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Ch 50 so far. The writing is so-so it’s hard to understand who is talkin when the when the writer doesn’t make it clear who is talking. [img=coins]
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Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
Desenvolvimento de personagem é muito bom, o MC é ganancioso e calculista sem ser frio. Gostaria que tivesse maior lançamentos de capítulos.
I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.
this story is fantastic, great even... but the main characters personality irks me and make me want to pull out my hair, as of ch 74 he can't decide wether to be a saint or be a manipulative person, his personality feels like it changed from the early chapters(not seamlessly) and he feels so much sympathy to every girl he comes across and every elf, so much so he is trying to build a nation for them... and he gets this huge resolve to save everyone in dire need, because girls he knew for like a week and was thinking about double crossing them the entire time, even on his way out, but decides he truly cares for them, despite them not thinking of him highly whatsoever at any point, a simp and rushed character, but the world building is nice and the story is kinda going along smoothly, already got a clear yet unclear enemy to beat and powers to progress with, I would rate it super highly if only the main character didn't decide sympathize with every female and every elf to the point of making a country for them all... haven't even seen a male elf yet
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seriously up there with Lord of mysteries and vampire system. I can't tell what's going to happen next it's a one of a kind boom even though it has classic tropes like a system and isekai give it a shot your not going to regret picking this up.
pretty great book so far will highly recommend. has a great pacing and interesting characters. if you are looking for a new story to start don't hesitate to pick this one up
After reading 130 chapters. There are quite few things I like very much about this book that I would like to share: 1. Characters aren't flat, one-sided and brainless, quite the opposite complexity, daily struggles and depth are normal. I especially love that MC isn't plowing through everybody and everything but makes mistakes and suffers the consequences. There is only one small flew in few characters, it's their a bit cliche humor. 2. World building is quite complex and feels real, not making the reader question if other characters are mental or physics doesn't exist. 3. Realism is best served when there are heavy topics involved and nobody has a perfect simple solution, which is the case here. 4. Only one thing that I kinda dislike is a bit slow paced action and I don't mean the timeline of actions, because I would even like for the MC to progress more painfully, but the dialogues between characters reveling their mental state. Hope it helps, I really like this book so far, I'll update my review after or around chapter 200.
30+ chapter for the moment is very good ............................ ....................................... ....................................................... ................................................................
Writing Quality: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Character Design: 4/5 Updating Stability: 5/5 World Background: 4/5 Go ahead and check it out.. Good quality read. Never stretches out the actions and bores you.
A must read ....................................................................................................................................
Haven't read it yet but that Synopsis and Comment is better than, lets be generous, 70% of the rest on this """wonderful""" app. Imma get reading and update this later. 5☆ for now :)
the story progression is very nice.its not rushed but its also not too fast.the author is doing a great job at making the reader interested in the side characters life as well and the main characters.all in all i would give this story a try if your bored and looking for a good necro novel.
Just wanted to say the cover character looks like Captain Jack Sparrow.. For that reason alone ill give it a shot. Also i havent seen many good necro novels in a while dont let me down Auther!
Slow Slow slow Slow pace, weak mc well not my cup of tea, but anyway still five star cause everything else is ok.. so if you r into mc who is strugling,weak with good potential, snail pace And well written (no grammar mistake) story well here you go you gonna Enjoy this but for me thats it i am out...
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
author san can i expect a god damn world devouring big ass stupidly undead army that can literally over power literally any and all opposition in the world. is the MC smart. lemme give you a 4 star review flr now.
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I'll talk about the quick points because of which people remain hesitant to pick an original story to read. ● Quality, if anyone complained you better write your own book which has to be excellent than this. (I'm personally a fan of this author because of the flow, vocabulary and the techniques of narrations he uses) ● Storyline, just focus on the title (Wink) ● I've nothing to criticize since the author has grasp over everything and seems professional into the field. ( just give it a go xD)
the story is realistic and greatly enjoyable. The characters Are human in their flaws, desires, and emotions letting you enjoy with immersion. you can feel the hardship and every small victory of Asher is one you cherish.
Well written its a really good story so far. Pacing is great too. If you're hesitating don't just pick this novel up and add it to your library cause its good.
Hi Hi. Saian here. I'm giving myself five stars for such a good job on this novel, wow, just amazing Tim, you've got some editing to do but damn there's a story in this! No, no, I am NOT being shameless. It is my obligation as a creator to love and be proud of my creation! Who else but I has that responsibility? Hungry Necromancer is a slow-paced struggle to the top, bad luck in every corner with a bleak future on the horizon of most chapters. The MC has a cheat, no doubt he has a cheat, what is that cheat tho? He doesn't know, WE don't know! It has yet to be revealed in the most explicit ways. Every bit of strength he falls unto is hard won, which is sort of the reason why most chapters have MC not looking very handsome. There may be some R-rated scenes ahead so that's something to look forward to but personally, I think that pales in comparison to the many many questions that are yet to be answered about magic, society, the villains and the crazy gods.
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A good story, good writing and seemingly good plot (at least so far) If anyone likes reading about isekai with mc's that have potential, but not a huge cheat this is for you
Evil necromancer as MC? R18? This is what im looking for, hope its a harem. ................................................................
simply an amazing book, well written. The only possible downside is when I hit the paywall seven months ago. the author stopped updating. If he lost access to his account, or moved to a different platform could someone please add a comment leading me to his new profile? Even with the sudden stop this book is far better than most I have seen on this site.
Ch 50 so far. The writing is so-so it’s hard to understand who is talkin when the when the writer doesn’t make it clear who is talking. [img=coins]
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Membuka SPOILER Hey! Good day to you! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). Looking forward to your email soon.
Desenvolvimento de personagem é muito bom, o MC é ganancioso e calculista sem ser frio. Gostaria que tivesse maior lançamentos de capítulos.
I dont see any negative reviews so i suppose this will no be here long. I hava a lot of issues with this one... First is wording in sentences, additional words and explanation of poitless facts over and over again. Next is the story, i got to chap 80 and I am so bored with all the pointlessnes of MC actions and his logic, i thought that if he was a gang member he would be resourcefull if not smat but, but he is just swayed by any little thing and every decision is made by others. There are no feeling and depresion as author advertised... Just a cliche fantasy with nothing new. Only positive is side characters but that cannot save whole book. I hoped for something in there but got only boredom and bad english.
this story is fantastic, great even... but the main characters personality irks me and make me want to pull out my hair, as of ch 74 he can't decide wether to be a saint or be a manipulative person, his personality feels like it changed from the early chapters(not seamlessly) and he feels so much sympathy to every girl he comes across and every elf, so much so he is trying to build a nation for them... and he gets this huge resolve to save everyone in dire need, because girls he knew for like a week and was thinking about double crossing them the entire time, even on his way out, but decides he truly cares for them, despite them not thinking of him highly whatsoever at any point, a simp and rushed character, but the world building is nice and the story is kinda going along smoothly, already got a clear yet unclear enemy to beat and powers to progress with, I would rate it super highly if only the main character didn't decide sympathize with every female and every elf to the point of making a country for them all... haven't even seen a male elf yet
Membuka SPOILER seriously up there with Lord of mysteries and vampire system. I can't tell what's going to happen next it's a one of a kind boom even though it has classic tropes like a system and isekai give it a shot your not going to regret picking this up.
pretty great book so far will highly recommend. has a great pacing and interesting characters. if you are looking for a new story to start don't hesitate to pick this one up
After reading 130 chapters. There are quite few things I like very much about this book that I would like to share: 1. Characters aren't flat, one-sided and brainless, quite the opposite complexity, daily struggles and depth are normal. I especially love that MC isn't plowing through everybody and everything but makes mistakes and suffers the consequences. There is only one small flew in few characters, it's their a bit cliche humor. 2. World building is quite complex and feels real, not making the reader question if other characters are mental or physics doesn't exist. 3. Realism is best served when there are heavy topics involved and nobody has a perfect simple solution, which is the case here. 4. Only one thing that I kinda dislike is a bit slow paced action and I don't mean the timeline of actions, because I would even like for the MC to progress more painfully, but the dialogues between characters reveling their mental state. Hope it helps, I really like this book so far, I'll update my review after or around chapter 200.
30+ chapter for the moment is very good ............................ ....................................... ....................................................... ................................................................
Writing Quality: 5/5 Story Development: 5/5 Character Design: 4/5 Updating Stability: 5/5 World Background: 4/5 Go ahead and check it out.. Good quality read. Never stretches out the actions and bores you.
A must read ....................................................................................................................................
Haven't read it yet but that Synopsis and Comment is better than, lets be generous, 70% of the rest on this """wonderful""" app. Imma get reading and update this later. 5☆ for now :)
the story progression is very nice.its not rushed but its also not too fast.the author is doing a great job at making the reader interested in the side characters life as well and the main characters.all in all i would give this story a try if your bored and looking for a good necro novel.
Just wanted to say the cover character looks like Captain Jack Sparrow.. For that reason alone ill give it a shot. Also i havent seen many good necro novels in a while dont let me down Auther!
Slow Slow slow Slow pace, weak mc well not my cup of tea, but anyway still five star cause everything else is ok.. so if you r into mc who is strugling,weak with good potential, snail pace And well written (no grammar mistake) story well here you go you gonna Enjoy this but for me thats it i am out...
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry, and we can provide you a $100 advance by joining the contest.
author san can i expect a god damn world devouring big ass stupidly undead army that can literally over power literally any and all opposition in the world. is the MC smart. lemme give you a 4 star review flr now.
Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp Exp exp
I'll talk about the quick points because of which people remain hesitant to pick an original story to read. ● Quality, if anyone complained you better write your own book which has to be excellent than this. (I'm personally a fan of this author because of the flow, vocabulary and the techniques of narrations he uses) ● Storyline, just focus on the title (Wink) ● I've nothing to criticize since the author has grasp over everything and seems professional into the field. ( just give it a go xD)
the story is realistic and greatly enjoyable. The characters Are human in their flaws, desires, and emotions letting you enjoy with immersion. you can feel the hardship and every small victory of Asher is one you cherish.
Well written its a really good story so far. Pacing is great too. If you're hesitating don't just pick this novel up and add it to your library cause its good.
Hi Hi. Saian here. I'm giving myself five stars for such a good job on this novel, wow, just amazing Tim, you've got some editing to do but damn there's a story in this! No, no, I am NOT being shameless. It is my obligation as a creator to love and be proud of my creation! Who else but I has that responsibility? Hungry Necromancer is a slow-paced struggle to the top, bad luck in every corner with a bleak future on the horizon of most chapters. The MC has a cheat, no doubt he has a cheat, what is that cheat tho? He doesn't know, WE don't know! It has yet to be revealed in the most explicit ways. Every bit of strength he falls unto is hard won, which is sort of the reason why most chapters have MC not looking very handsome. There may be some R-rated scenes ahead so that's something to look forward to but personally, I think that pales in comparison to the many many questions that are yet to be answered about magic, society, the villains and the crazy gods.
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A good story, good writing and seemingly good plot (at least so far) If anyone likes reading about isekai with mc's that have potential, but not a huge cheat this is for you
Evil necromancer as MC? R18? This is what im looking for, hope its a harem. ................................................................
simply an amazing book, well written. The only possible downside is when I hit the paywall seven months ago. the author stopped updating. If he lost access to his account, or moved to a different platform could someone please add a comment leading me to his new profile? Even with the sudden stop this book is far better than most I have seen on this site.