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As much as people may not like the idea of how the Mc tempers his body, you have to remember it's a fictional story. I can't speak for others but I focus more on if I enjoy the world and interactions of the people than if it seems logic in reality. and honestly, it's great writing quality. An immrrsive world and a story I can get behind, give it a try if you feel the same.
now this is neat like real neat, definitely vote for this one It's the most unique out of the batch and I'm a big fan of like body tempering
i do really like this story. yeah it start's with a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
rooting for this to get picked, tho i ahvent read the other trials yet so can recommend please? word count word count word count wrod count word count
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The world background is poor. I wish the author would give more details regarding the era. There is no backstory nothing.***********************
Honestly, even though the way that the MC is literally forging his body is a cool idea. The character personality and the Antagonist is just so boring. MC is just a classic powerful guy who is morally impervious. And the enemies are demon beast. It's like really? One of the most boring things to read is when authors turn a natural disasters type problem into the main enemy. Is dull and unenjoyable for anybody who atleast wants to be allowed think about who is right and wrong but instead gives a simplistic view... so if it changes tell me but until then leaving this with 2 stars.
Very interesting so far, different from other transmigration trash. BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS
Not your average cultivation + weapons forging novel. The protagonist starts off old, but uses his Holy Flame to forge himself a new body. As his forging and tempering progresses, he actually gets younger and stronger. Since the protagonist is an older male, there isn't any romance (as of yet). Just straightforward smithing, monster hunting, and manly determination.
Don't get baited by the old mc premise. I could only read 4 chapters of this. So much random plot armor. Might be a decent read if you are looking for a no brain required power fantasy novel with a blacksmith who will probably turn into a warrior anyway lol. Good thing is that it does not try to hide and you can easily understand what type of story is so u won't waste to much time if it's not your thing.
https://m.qidian.com/book/1025025602/617443502 this is a link where this can be read since this site doesn't want to post it ...............
Well no one is releasing chapters so why even putting in on the site? just take it off... BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLABLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA
more chapters pls ------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
well its been a while. still no more than 1 chapter...will this even be translated or what? RANDMON CHARS SO I CAN SPEAK MY MIND RANDMON CHARS SO I CAN SPEAK MY MIND
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dear author/translator, can u tell us the update cicle of your book, please? i think that chapter 1 has potential, and ill watch the story development with great interest.
I'd definitely read this book. I've revised my 1 star review now that there is 1 chapter. The real negative issue is with Webnovel's PC vs App discordance. From a PC you can't see the Contest or benefit from it. Thus when this batch of empty covers with only a synopsis landed in the NEW ONGOING Releases as viewed from a PC it garnered lots of hate from me and others like me that didn't understand the problem.
It looks interesting and I like the fact that the protagonist is old, hopefully that makes him smarter!!!!!
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NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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As much as people may not like the idea of how the Mc tempers his body, you have to remember it's a fictional story. I can't speak for others but I focus more on if I enjoy the world and interactions of the people than if it seems logic in reality. and honestly, it's great writing quality. An immrrsive world and a story I can get behind, give it a try if you feel the same.
now this is neat like real neat, definitely vote for this one It's the most unique out of the batch and I'm a big fan of like body tempering
i do really like this story. yeah it start's with a system-but it is quite fun system start,with some gentle and actually fun humour. Story is not bad(hard to say more after mangy 40 chapters),hope it will stay solid. and 1 more important thing-this is not another crappy pet story.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
rooting for this to get picked, tho i ahvent read the other trials yet so can recommend please? word count word count word count wrod count word count
60 capÃtulos de leitura teste. 60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.60 capÃtulos de leitura teste.
The world background is poor. I wish the author would give more details regarding the era. There is no backstory nothing.***********************
Honestly, even though the way that the MC is literally forging his body is a cool idea. The character personality and the Antagonist is just so boring. MC is just a classic powerful guy who is morally impervious. And the enemies are demon beast. It's like really? One of the most boring things to read is when authors turn a natural disasters type problem into the main enemy. Is dull and unenjoyable for anybody who atleast wants to be allowed think about who is right and wrong but instead gives a simplistic view... so if it changes tell me but until then leaving this with 2 stars.
Very interesting so far, different from other transmigration trash. BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS BRING BACK 40 FREE CHAPTERS
Not your average cultivation + weapons forging novel. The protagonist starts off old, but uses his Holy Flame to forge himself a new body. As his forging and tempering progresses, he actually gets younger and stronger. Since the protagonist is an older male, there isn't any romance (as of yet). Just straightforward smithing, monster hunting, and manly determination.
Don't get baited by the old mc premise. I could only read 4 chapters of this. So much random plot armor. Might be a decent read if you are looking for a no brain required power fantasy novel with a blacksmith who will probably turn into a warrior anyway lol. Good thing is that it does not try to hide and you can easily understand what type of story is so u won't waste to much time if it's not your thing.
https://m.qidian.com/book/1025025602/617443502 this is a link where this can be read since this site doesn't want to post it ...............
Well no one is releasing chapters so why even putting in on the site? just take it off... BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLABLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA BLABLA
more chapters pls ------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
well its been a while. still no more than 1 chapter...will this even be translated or what? RANDMON CHARS SO I CAN SPEAK MY MIND RANDMON CHARS SO I CAN SPEAK MY MIND
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dear author/translator, can u tell us the update cicle of your book, please? i think that chapter 1 has potential, and ill watch the story development with great interest.
I'd definitely read this book. I've revised my 1 star review now that there is 1 chapter. The real negative issue is with Webnovel's PC vs App discordance. From a PC you can't see the Contest or benefit from it. Thus when this batch of empty covers with only a synopsis landed in the NEW ONGOING Releases as viewed from a PC it garnered lots of hate from me and others like me that didn't understand the problem.
It looks interesting and I like the fact that the protagonist is old, hopefully that makes him smarter!!!!!
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Membuka SPOILER NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NEED CHAPTER! !!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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