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Dayummmm! That story flow tho... It's majestic I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it I love it ✨✨✨✨
There can always be improvements to writing , but i love the way this story is conveyed and how the characters are expressed . keep up the hard work!
I like how the author made the story, the details and the flow is really clear... I simply love it... and don't call it crappy... it's a beautiful and fascinating story... And I love it ❤
The story just got me hooked. The writing and flow of story is so smooth, that it has compel me to read till the end. The Author has done justice with the story. You all lot will not regret reading it.
Now this is a good one, Though it's similar to one of the novel I know but still a great job. I hope that you continue to write more, Please do that Bye bye
Overall, its good, It relates to one Novel I know, but I won't say, probably that was your inspiration to write this, So far so good, But needs more updates
The synopsis gave me vibes that reassured me that this book would be interesting to read... and after reading it I am pretty amazed too..... writing style of the author is really good.... pls keep on updating!!!
I am not going to point out how similiar it is the another book that I will not be naming. All of the POV switches can get very confusing and the one line at a time is very drawn out and can become boring. It’s well written and has an interesting storyline.
The story really pulls me in, the writer has a really great style! This novel has some really funny moments aswell, I'm really enjoying it so far!😍
The story is moving along well and I like how the characters interact with each other. While I am not a system fan its not a bad story and I wish the author luck.
It's really interesting! The main character's life is well-described, plus the story is getting more great through the chapters. Can't wait to read more!!
Is this fantasy? I saw something like status board. Wow~ Give me more chapters right now. I demand an update right now.（＾∀＾●）ﾉｼ But this lady is willing to wait. Do your best author.
Such a tragedy. I won't say anymore as most will only be spoilers. I can't say I can't relate but sometimes the world would be like that for a few people, and it can't be denied---that is the general outline for the story. Well done author Cheers;
Lucrus!!!! I am here again?!! Hehe! I love your works! I really do! Please Pat me Please hehe! I Want more of your stories! Send me more! hehe, It's so good!
It is very great story, and I hope everyone to read it. The plot was very nice, it's written in good terms. The MC are very well, and the story has a good sense of humor. I like it much
Amazing Story Senpai, I hope the Main character becomes a hot dashing Character like that K novel Guy, I hope you know What I am saying, Please update more
Brother Nom!! The book is sooo nice! I felt pity for the MC! Is it your Story? I mean your real life story? It feels so real! Oh! Brother Nom do Write more!
I love how you delivered the character's feelings and how you built your imagination in your story. You are doing well this is way better than mine😄.
I really loved the story. I loved the way how the story starts. The flow in the story seems so realistic. Its like reading a manga. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Please continue to write more.
This book just like the book "Not all heroes fight against Evil" If I remember it correctly. They both reincarnated in an unknown place. Or so I thought? By this story kind of different. Good to read more of this book! Good job author! 😊