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Another novel I finished by Sixth-sama! He always write such great stories so you better add them all! So go on now read it, you will not regret it one bit! Umu!
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Ok, Ima be straight with you bro. This was painful to read. The dialogue is rough, although clear. I mean to say that while the grammar is good, some of what they're saying makes no sense if you think about it from the way an actual conversation works and flows. Granted, I didn't read that far, but if you think about the dialogue in the conversations you're writing and it doesn't make sense to you, it probably will not make sense to readers. I don't say this at all as hate or anything, I say this in encouragement. Believe me, your work so far is not at all as bad as others I've seen, by far. Good job so far and good luck.
I wanted to ask does the main character have a last name because I don’t think I’ve seen any Remnant of it? but overall I honestly love
This was nice i enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue writing novels to improve your skills and express your imagination. Thanks for the wonderful novel.
Congrats Author you have made a mc so unlikable that I like seeing him weak... you have created something worthwhile to enjoy reading, of course only the weak parts but if you want my honest opinion he's an egotistical hypocrite who thinks everything is his. Not something i'd recommend you to read, the characters are somewhat good except the mc but it's so bad I had to give character design a 1 star. Back to my ratings 5 for writing quality because you know how to make a story work. 3 for stability of updates because i haven't been here long enough. 4 for story development, again a great author. 1 for character design MC. 4 for world background, it was portrayed greatly yet the characters refer weirdly to it. Best of luck author!
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really cool book 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 I hope we get more chapters in the future😊😊🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
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This novel will hopefully be a great success. From your last novel i gave this one a chance. So far this has been a good ride hopefully you Keep up the great work.
A novel with R-18 Content It is not that I have been warned Rather You Have my Attention ...........................................................................................................................................................
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This is very good and i cant wait for another update. The only thing i can say is that it seems like there is some disconnect between chapters due to the writing style maybe? but otherwise really good!
Who knew I was going to find my new love here; this book is the best; a dream come true in the world of isekai[img=recommend][img=recommend]; I hope this book won't get dropped
Hello, author here! This is a review where you can ask me questions before starting the novel! This novel is about man and his new game rune system that he got after forcefully being summoned to another world. The main goal is to turn the world into a game with his rules! Feel free to ask ^^
Another novel I finished by Sixth-sama! He always write such great stories so you better add them all! So go on now read it, you will not regret it one bit! Umu!
Good Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Ok, Ima be straight with you bro. This was painful to read. The dialogue is rough, although clear. I mean to say that while the grammar is good, some of what they're saying makes no sense if you think about it from the way an actual conversation works and flows. Granted, I didn't read that far, but if you think about the dialogue in the conversations you're writing and it doesn't make sense to you, it probably will not make sense to readers. I don't say this at all as hate or anything, I say this in encouragement. Believe me, your work so far is not at all as bad as others I've seen, by far. Good job so far and good luck.
I wanted to ask does the main character have a last name because I don’t think I’ve seen any Remnant of it? but overall I honestly love
This was nice i enjoyed reading this. I hope you continue writing novels to improve your skills and express your imagination. Thanks for the wonderful novel.
Congrats Author you have made a mc so unlikable that I like seeing him weak... you have created something worthwhile to enjoy reading, of course only the weak parts but if you want my honest opinion he's an egotistical hypocrite who thinks everything is his. Not something i'd recommend you to read, the characters are somewhat good except the mc but it's so bad I had to give character design a 1 star. Back to my ratings 5 for writing quality because you know how to make a story work. 3 for stability of updates because i haven't been here long enough. 4 for story development, again a great author. 1 for character design MC. 4 for world background, it was portrayed greatly yet the characters refer weirdly to it. Best of luck author!
Pretty interesting!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
really cool book 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 I hope we get more chapters in the future😊😊🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂
Good novel - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
This novel will hopefully be a great success. From your last novel i gave this one a chance. So far this has been a good ride hopefully you Keep up the great work.
A novel with R-18 Content It is not that I have been warned Rather You Have my Attention ...........................................................................................................................................................
good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.good.
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This is very good and i cant wait for another update. The only thing i can say is that it seems like there is some disconnect between chapters due to the writing style maybe? but otherwise really good!
Who knew I was going to find my new love here; this book is the best; a dream come true in the world of isekai[img=recommend][img=recommend]; I hope this book won't get dropped
Hello, author here! This is a review where you can ask me questions before starting the novel! This novel is about man and his new game rune system that he got after forcefully being summoned to another world. The main goal is to turn the world into a game with his rules! Feel free to ask ^^