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TRUTH AUTHOR why did you make the MC of this novel into D girl more better than genderbender female or male..That's why I hate EPIC OF CATERPILLAR that novel is so dumb with a gender bender. the novel is centered male hero but why is THE MC Kureina female always it dumb why not D GIRL . EPIC OF CATERPILLAR IS DUMB NOVEL Kureina is a total marriage sue who those not work hard for anything and she eats the human children because they are useless and for the skill points..kireina is so dumb she did not take science and technology skills SCIENCE IS GOD..why was your novel this FTNR
it's a good book for the first 5 volumes it was very good, there are some mistakes in maintaining the status, but it's still good. the only flaw is that in the 6th volume the author started writing in the 3rd person and filling the chapters with descriptions that don't provide much usefulness to the way things go.
A good read so far... That's all I can say. It's been a while since a nice story caught my eye. So, let's see how it goes. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
if you ignore how much time pass it is a good novel but it will become worse as the ch go she become an empire with barely 200 people and in 3 days it will become a city with kids women become pregnant in 1 day and give birth the day after XD XD XD 3 star for a good world background and a passable ch design and writing quality and stab of upp with a trash story dev
Membuka SPOILER
A great start and really enjoyable and as it gets later on MC becomes a bit of a wimp, getting dominated by her loved ones including pretty much getting r*ped and forced pregnancy. Ended up dropping it after that, shame they turned a strong character into something lesser.
I have read more than 200 chapters. one thing I found is don't use status for word filler. .. If the annoying same status screen is removed the your book will be half the chapters I think. [stop using status to increase words and it's annoying , also people pay for it so dont waste their money on chapters where half chapter is status some is something from last chapter and just 35% new chapter..
the genre is so refreshing and the character is distinct, I cannot wait for their further development ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely
My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely
My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return Act IV My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface
small pet peave just got to around chapter 100 but she checkes her states like 2 times every chapter and instead of shorting it as the author only wants to shoe one thing they show the whole states I Swear I've seen the status about every chapter and by the time I'm done reading I'll probably have memerized every skill in there. this gets about 5 times more annoying when you use the audio setting on here your sitting there for like 3 minutes listening to the status for the 100th time and as it gets longer I Swear I'm going to spend 15 minutes in class just listening to the status.
super enjoying the charachter developments is quite good the story is quite slow
Just added to my library and like it a lot! The first few chapters do have some grammr errors but the plotline, character, her system plus skills are really interesting. The fact that she start from a feather to a Raptor is very unique since other stories turn their FL to dragon. Can see where your inspiration from 😉🖤
Membuka SPOILER
I love this story and the only reason I stopped reading was because of all the chapters I had to re-get even though it was free the day before. But still its great.
I loved this novel, I'm reading all the time. The main reason I love these novels is that the protagonist is a monster and evolves by eating other beings.
I relly like the characters and there there disigns and characters development and worldbuilding also the evolutions are realy dope the only problem i have so far is some minor level inconsistent from time to time and my personal opinion is the level up so slowly whitch i hate. 4/5
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I love this story so far! I wish you update more often but i told pancakes about your novel, saying gow it was inspired by epic of caterpillar and she was super happy about it! Everything is great with the novel, hopefully The mc starts crafting also or anything else instead of fighting Only (im only 24 chapters or so in)
Hello I have noticed your novel, I read it and it was pretty fun, it makes me happy that my novel inspired someone to write their own story, keep going, may Kireina-sama bless your writing
I CAN'T HANDLE MC PERSONALITY SHE'S LIKE MY ANNOYING GIRLFRIEND THAT ALWAYS CHANGE MOOD EVERY MINUTES HAHAHAHAHAHA ANG ALSO WHY THE HECKK SYSTEM CONSIDER MC SETELMENT INTO KINGDOM WITH 100-POPULATION?? ANYWAY BYEE
Honestly, I didn't have high expectations after the first half of the first volume as it kinda seemed like an EoC copy and the pacing, grammar, and kingdom building were wack, but after you introduced the planes, I became really invested. I can see why you included that it differs later on from EoC in the description. Writing quality has gotten much better as of the later chapters, story development is getting somewhere after the hints you placed in the second volume, and the world background is probably the most interesting to me. It seems like a cool concept that differs from realms or worlds. But, it's still basically a tower, kind of. Well, I'm just excited for what's to come and hope you don't screw up and I hope you learned from the first volume's mistakes.
Membuka SPOILER
~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~ Good things~ Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system. Bad things~ Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.
I realy like the story but i realy hate the POV of the secondari characters during a moment like a war like if it is the POV of the wifes or childrens of her it is ok but when it is the POV of some Randon char i realy hate but except for those i Love the story
that novel was good up until chapter 50 something then it became hard to keep reading
TRUTH AUTHOR why did you make the MC of this novel into D girl more better than genderbender female or male..That's why I hate EPIC OF CATERPILLAR that novel is so dumb with a gender bender. the novel is centered male hero but why is THE MC Kureina female always it dumb why not D GIRL . EPIC OF CATERPILLAR IS DUMB NOVEL Kureina is a total marriage sue who those not work hard for anything and she eats the human children because they are useless and for the skill points..kireina is so dumb she did not take science and technology skills SCIENCE IS GOD..why was your novel this FTNR
it's a good book for the first 5 volumes it was very good, there are some mistakes in maintaining the status, but it's still good. the only flaw is that in the 6th volume the author started writing in the 3rd person and filling the chapters with descriptions that don't provide much usefulness to the way things go.
A good read so far... That's all I can say. It's been a while since a nice story caught my eye. So, let's see how it goes. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
if you ignore how much time pass it is a good novel but it will become worse as the ch go she become an empire with barely 200 people and in 3 days it will become a city with kids women become pregnant in 1 day and give birth the day after XD XD XD 3 star for a good world background and a passable ch design and writing quality and stab of upp with a trash story dev
Membuka SPOILER A great start and really enjoyable and as it gets later on MC becomes a bit of a wimp, getting dominated by her loved ones including pretty much getting r*ped and forced pregnancy. Ended up dropping it after that, shame they turned a strong character into something lesser.
I have read more than 200 chapters. one thing I found is don't use status for word filler. .. If the annoying same status screen is removed the your book will be half the chapters I think. [stop using status to increase words and it's annoying , also people pay for it so dont waste their money on chapters where half chapter is status some is something from last chapter and just 35% new chapter..
the genre is so refreshing and the character is distinct, I cannot wait for their further development ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely
There is no hate, only joy For you are beloved by the goddess Hero of the dawn, Healer of worlds Dreams of the morrow hath the shattered soul Pride is lost Wings stripped away, the end is nigh
My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely
My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely
My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return Act IV My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface
small pet peave just got to around chapter 100 but she checkes her states like 2 times every chapter and instead of shorting it as the author only wants to shoe one thing they show the whole states I Swear I've seen the status about every chapter and by the time I'm done reading I'll probably have memerized every skill in there. this gets about 5 times more annoying when you use the audio setting on here your sitting there for like 3 minutes listening to the status for the 100th time and as it gets longer I Swear I'm going to spend 15 minutes in class just listening to the status.
super enjoying the charachter developments is quite good the story is quite slow
Just added to my library and like it a lot! The first few chapters do have some grammr errors but the plotline, character, her system plus skills are really interesting. The fact that she start from a feather to a Raptor is very unique since other stories turn their FL to dragon. Can see where your inspiration from 😉🖤
Membuka SPOILER I love this story and the only reason I stopped reading was because of all the chapters I had to re-get even though it was free the day before. But still its great.
I loved this novel, I'm reading all the time. The main reason I love these novels is that the protagonist is a monster and evolves by eating other beings.
I relly like the characters and there there disigns and characters development and worldbuilding also the evolutions are realy dope the only problem i have so far is some minor level inconsistent from time to time and my personal opinion is the level up so slowly whitch i hate. 4/5
Good........................good ..........expo.............. good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............Good........................good ..........expo..............
I love this story so far! I wish you update more often but i told pancakes about your novel, saying gow it was inspired by epic of caterpillar and she was super happy about it! Everything is great with the novel, hopefully The mc starts crafting also or anything else instead of fighting Only (im only 24 chapters or so in)
Hello I have noticed your novel, I read it and it was pretty fun, it makes me happy that my novel inspired someone to write their own story, keep going, may Kireina-sama bless your writing
I CAN'T HANDLE MC PERSONALITY SHE'S LIKE MY ANNOYING GIRLFRIEND THAT ALWAYS CHANGE MOOD EVERY MINUTES HAHAHAHAHAHA ANG ALSO WHY THE HECKK SYSTEM CONSIDER MC SETELMENT INTO KINGDOM WITH 100-POPULATION?? ANYWAY BYEE
Honestly, I didn't have high expectations after the first half of the first volume as it kinda seemed like an EoC copy and the pacing, grammar, and kingdom building were wack, but after you introduced the planes, I became really invested. I can see why you included that it differs later on from EoC in the description. Writing quality has gotten much better as of the later chapters, story development is getting somewhere after the hints you placed in the second volume, and the world background is probably the most interesting to me. It seems like a cool concept that differs from realms or worlds. But, it's still basically a tower, kind of. Well, I'm just excited for what's to come and hope you don't screw up and I hope you learned from the first volume's mistakes.
Membuka SPOILER ~I put both good and bad in the reviw so scroll down to see both~ Good things~ Okay so ive only reas about 40 chapters so far so take with a grain of salt buti thunk the author has a really good idea and good direction she went with the story as a whole and the development while fast makes sense for the Mc. there are also hardly any gramatical errors and that makes reading this story that much smoother. another thing i loved about the story is the evolution part as EoC was one of my favorite books and i thought it had a great system. Bad things~ Ive only read about 40 chaps in the story but i wanted to say something. In the story you dont explain all of the skills and what they do like the skills she got from the phonix or some of those from the harpys and i just think its bad world building. i can accept that but the kingdom thing when she got back is just terrible i mean they the people there evolved from not even having anything above stone tools to staight up having lamps and a city in like 10 days. Then there is the whole population issue as the coty should only have around 50-100 people when the non combatants were evacuated before the fight but in just like 3 days since that happened there was unprecedented development. it just dosent make sense in my opinion. another criticism i have is that the pacing is just so incredibly break neck that it makes it hard to follow as it took the mc like 20 days to go from being a chicken to killing a phonix and having a kingdom.
I realy like the story but i realy hate the POV of the secondari characters during a moment like a war like if it is the POV of the wifes or childrens of her it is ok but when it is the POV of some Randon char i realy hate but except for those i Love the story
that novel was good up until chapter 50 something then it became hard to keep reading