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It’s a really good book i hope that the author will continue the book and add more chapters.
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I really like this novel, it is good and entertaining, however it feels bad that there is a chapter blocker so early in chapter 20, but still very good
read the comments bellow and I'm interested in reading this novel, it seem like an interesting read. right wish me luck in diving in to the novel now.
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Decent forging novel better than " Forging The Path To Godliness". MC has a system that helps him compete against other blacksmiths and he uses his ability to push back against overbearing Sect members.
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Have you read Gourmet in another world, or Black tech internet café? If the answer is yes, then you have also already read this book. The only difference is that this one has blacksmithing instead of cooking, or shop-owning. It doesn't really matter anyway, because the plot also means that there are no other redeeming qualities. The MC has is both petty and has no motivation or agency. He could be swapped for anyone else, and the story wouldn't change. There are no new ideas in this system for the genre, he has a system, the system makes him good at a skill, and makes him make it overpriced but also makes a quest for him to use it in a tiny amount of time. Fortunately, someone who doesn't care for some reason that it's overpriced asks him to do it. The system allows him to do it, and people are shocked. This exact synopsis can be put on any of the other stories in this genre. he is repairing a sword, but he could be cooking fried rice, or selling a video game. Which, along with this being the first 5 chapters, is why there isn't a spoiler tag on this review. I have not yet seen this genre done well, and it isn't happening here. DO NOT WASTE YOUR MONEY
Can’t wait for the others chapters to come . please More chapters now. 🥺 😢🥺😔🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😢😢😢😢😔😔😔😔🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
Good face slapping novel Pretty brazen MC from the get go ticking offmore and more powerful people Hopefully this will make the cut fir thenext round
its all right, mostly, but there's also lots of stupid things in it... so... you when met with it its really annoying.... yea that's about it......
Fantastically ORIGINAL! A refreshing blow(=read) ; amongst others it is damn difficult and hard to stand out... Least of all be original and unique WHEN in a "theme" or "genre" ,- that has been all but exhausted! But you (author) and this book stand out 99MM on originality of USEAGE of background materials and your universe "FILL stuff" so to say. NOT that it is fill meant in the normal way of cource. I originally began on my own novel in 1996... A mix of Gibson, Sterling and Dean Koontz ; in "Linda and Valentine" / "Valeria n and the city of 10.000 planets" setting. And I find yours to be both EQUALLY as more so versatile in its incorporation of all elements and fundamentals as characters and background as "flavour text" describitions of situations and environment and fellings as emotions :-)
Better be overgeared . Its a proper gaming novel instead i would say story could be better. You may like it for begginer
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I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.
A subpar novel that introduces nothing new to the genre. Main character spends more time trading insults with other people than forging. For whatever reason enemies pop out left and right regardless of age. 2.5/5 stars.
It's got face slapping if you're into that. The Mc seems is a idiot who doesn't understand nuance and what his place in the world is, he is a mortal vs cultivators and he antagonize them for a bet because obviously they don't believe a mortal can repair a immortal sword (basic flying sword). the bet is his life for breaking said sword and if he wins the humiliation of the cultivator, like what? he is basically homeless with only the workshop. so instead of money to pay off the debts his parents incurred after thier death he wants something vain for his ego. he was literally useless before the system, living like a rich young master with the income of his cultivator parents.
Petition to bring back nurturing humanity ................................................................................................
enjoyed the story so far hope to get the rest of the story but who knows what will happen...all we can do is wait for the results but I'm hopeful
Is the author an idiot? I'm up to chapter 7 and I can already spot a lot of brain-cell-killing paragraphs and plot armours that could be avoided if the author just brings up information earlier, add in something, reinforce previous points etc. For example: The MC spouts a load of technical terms and it wouldn't have sounded so dumb if author described how he got the info first. (Spoiler btw) (Through the system) Then the MC will sound witty, not brain cell killing. Secondly, (SPOILER btw) the girl 'Han'er something', used the repaired low-tier flying knife in a spar even though she's the only daughter of a master. Give me a reason why can't she afford something better?! The author shouldve said that it's because of sentimental value here, as it became another plot armour. Again.
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I honestly really like this book, not to many good forging books. wish It could be updated more. though it is a niche subject most other ones are way to fast pace.
It’s a really good book i hope that the author will continue the book and add more chapters.
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Its as chef Ramsey says.......,....................,.....[img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins]
I really like this novel, it is good and entertaining, however it feels bad that there is a chapter blocker so early in chapter 20, but still very good
read the comments bellow and I'm interested in reading this novel, it seem like an interesting read. right wish me luck in diving in to the novel now.
No No NO _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
hilarious 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
E CD de DC be f free Ff getfg he CGH the f by g G by G be fix de ex get th try to tryg he hhhhbbgggfcggggggtgfff carffff he hjh Garry I was a great job w wee sure eq Wei try we we I we have a equity account and I will
Adorei a História aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
Decent forging novel better than " Forging The Path To Godliness". MC has a system that helps him compete against other blacksmiths and he uses his ability to push back against overbearing Sect members.
Sigh~ °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° °°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°°° Sigh~
Have you read Gourmet in another world, or Black tech internet café? If the answer is yes, then you have also already read this book. The only difference is that this one has blacksmithing instead of cooking, or shop-owning. It doesn't really matter anyway, because the plot also means that there are no other redeeming qualities. The MC has is both petty and has no motivation or agency. He could be swapped for anyone else, and the story wouldn't change. There are no new ideas in this system for the genre, he has a system, the system makes him good at a skill, and makes him make it overpriced but also makes a quest for him to use it in a tiny amount of time. Fortunately, someone who doesn't care for some reason that it's overpriced asks him to do it. The system allows him to do it, and people are shocked. This exact synopsis can be put on any of the other stories in this genre. he is repairing a sword, but he could be cooking fried rice, or selling a video game. Which, along with this being the first 5 chapters, is why there isn't a spoiler tag on this review. I have not yet seen this genre done well, and it isn't happening here. DO NOT WASTE YOUR MONEY
Can’t wait for the others chapters to come . please More chapters now. 🥺 😢🥺😔🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺😢😢😢😢😔😔😔😔🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺
Good face slapping novel Pretty brazen MC from the get go ticking offmore and more powerful people Hopefully this will make the cut fir thenext round
its all right, mostly, but there's also lots of stupid things in it... so... you when met with it its really annoying.... yea that's about it......
Fantastically ORIGINAL! A refreshing blow(=read) ; amongst others it is damn difficult and hard to stand out... Least of all be original and unique WHEN in a "theme" or "genre" ,- that has been all but exhausted! But you (author) and this book stand out 99MM on originality of USEAGE of background materials and your universe "FILL stuff" so to say. NOT that it is fill meant in the normal way of cource. I originally began on my own novel in 1996... A mix of Gibson, Sterling and Dean Koontz ; in "Linda and Valentine" / "Valeria n and the city of 10.000 planets" setting. And I find yours to be both EQUALLY as more so versatile in its incorporation of all elements and fundamentals as characters and background as "flavour text" describitions of situations and environment and fellings as emotions :-)
Better be overgeared . Its a proper gaming novel instead i would say story could be better. You may like it for begginer
ihh bgf hknnhg ht ghuu gf hvg fthb gffc kil jhnm jggbnn hffbh hjngvbm jhghjhgg km jhvb kmbhj jhbnm mkl8unfr4gbn gtfg gtfbbb gttfgh hgfvhb zz
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I can see that this is happening like a original cultivate novel where some thing bad or trade happens and they get something good like a system or a artifact that can change there life. First of all why can't the parents not died it almost happens on every single novel so the Main character can be independent.
A subpar novel that introduces nothing new to the genre. Main character spends more time trading insults with other people than forging. For whatever reason enemies pop out left and right regardless of age. 2.5/5 stars.
It's got face slapping if you're into that. The Mc seems is a idiot who doesn't understand nuance and what his place in the world is, he is a mortal vs cultivators and he antagonize them for a bet because obviously they don't believe a mortal can repair a immortal sword (basic flying sword). the bet is his life for breaking said sword and if he wins the humiliation of the cultivator, like what? he is basically homeless with only the workshop. so instead of money to pay off the debts his parents incurred after thier death he wants something vain for his ego. he was literally useless before the system, living like a rich young master with the income of his cultivator parents.
Petition to bring back nurturing humanity ................................................................................................
enjoyed the story so far hope to get the rest of the story but who knows what will happen...all we can do is wait for the results but I'm hopeful
Is the author an idiot? I'm up to chapter 7 and I can already spot a lot of brain-cell-killing paragraphs and plot armours that could be avoided if the author just brings up information earlier, add in something, reinforce previous points etc. For example: The MC spouts a load of technical terms and it wouldn't have sounded so dumb if author described how he got the info first. (Spoiler btw) (Through the system) Then the MC will sound witty, not brain cell killing. Secondly, (SPOILER btw) the girl 'Han'er something', used the repaired low-tier flying knife in a spar even though she's the only daughter of a master. Give me a reason why can't she afford something better?! The author shouldve said that it's because of sentimental value here, as it became another plot armour. Again.
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Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh, Heh ****************************************************************************************************************************************************************
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm ************************************************************************************************************************
I honestly really like this book, not to many good forging books. wish It could be updated more. though it is a niche subject most other ones are way to fast pace.