Cold Hearted Devil Fell In Love

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Littlepunnie

Hello! I'm curious about the female lead's background, reminds me of Ning Xi, and the male lead kinda reminds me of Jin Liwei, so it's a plus point :wink. Your writing style was lined with 'on spot ' and no to dilly-dallying. There were minimal errors in terms of grammar and capitalization. I suggest you to hand in some transition words? It will help your book to be flowy! I've only read 6 chapters , so I am not profound with concluding about the story development. Anyways, the story plot was, wow. You made me read it with your own unique style of expressing your story. ( By the way, I would like to advice you in writing the expressions, and the tone of voice for your characters? Minimal but not lacking. But overall, goodies(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤!) There were some parts where I was confused but, then again, I was back on track bbecause, it really was quite intriguing. I am hoping to know more about the female lead Ivy, and Noah! Also, I'm hoping- hoping- to read some spicy love triangle ( if there are ) since Ivy's personality kinda makes everyone be well and open to her. She is a sunny, domineering lady in my eyes adorned with glasses XD. This is a MUST read! I'll look forward to your journey as a writer! (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤

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latteectrie

Well, what can I say about this book? Very likeable, smart, strong FL ʕง•ᴥ•ʔง Cold ML (but not for our Ivy) ʕ ˵• ₒ •˵ ʔ I can't wait to see how this further develops... I hope that Ivy and Noah will have beautiful relationship in the future as well. Ah and I waiting for smut chapters! HE HE.

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Daoistvd2TNF

love it thank u for such beautiful write up just loved reading the book a big thank you author would like to read more if you r are publishing more books

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IrishCerberus

Ivy is a strong female lead, she's so fiesty to the male lead. male lead is cold hearted ceo but only warm to ivy. No ra*e and any misunderstandings are quickly sorted. Well done author 👏 I look forward to reading more 👍

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Lonely_Nana_

I read the novel and just love both Noah and Ivy they are just perfect couple ❤️❤️ And love the novel part that it's complete not hanging me in midway💙💙

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Debbe_Phillips

So this story is one i stumBled across and i tell what it was worth the time and coins i love it and if you the chance to read it please it’s worth it

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jafr86

This is my second review I am now current to the latest chapter. I really enjoyed this novel because the writing is smoothly done and its a novel you can just sit done and enjoy from being to end in a single sitting. The FL and ML are well characterized along with the plot being exciting and the story only get better with each chapter. The novel is now at 100 plus chapters and the characters are getting really fleshed out especially the FL which makes this a perfect time to start following this story before its too far in the chapter count.

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Misumi

awesome female lead very fierce and bold...sometimes crazier than expected but the devil balances her flames with his ice!!!! great work!!!!!!!!!!!

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EdMakuKusune

Your story is the very first romance novel that had me reading for so long. Grammar seems fine but needs more. You have a great story plot and a fine MC.

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Sailow_Sanchez

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Dumpling_Aunt

I am half way through the novel, but its a very interesting novel, the male lead is possessive in a sweet way.. I love Thomas too... keep going author..

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Devanne_Chin

Overall the story was short sweet and to the point. The FL was not weak which I appreciate and both characters compliment each other. I would say job well done.

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JNNR

Great build up and great story plot. ♥️♥️♥️♥️

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Psyduck2003

I don’t remember how many times I’ve read this book. Love it!

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Nosliw

This is such a light hearted reading 🥰🥰 initially I thought it might be dark or clichéd but it's not. It's a very simple love story between people of two different world who accepts each others good and bad sides and love unconditionally. There is not unwanted heartbreak or clichéd plot twist. Even the torturing parts are not gruesome. I believe it's a book anybody can read. It highlights the trust and understanding a couple should have towards each others and their feelings are spoken with action and not in words. I was so much engrossed in this novel that I finished reading this is in less than 20 hours and I'm very happy with this story. I highly recommend this book to be read ❤🧡💛💚💙💜 A kind note to the author: Please to focus on vocabulary especially when it comes to the pronouns 😊

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Spirit2004

A CLASSIC novel indeed I just love the story concept, writing quality beautiful story development amazing, character design EXCELLENT. No unnecessary storyline it was just PERFECT on its own I just addicted to it. A BIG kudos to you author 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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Judy_Miller_9789

I really liked this story. It was not a long drawn out book. I loved the way Noah and Ivy interacted and the way Ivy treated her friends. Hoping for a future book on Noah and Ivy's children. I can imagine a little Noah protecting a little Ivy and also A big Noah killing any boy coming near his little Ivy. That would be great.

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qwertyanu

I completed reading this novel and it's totally good, I never wanted to end reading it. Also hope that the author can create other novel for it's continuance

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mhryu

A beautiful story. Though there were grammars and spelling errors here and there, overall stories were well written. Thank you for the lovely read. Had truly enjoyed the journey of Noel and Ivy. Love the brotherhood and loyalties of Aiden, Thomas and Matteo. Loved how protective they had been over Ivy especially Thomas. 🥰

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Ley_D_May

The POV shuffles every time, it's harhard to read it and imagine the situation. that's all but the story is good tho maybe you should try it.