lemons!? 3 years ago
- 262 Birth of the Uzumaki Clan's Nightmare 3 years ago
- 263 Getting an Audience with Shibuki 3 years ago
- 264 Talking with Shibuki 3 years ago
- 265 A Little Demonstration 3 years ago
- 266 Suspicious Behaviour 3 years ago
- 267 Casually Breaking Shibuki's Mind 3 years ago
- 268 Forging an Alliance 3 years ago
- 269 Breakthrough 3 years ago
- 270 A Disturbing Image 3 years ago
- 271 Facing Orochimaru 3 years ago
- 272 The Three Coffins 3 years ago
- 273 The Return of an Old Jutsu 3 years ago
- 274 Familiar but Somewhat Different 3 years ago
- 275 Prelude to Battle 3 years ago
- 276 Yet Another New Dao 3 years ago
- 277 Fighting Orochimaru 3 years ago
- 278 The Source of Corruption 3 years ago
- 279 Showing off the New Dao's True Potential 3 years ago
- 280 Sasuke Uchiha, Savior 3 years ago
- 281 Jiraiya's Offer 3 years ago
- 282 A new Resident 3 years ago
- 283 A Familiar Pattern 3 years ago
- 284 Tsunade's F* up 3 years ago
- 285 Chatting with Mito and Tsunade 3 years ago
- 286 Yup, Definitely Another Enemy for Life 3 years ago
- 287 An Unexpected Meeting 3 years ago
- 288 Finding a Common Enemy 3 years ago
- 289 The Source 3 years ago
- 290 What is the Worst That Could Happen? 3 years ago
- 291 Handling the Harem 3 years ago
- 292 Making the Impossible Possible 3 years ago
- 293 The Bad Day of a Normal Bartender 3 years ago
- 294 The Bad Day of a Normal Bartender part 2 3 years ago
- 295 The Bad Day of a Normal Bartender part 3 3 years ago
- 296 Drunk Yuna!? 3 years ago
- 297 The Aftermath 3 years ago
- 298 A Critical Problem 3 years ago
- 299 Another Enem...Nope, Probably not. 3 years ago
- 300 Showing Emotions 3 years ago
- 301 Start of the Third Round 3 years ago
- 302 Fights! 3 years ago
- 303 A Slightly Different Fight 3 years ago
- 304 Just a Little Massage 3 years ago
- 305 Hyuga vs Hyuga 3 years ago
- 306 The Semi-Finals 3 years ago
- 307 Prelude to the Finale 3 years ago
- 308 Seals vs Youth! 3 years ago
- 309 Explanation about the Seal 3 years ago
- 310 Meeting her Students 3 years ago
- 311 The Embarrassed Karin 3 years ago
- 312 Preparing for the Future 3 years ago
- 313 Just beat him up and toss him in. 3 years ago
- 314 I'm from the Future 3 years ago
- 315 Asking for a Spanking 3 years ago
- 316 Pervert meets Fox 3 years ago
- 317 Situation in Iwagakure 3 years ago
- 318 Talking with Hiashi Hyuga 3 years ago
- 319 The Lemons are back! 3 years ago
- 320 LEMONS!!! 3 years ago
- 321 The True Power of the Uzumaki Bloodline 3 years ago
- 322 Another Story of the Past 3 years ago
- 323 Another Breakthrough! 3 years ago
- 324 Hiring another Maid 3 years ago
- 325 Meeting the Harem 3 years ago
- 326 The new Maid 3 years ago
- 327 Welcoming a Guest 3 years ago
- 328 The Hyuga Clan's "Attack" 3 years ago
- 329 Supporting the rise of another Dao 3 years ago
- 330 Internal Conflict 3 years ago
- 331 Taking out the big Guns 3 years ago
- 332 Yuna-sensei, Literally 3 years ago
- 333 Internal Discussion 3 years ago
- 334 Secrets and Manipulation 3 years ago
- 335 An Unexpected Meeting 3 years ago
- 336 Making a very bad Move 3 years ago
- 337 Messing with an Uchiha 3 years ago
- 338 Sasuke's Reality Check 3 years ago
- 339 It's not Seeking Revenge, it's a Good Deed! 3 years ago
- 340 Obito in Hell 3 years ago
- 341 Manipulating Sasuke...again 3 years ago
- 342 Jugo and Suigetsu 3 years ago
- 343 Jiraiya's Death 3 years ago
- 344 Helping out the Future In-Laws 3 years ago
- 345 Helping out the Future In-Laws some more 3 years ago
- 346 Triggering the Switch 3 years ago
- 347 Yuna vs Naruto 3 years ago
- 348 Pushing-the-Blame-no-Jutsu 3 years ago
- 349 Yet another Story of the Past 3 years ago
- 350 Yet another Story of the Past part 2 3 years ago
- 351 Yet another Story of the Past part 3 3 years ago
- 352 Yet another Story of the Past part 4 3 years ago
- 353 Yet another Story of the Past end 3 years ago
- 354 The Curse of Hatred 3 years ago
- 355 Trouble in Suna 3 years ago
- 356 Reporting to Tsunade 3 years ago
- 357 Sakura Haruno 3 years ago
- 358 Comparing Strength 3 years ago
- 359 Elder Chiyo 3 years ago
- 360 The Return of a Long-Forgotten Seal 3 years ago
- 361 Pie Reigns Supreme!? 2 years ago
- 362 I Prefer Punching Things 2 years ago
- 363 A Negative Customer Review 2 years ago
- 364 Fighting Deidara part 1/2 2 years ago
- 365 Fighting Deidara part 2/2 2 years ago
- 366 Against Sasori part 1/2 2 years ago
- 367 Against Sasori part 2/2 2 years ago
- 368 Naruto joins Akatsuki 2 years ago
- 369 The End 2 years ago
- 370 Another Reincarnation!? 2 years ago
- 371 Just A Fun Little Game 2 years ago
- 372 I'm Proud of You 2 years ago
- 373 The Usual 2 years ago
- 374 Making a Deal 2 years ago
- 375 Sasuke reveals his true Power 2 years ago
- 376 Sasuke vs Itachi 2 years ago
- 377 Sasuke's first free attempt 2 years ago
- 378 The Truth about Itachi 2 years ago
- 379 Sasuke's second free attempt part 1/2 2 years ago
- 380 Sasuke's second free attempt part 2/2 2 years ago
- 381 Why should I give a shit about your life goals? 2 years ago
- 382 How to become a Hero 2 years ago
- 383 New and Hot Merchandise 2 years ago
- 384 They are Reliable while being Unreliable 2 years ago
- 385 The Fight for Kubikiribocho 2 years ago
- 386 Official Duties 2 years ago
- 387 The Hyuuga Clans new Path 2 years ago
- 388 It's Contagious!? 2 years ago
- 389 Hinata vs Ino 2 years ago
- 390 A New Title! 2 years ago
- 391 A New Genius appears? 2 years ago
- 392 Akatsuki Meeting 2 years ago
- 393 Prelude to Battle 2 years ago
- 394 Ino vs Pain 2 years ago
- 395 Anko vs Pain 2 years ago
- 396 His Dao vs Pain 2 years ago
- 397 Yuna vs Pain 2 years ago
- 398 The Battle Outside Konoha 2 years ago
- 399 Hinata vs Kakuzu 2 years ago
- 400 Karin vs Hidan 2 years ago
- 401 Haku vs Konan 2 years ago
- 402 Naruto vs Kisame part 1 2 years ago
- 403 Naruto vs Kisame part 2 2 years ago
- 404 Who is Mister Tai? 2 years ago
- 405 How to Achieve True Peace 2 years ago
- 406 I will give the World Pain 2 years ago
- 407 The Uzumaki Clan Compound's Barrier 2 years ago
- 408 Meanwhile, Sasuke... 2 years ago
- 409 My Pain is Greater than Yours 2 years ago
- 410 Chibaku Tensei 2 years ago
- 411 Watching from the Sideline 2 years ago
- 412 A Battle of Will 2 years ago
- 413 He Finally came out! 2 years ago
- 414 You want a little Smooch? 2 years ago
- 415 You want some... eyes? 2 years ago
- 416 A new Path 2 years ago
- 417 A good Candidat 2 years ago
- 418 Here he is again 2 years ago
- 419 A Lost Cause 2 years ago
- 420 New Eyes 2 years ago
- 421 A Letter from Kumogakure 2 years ago
- 422 The Festivities 2 years ago
- 423 Delivering the Letter 2 years ago
- 424 Touring the Uzumaki Compound 2 years ago
- 425 Picking up a Woman while Playing with Another 2 years ago
- 426 Yes, lots of Paperwork 2 years ago
- 427 Negotiations 2 years ago
- 428 Yuna's Schemes get Exposed 2 years ago
- 429 Sasuke and Jugo 2 years ago
- 430 Because I'm Handsome 2 years ago
- 431 Sasuke's Revenge? 2 years ago
- 432 Shikamaru's Thoughts about Yuna 2 years ago
- 433 Yuna's fragile Maiden Heart 2 years ago
- 434 Meeting Gamamaru 2 years ago
- 435 Becoming a Guard 2 years ago
- 436 The Dao Advances 2 years ago
- 437 Messing with Future Sasuke 2 years ago
- 438 Casually Revealing Secrets 2 years ago
- 439 Stepmother 2 years ago
- 440 He Likes to Pierce Things, but not with a Kunai 2 years ago
- 441 Saying what shouldn't be said 2 years ago
- 442 Naruto is here! 2 years ago
- 443 Sasuke, huh? Okay. 2 years ago
- 444 Getting to the important bits... or not 2 years ago
- 445 Mission success. Flawless victory. 2 years ago
- 446 He only coughed out some Blood and fainted. 2 years ago
- 447 Naruto gets Assassinated 2 years ago
- 448 Urashiki Ootsutsuki 2 years ago
- 449 I need to get out of this timeline 2 years ago
- 450 Or maybe not. 2 years ago
- 451 Back to the Future 2 years ago
- 452 Assassination from another Timeline 2 years ago
- 453 It's about "that" 2 years ago
- 454 Relationship Talks 2 years ago
- 455 Start of the Summit 2 years ago
- 456 Sorry, I acted on Instinct. 2 years ago
- 457 I'm nobody's Pawn 2 years ago
- 458 What the hell happened to her? 2 years ago
- 459 A little Lemon 2 years ago
- 460 Yobai 2 years ago
- 461 A big Lemon 2 years ago
- 462 Yet another Story of the Past... again. 2 years ago
- 463 Oh? Another Enemy for Life? It's been a while~ 2 years ago
- 464 Ohhh, again! 2 years ago
- 465 Looking at a good Show 2 years ago
- 466 Unlocking Potential 2 years ago
- 467 Unlocking more Potential 2 years ago
- 468 Yuna's Defeat 2 years ago
- 469 Corruption 2 years ago
- 470 Fate 2 years ago
- 471 Squid vs Octopus 2 years ago
- 472 Yet another Story of the past... again... again 2 years ago
- 473 Yet another Story of the past... again... again part 2 2 years ago
- 474 Yet another Story of the past... again... again part 3 2 years ago
- 475 Not a chapter 2 years ago
- 476 Yet another Story of the past… again… again final part 2 years ago
- 477 Evil Yuna 2 years ago
- 478 Was it really Evil Yuna? 2 years ago
- 479 Dark Naruto 2 years ago
- 480 Meeting Gyuki 2 years ago
- 481 Bad News 2 years ago
- 482 Is that porn? 2 years ago
- 483 A Speech 2 years ago
- 484 Why do we fight wars? 2 years ago
- 485 Egging on the Crowd 2 years ago
- 486 An Angry Old Man 2 years ago
- 487 Report about Team 69 2 years ago
- 488 Pervert meets Pervert 2 years ago
- 489 Cutting the Connection 2 years ago
- 490 Enemy for Life? Maybe? 2 years ago
- 491 Someone's in Trouble 2 years ago
- 492 Bijuu vs Bijuu 2 years ago
- 493 Unexpected Meeting 2 years ago
- 494 A Blessing from the Lady 2 years ago
- 495 Meeting her old Sensei 2 years ago
- 496 Team Tsundere 2 years ago
- 497 Haku + Zabuza vs A 2 years ago
- 498 Let's do some Culling 2 years ago
- 499 Two Coffins 2 years ago
- 500 LET'S DANCE!!! 2 years ago
- 501 Yuna and Naruto vs Madara and Hashirama 2 years ago
- 502 Yuna's Strongest Jutsu 2 years ago
- 503 Just let go of your Pride 2 years ago
- 504 It Begins 2 years ago
- 505 Battle of Titans 2 years ago
- 506 Easy Clap 2 years ago
- 507 Making a Huge Mistake 2 years ago
- 508 A Flag! 2 years ago
- 509 Second Stage 2 years ago
- 510 Thanks for the Meal 2 years ago
- 511 Finally, I'm back 2 years ago
- 512 Smile 2 years ago
- 513 Finally 2 years ago
- 514 Starting It 2 years ago
- 515 Oops, my Yuna is Showing~ 2 years ago
- 516 I will Savor this Battle 2 years ago
- 517 The Eighth Gate? 2 years ago
- 518 Come, MADARA!!! 2 years ago
- 519 The Speech 2 years ago
- 520 Infinite Tsukuyomi 2 years ago
- 521 Meeting the Sage 2 years ago
- 522 The Greediest 2 years ago
- 523 Zetsu's Despair 2 years ago
- 524 The Fight Continues 2 years ago
- 525 Let's End This 2 years ago
- 526 Kaguya Ootsutsuki 2 years ago
- 527 It Begins 2 years ago
- 528 Sealing Kaguya 2 years ago
- 529 One Last Time 2 years ago
- 530 The True Puppetmaster? 2 years ago
- 531 Slightly Edited History 2 years ago
- 532 The Ootsutsuki's Clan's Past 2 years ago
- 533 The Final Story of the Past 1/2 2 years ago
- 534 The Final Story of the Past 2/2 2 years ago
- 535 Another kind of Battle 2 years ago
- 536 Out of the Mindscape 2 years ago
- 537 Sasuke's Third Try? 2 years ago
- 538 The Forgotten One 2 years ago
- 539 Accusations 2 years ago
- 540 Politics? Nah, Bribery 2 years ago
- 541 The Final Move 2 years ago
- 542 Author Note + A little Rant 2 years ago
- 543 Side Story: Rock Lee 2 years ago
- 544 Side Story: Sakura x Sa... tsuki? 2 years ago
- 545 Side Story: Yuna's True Power 2 years ago
- 546 Side Story: Getting some Toys 2 years ago
- 547 Side Story: The New Hokage 2 years ago
- 548 Taking a Walk 2 years ago
- 549 Yuna. Occupation: Researcher 2 years ago
- 550 Infinitely Expanding 2 years ago
- 551 3 Side Stories 2 years ago
- 552 Yuno Uzumaki 2 years ago
- 553 Natto Uzumaki 2 years ago
- 554 Kathrin Uzumaki 2 years ago
- 555 Split the Clouds 2 years ago
- 556 Some more Otsutsuki 2 years ago
- 557 Scientific Ninja Tools 2 years ago
- 558 A Powerful Opponent 2 years ago
- 559 Attacking Kara 2 years ago
- 560 An actual Powerful Opponent? 2 years ago
- 561 Epilogue 2 years ago
- 562 New Novel 2 years ago
Very humorous take on the entire reborn into Naruto theme. Have to say it’s a really refreshing sense of humour. Not the typical gags that have been done to death but really surprising original jokes or inspiration taken from somewhere I don’t know haha. The dialogue is great and characters really pop and aren’t cookie cutter shaped exposition or cliches. There’s a satisfying lifestyle they’re living And it’s great. No knowledge of Naruto the series but a whole bunch of outside context powers gathered through years of Xianxia living. Lots of fun situations happened and will probably happen in the future. Great stories like this send me to the authors profile in hopes they’ve written a few more stories haha. Unfortunately this is the first for this profile but hopefully it won’t be the last :)