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The start is amazing in opinion.🙂🙃😗😇😚🤩😇😛😊😜😊😃🤔🤑😛😝😝🙂😊😛😉🤔🤩😝😝😝😝😪🤥🤧🤥🤤😷😐🤫😐🤤🤒😏🥶😪🥶🤧🥶🥶😪🤒🤭😌😪😑🤧🤥🤥🤧🤒🤫🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶😪😌😪😑😏😑🤫😑😏😐🤧😷😷🤧😐🤫🤤🥴🥳
The start is quiteeeeeeee................................................... I am waiting for the next Chapter..... to Seeeeee how it further develops, ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
normally i'm no a fan of SI fanfics but this is good stroy with proper grammar which is a rarity in itself the plot is also good i just that author doesn't follow the same path of other fanfic authors and this story turns into a wish fullfilment story or the mc becomes powerful to fast i like a steady progress of characters in stories but then again i'm not the writing this story
The start is amazing in opinion.🙂🙃😗😇😚🤩😇😛😊😜😊😃🤔🤑😛😝😝🙂😊😛😉🤔🤩😝😝😝😝😪🤥🤧🤥🤤😷😐🤫😐🤤🤒😏🥶😪🥶🤧🥶🥶😪🤒🤭😌😪😑🤧🤥🤥🤧🤒🤫🥶🥶🥶🥶🥶😪😌😪😑😏😑🤫😑😏😐🤧😷😷🤧😐🤫🤤🥴🥳
The start is quiteeeeeeee................................................... I am waiting for the next Chapter..... to Seeeeee how it further develops, ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
normally i'm no a fan of SI fanfics but this is good stroy with proper grammar which is a rarity in itself the plot is also good i just that author doesn't follow the same path of other fanfic authors and this story turns into a wish fullfilment story or the mc becomes powerful to fast i like a steady progress of characters in stories but then again i'm not the writing this story
Pretty good 😌 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃 🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃