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Okay not gonna lie, this is really fun to read. The pacing is good, the sentences are well defined, and I love how small but important details are just casually dropped in. ALSO! I can't be the only one who absolutely loves Yuno's character. A must read for sure, go ahead and add it now. Kudos to the author for a work well done
really good read. I am kinda sad that I put it off for so long. The cast is an unlikely bunch. They appear so normal in the beginning. the story has a great pace and never feels rushed. I definitely recommend this one.
The characters are so relatable in this series. I'm only a little way in so far but I feel for the protagonist who is under a lot of pressure in school. There is a perfect balance between dialogue and story development in this webnovel. There isn't a lot of grammar mistakes so I'll be more than willing to spend my fastpasses on this.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This is a very cool story that takes the trope into new directions. THe voice of the narration is not as consistent as I'd like, but other than that, this is a great read!
Read upto 10chaps Story has a potential...got curious on how the characters will use their abilities in more complex ways... strong willed FL is a thumbs up~ . . . cant wait for the major editing to finish as paragraph, POV and sentences are in mix and sometimes confuse me... Gambare!!
Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. ❤❤ I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
I love Yuna!!! (* /ω \*) She is a delightful character to follow. Merely her mannerism makes you want to read more. I highly recommend that everyone gives this novel a try.
Excellent story! I never really anticipated the twists and the eventual reveal but that was a great experience for sure. I can definitely recommend this to other people who love this genre and I look forward to reading more for sure.
This story was certainly intriguing. I had never imagined that this is how it end up. The characters are very relatable and the struggle that is faced has a sense of genuineness that just pulls the entire piece together. Highly recommended read!!!
Not for me, I cant follow the point of view or characters names. Its like one person is speaking but then it switched to 5 others. its just too confusing for me to read. I can do bad grammer but not this.
Interesting story; each chapter brought its own level of drama. Loved the flow from chapter to chapter and the development of the storyline and characters.
I read a little of your book, and it's so nice, no wonder some of the chapters are locked it is worth paying for, but what I love most about your story is it's storyline...💯
This story is super duper dupe.. I love the dynamics of this author's writing style.. it is very commendable. When I read about people with super natural ability, it encourage and motivate me.. I'm not easily intrigued, however, I'm spell bound and super intrigued... Great story, very commendable... keep up the good work.
great writing quality and awesome character design. the story development is genuinely refine, and you have an amazing way of keeping a reader interested. great job!
I am officially Little more than half way through the book and i can homestly say im hooked. It didnt take long at all. The book is extremely well written, characters are all phenomenally done. There is no doubt of any kind when it comes to Author-Kun’s ability to write, evoke intense imagery, and transport you away from reality. This is staying in my collections for sure!!! Def Recommend !! Please check it out for sure!
Let me just quickly say that I love Yuno, her attitude is to die for and it's hilarious how she threatens her little brother who is way younger, Keep up with the good Work Author.[img=recommend]
The story is well paced. Each chapter is its own story. While the commas and sentences could use some work, I think the writer makes up for it with the premise and the interesting storyline. Kudos!
The story is pretty interesting and you managed to surprise me in the end of the first chapter. But i got confused on some parts. The baby is three days old from what i can tell. They cant crawl from that age,they cant even keep their head up straight. Goo work,keep writing
Wow,at this point,am completely speechless. This book has everything a good book should contain, the way the author described the characters,the background, choice of words,everything is simply unique and leaves me aching to read more. Kudos author,you are doing a good job.
This review is based on the first chapters, I am very, VERY much liking the beautiful variety of characters so far, I like the pacing not slow/fast, totally would continue reading Me on *some* parts xD
It's well written, the characters are well designed. each chapter makes you eager to go to the next. Love the baby part... and the face slapping.
I love how the author describes the scenes very well. I also love it how to author dropped small details or remove flowery words just to lengthen the chapters and sentences. The story is great and you won't regret reading it........ Good luck author!
I like the storyline. it's very interesting and have good character development. Story has a stable beginning and author doesn't rush to the conclusions. great story. I liked it! kudos to the author and all the best.
I really like this story, I only read chapter one but I am so immersed that I have to read more. Yuno is so cool, Kai is really nice, baby Tori is the cutest ever and Mr Tachibana is just brooding . I love it all, I'm definitely going to read more. Keep it up please. Although I was quite confused with what the special abilities are.
I looove ur story! The plot is really interesting and i see that ur book has loads of potential! Thing is, i dont like this genre but ur book is something I can't miss! Consider me a fan :D I also adore the characters and can't wait to see what holds for them in the future!
an amazingly designed world and interesting premise that I've not seen anywhere else. bonus for originality and unique characters. all this needs is editing tbh. and it'd be great!
This review is based on the first chapter. The story is very interesting and the writing is excellent, and how each character interact with each other/ things that they do are awesome. 10/10
Definitely worthy of a golden 5-star review. This isn't short of good literature. The characters are well introduced and explained. I am wondering what the author was thinking when he was writing this book. I read it and it felt like I was seeing a movie—a great movie with A-list actors in it. You earned yourself a top fan author, please keep pushing. Don't you dare give up on this story alright 😍😘😘
Wow~ you gave me a good scare just now. I am now angry! o(TヘTo) What do you mean you're jealous? You have written more and have more review. Your got a gift yourself. You are a bully. But you are a good bully. A very good one. Let's do our best! I believe that your story is good and it will get even better. Keep writing until the end. I believe you deserve a 5 stars as well! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ This is from me take it. (づ￣ 3￣)づ ☆☆☆☆☆
Alright, let's see... Grammar and writing style need a LOT of work. The whole text looks like half of the punctuation marks is missing. Capital letters are sometimes put at random places. It's also written in present tense, which is not lethal, but concdered to be untasteful amongst many writers (including myself). Even if this was written from phone (which I greatly suspect it was), this doesn't mean you can't work on lessening the amount of mistakes. You can at least use one of the many grammar fixing apps out there. I recommend ProWritingAid, though I don't know how it is for mobile devices. Now, the mandatory grammar nazi part is done, moving on to the plot and stuff. Which is pretty confusing to me at times due to abovementioned. Uh... There were some spots that made me feel weird... Like freezing things to ashes, huh, what? And why wont Tori freeze his gloves. But, overall, it's solid. The "school for super-people" trope was used often enough, but the whole racism thing going on adding a unique flair to it. The main cast is interesting to watch, which is the most important thing in the stories like that one.
wow, thisbook is awesome. for a oment there i almost got lost in the author's words. nice plot by the way, it makes someone never want to stop reading
The chapters had to end soo soon thou, but can't surely wait to read more from book. As it has a great story and how the development jus intensifies per read🔥🔥🔥
Okay not gonna lie, this is really fun to read. The pacing is good, the sentences are well defined, and I love how small but important details are just casually dropped in. ALSO! I can't be the only one who absolutely loves Yuno's character. A must read for sure, go ahead and add it now. Kudos to the author for a work well done
really good read. I am kinda sad that I put it off for so long. The cast is an unlikely bunch. They appear so normal in the beginning. the story has a great pace and never feels rushed. I definitely recommend this one.
The characters are so relatable in this series. I'm only a little way in so far but I feel for the protagonist who is under a lot of pressure in school. There is a perfect balance between dialogue and story development in this webnovel. There isn't a lot of grammar mistakes so I'll be more than willing to spend my fastpasses on this.
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This is a very cool story that takes the trope into new directions. THe voice of the narration is not as consistent as I'd like, but other than that, this is a great read!
Read upto 10chaps Story has a potential...got curious on how the characters will use their abilities in more complex ways... strong willed FL is a thumbs up~ . . . cant wait for the major editing to finish as paragraph, POV and sentences are in mix and sometimes confuse me... Gambare!!
Overall, it's an engaging story so far. Such an amazing and great novel of yours Author. ❤❤ I can't deny the fact that this one is interesting and at the same time a refreshing story for readers. Keep writing, Author.
I love Yuna!!! (* /ω \*) She is a delightful character to follow. Merely her mannerism makes you want to read more. I highly recommend that everyone gives this novel a try.
Excellent story! I never really anticipated the twists and the eventual reveal but that was a great experience for sure. I can definitely recommend this to other people who love this genre and I look forward to reading more for sure.
This story was certainly intriguing. I had never imagined that this is how it end up. The characters are very relatable and the struggle that is faced has a sense of genuineness that just pulls the entire piece together. Highly recommended read!!!
Not for me, I cant follow the point of view or characters names. Its like one person is speaking but then it switched to 5 others. its just too confusing for me to read. I can do bad grammer but not this.
Interesting story; each chapter brought its own level of drama. Loved the flow from chapter to chapter and the development of the storyline and characters.
I read a little of your book, and it's so nice, no wonder some of the chapters are locked it is worth paying for, but what I love most about your story is it's storyline...💯
This story is super duper dupe.. I love the dynamics of this author's writing style.. it is very commendable. When I read about people with super natural ability, it encourage and motivate me.. I'm not easily intrigued, however, I'm spell bound and super intrigued... Great story, very commendable... keep up the good work.
great writing quality and awesome character design. the story development is genuinely refine, and you have an amazing way of keeping a reader interested. great job!
I am officially Little more than half way through the book and i can homestly say im hooked. It didnt take long at all. The book is extremely well written, characters are all phenomenally done. There is no doubt of any kind when it comes to Author-Kun’s ability to write, evoke intense imagery, and transport you away from reality. This is staying in my collections for sure!!! Def Recommend !! Please check it out for sure!
Let me just quickly say that I love Yuno, her attitude is to die for and it's hilarious how she threatens her little brother who is way younger, Keep up with the good Work Author.[img=recommend]
The story is well paced. Each chapter is its own story. While the commas and sentences could use some work, I think the writer makes up for it with the premise and the interesting storyline. Kudos!
The story is pretty interesting and you managed to surprise me in the end of the first chapter. But i got confused on some parts. The baby is three days old from what i can tell. They cant crawl from that age,they cant even keep their head up straight. Goo work,keep writing
Wow,at this point,am completely speechless. This book has everything a good book should contain, the way the author described the characters,the background, choice of words,everything is simply unique and leaves me aching to read more. Kudos author,you are doing a good job.
This review is based on the first chapters, I am very, VERY much liking the beautiful variety of characters so far, I like the pacing not slow/fast, totally would continue reading Me on *some* parts xD
It's well written, the characters are well designed. each chapter makes you eager to go to the next. Love the baby part... and the face slapping.
I love how the author describes the scenes very well. I also love it how to author dropped small details or remove flowery words just to lengthen the chapters and sentences. The story is great and you won't regret reading it........ Good luck author!
I like the storyline. it's very interesting and have good character development. Story has a stable beginning and author doesn't rush to the conclusions. great story. I liked it! kudos to the author and all the best.
I really like this story, I only read chapter one but I am so immersed that I have to read more. Yuno is so cool, Kai is really nice, baby Tori is the cutest ever and Mr Tachibana is just brooding . I love it all, I'm definitely going to read more. Keep it up please. Although I was quite confused with what the special abilities are.
I looove ur story! The plot is really interesting and i see that ur book has loads of potential! Thing is, i dont like this genre but ur book is something I can't miss! Consider me a fan :D I also adore the characters and can't wait to see what holds for them in the future!
an amazingly designed world and interesting premise that I've not seen anywhere else. bonus for originality and unique characters. all this needs is editing tbh. and it'd be great!
This review is based on the first chapter. The story is very interesting and the writing is excellent, and how each character interact with each other/ things that they do are awesome. 10/10
Definitely worthy of a golden 5-star review. This isn't short of good literature. The characters are well introduced and explained. I am wondering what the author was thinking when he was writing this book. I read it and it felt like I was seeing a movie—a great movie with A-list actors in it. You earned yourself a top fan author, please keep pushing. Don't you dare give up on this story alright 😍😘😘
Wow~ you gave me a good scare just now. I am now angry! o(TヘTo) What do you mean you're jealous? You have written more and have more review. Your got a gift yourself. You are a bully. But you are a good bully. A very good one. Let's do our best! I believe that your story is good and it will get even better. Keep writing until the end. I believe you deserve a 5 stars as well! (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ This is from me take it. (づ￣ 3￣)づ ☆☆☆☆☆
Alright, let's see... Grammar and writing style need a LOT of work. The whole text looks like half of the punctuation marks is missing. Capital letters are sometimes put at random places. It's also written in present tense, which is not lethal, but concdered to be untasteful amongst many writers (including myself). Even if this was written from phone (which I greatly suspect it was), this doesn't mean you can't work on lessening the amount of mistakes. You can at least use one of the many grammar fixing apps out there. I recommend ProWritingAid, though I don't know how it is for mobile devices. Now, the mandatory grammar nazi part is done, moving on to the plot and stuff. Which is pretty confusing to me at times due to abovementioned. Uh... There were some spots that made me feel weird... Like freezing things to ashes, huh, what? And why wont Tori freeze his gloves. But, overall, it's solid. The "school for super-people" trope was used often enough, but the whole racism thing going on adding a unique flair to it. The main cast is interesting to watch, which is the most important thing in the stories like that one.
wow, thisbook is awesome. for a oment there i almost got lost in the author's words. nice plot by the way, it makes someone never want to stop reading
The chapters had to end soo soon thou, but can't surely wait to read more from book. As it has a great story and how the development jus intensifies per read🔥🔥🔥