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hii! This is literally amazing. WORTH A READ HONESTLY. I couldnt read further because i dont have coins but i will!!! Thank you for this honestly, death is scary and the pain behind it has been expressed in every sentence thats in this so far, i'll get more coins now so i can read further hehe!
this story, surrender to grief is really a masterpiece! the details as the author tell the story are above level. you can feel the emotions in every word that is written in this book. keep writing author!
The story is able to draw the reader into it, make you feel with the characters, it doesn't just tells but shows, it is an interesting piece.
I was only able to read up to the paid ones, but it really tugged at my heartstrings~ the vivid portrayal of grief and family, was incredibly emotional; impeccable writing, really. Just some minor errors here and there, but hats off to you, author!
I must say, I'm not really an emotional person, but this book brought me to tears. I love how I was able to feel the pain and grief of each of all the characters. Really moved me. I just wish there were more chapters.
Wow, this one really tugs at the strings of your heart. I was only able to read up till the first pay wall, but what I read certainly had me hooked. The feeling of loss and pain the protagonist faces losing a loved one really struck a raw nerve with me as I have also had a family member taken from me. Really powerful opening. I will be sure to check out the rest of this author's work.
Just by reading the title, I know I have a lot to learn in real life. And it was such a nice reading for me. Keep up the good work author! It's a great work! ❤❤
YOOOOOOO HOLLLLYYYY SHHHHIET THIS IS THE BEST SHORTEST STORY IVE EVER READ! the description are SOOO vivid! also each chapters are from different perspective! But why's everyone hella dying?!!! Maaaaaaan I demand for more chapters! ain't that right, fella readers? ANyway yeah, as far as I understand, its one family that narrates how each of them died and its just so hfhhal;pojjbfokw;l because each of them died in such a sad way!!!! I hope I have money to support this one tho T.T
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the story is as interesting as the plot says, being very mysterious. The background and its detail is also well thought and i rlly like the main character and I'm quite curious abt of what's going on! I rlly love it!
Wow !! that was heavy. Nice writing though it almost felt like a poem. Usually it's difficult to make it big with sad stories but yours is written so beautifully that it compels on to read more.. Done with the review.
The style of writing was seamless, allowing the readers to feel the emotion of the characters. Well written and the details were great. It was just sad that the story was too short. It would have been a great read.
feeling powerless is the worst feeling in the world. Knowing that there's nothing you can do. I love how detailed each part is. it is very moving👍👍👍
You never really understand true tragedy unless you witness everyone's perspective. In this work, I got to experienced everyone's perception in genuine vivid detail. I commend the writer for this difficult feat.
omg please the descriptions are so incredibly detailed and i really enjoy perspectives from a parent because its always so poignant and sad i hope you continue writing like this because i really liked the first couple of chaps
The only regret I have from reading this book is that it's completed! It truly is a surrender to grief and I enjoyed every single chapter of it. You know the feelings when someday you feel the need to cry but can't find out how? This is the book you need. It describes emotions well enough to make the lump in my throat to come out. I haven't finish reading them but I'm adding it to my collection so I can read it later on. Can't be sobbing while I'm at work, can i? 🙈
Although I was only able to read the first couple of chapters, the premise of this book already has some excellent potential. As a fellow author that enjoys writing and reading works that have a poetic style to them, I would highly recommend this book to authors and readers alike. However, the only thing I would point out to work on would be some of the grammar within this book. There are only little things, such as, not capitalizing 'I' or just missing words and punctuation in a sentence that would make it flow better when reading. Nevertheless, this is still a very good book, and although I mentioned the grammar it still does not take away from the author's ability to suck you into their story.
Hi there! Here is my review: I really, really like your writing style. It's very poetic but it doesn't make it boring and lengthy. Poetic stories aren't really my cup of tea, but for this, I make an exception. The emotions are well written, and the feelings of grief and loss are really realistic. So far so good. Oh right, there was one big issue tho: I want more chapters! ;) Keep up the good work!
Everything the characters are feeling and experiencing is very clear and well described. I can picture a lot of the scenes in my mind :) Great job author!
A nice warm story I must say! The writing style and flow of the story is great. My only complaint - more chapters please :) (haha greedy me) Keep up the good work dear!
The story is full of feelings that reach the reader with great delicacy allowing to feel each of the protagonist's thoughts. Go through highly detailed scenes adorned with a beautiful writing style that drags you deep into the words. Very good story :)
Though thr premise was short, it was interesting and the characters are well described. Your writing is very good and the characters emotions are described well. Good job! 👍
Wow. I can say that the author managed to describe everything in such a grave way. As expected from the title itself. The author has a very vivid description for readers to immerse to the MC feelings. There's also some mystery as well (I sensed), but not too clear yet. Waiting for author to keep updating to get readers anticipated about the story!
Aaaahhh!! Ok, first of all, you made me cry! I love it so much-- your play of words, the way you express emotions, your writing style. All of it! I unlocked the 4th chapter because I just wanted more. You're an amazing writer, keep it up ~ 💛
This book starts well. I can't wait to read everything. Nice writing and a good time for the whole vibe. I'm going to keep reading good job!
Everything is nice and the vocabulary of the writer shows his control on the language . The plot of the novel is a bit new and I hope that i it will evolve more.
Hiiiii~~ author here, just want to say thank you and please support my book by sharing it to other people and I'm glad that people checks this out and I appreciate each one of you!! I hope this book did not take much of your time so please leave a review and/or a vote!! :))
There are not many chapters yet but I can see the book sure does have potential. It's definitely one I would love to keep reading. Keep up the good work author. 👍
Though, it is still 3 chapters. All I can say amazing such great weaving of emotions in your creation. The flow of every chapter is not distracting. Such heavy and deep vibes that I feel like drowning in it. My only issue is that there are paragraphs that are too congested. The author could try breaking some parts to make it less dragging. Keep it up! More chapters please!!
This book is really very interesting. I fell in love after reading it for the first time. While reading this book i couldn't take my concentration off. I love it.
hii! This is literally amazing. WORTH A READ HONESTLY. I couldnt read further because i dont have coins but i will!!! Thank you for this honestly, death is scary and the pain behind it has been expressed in every sentence thats in this so far, i'll get more coins now so i can read further hehe!
this story, surrender to grief is really a masterpiece! the details as the author tell the story are above level. you can feel the emotions in every word that is written in this book. keep writing author!
The story is able to draw the reader into it, make you feel with the characters, it doesn't just tells but shows, it is an interesting piece.
I was only able to read up to the paid ones, but it really tugged at my heartstrings~ the vivid portrayal of grief and family, was incredibly emotional; impeccable writing, really. Just some minor errors here and there, but hats off to you, author!
I must say, I'm not really an emotional person, but this book brought me to tears. I love how I was able to feel the pain and grief of each of all the characters. Really moved me. I just wish there were more chapters.
Wow, this one really tugs at the strings of your heart. I was only able to read up till the first pay wall, but what I read certainly had me hooked. The feeling of loss and pain the protagonist faces losing a loved one really struck a raw nerve with me as I have also had a family member taken from me. Really powerful opening. I will be sure to check out the rest of this author's work.
Just by reading the title, I know I have a lot to learn in real life. And it was such a nice reading for me. Keep up the good work author! It's a great work! ❤❤
YOOOOOOO HOLLLLYYYY SHHHHIET THIS IS THE BEST SHORTEST STORY IVE EVER READ! the description are SOOO vivid! also each chapters are from different perspective! But why's everyone hella dying?!!! Maaaaaaan I demand for more chapters! ain't that right, fella readers? ANyway yeah, as far as I understand, its one family that narrates how each of them died and its just so hfhhal;pojjbfokw;l because each of them died in such a sad way!!!! I hope I have money to support this one tho T.T
Membuka SPOILER the story is as interesting as the plot says, being very mysterious. The background and its detail is also well thought and i rlly like the main character and I'm quite curious abt of what's going on! I rlly love it!
Wow !! that was heavy. Nice writing though it almost felt like a poem. Usually it's difficult to make it big with sad stories but yours is written so beautifully that it compels on to read more.. Done with the review.
The style of writing was seamless, allowing the readers to feel the emotion of the characters. Well written and the details were great. It was just sad that the story was too short. It would have been a great read.
feeling powerless is the worst feeling in the world. Knowing that there's nothing you can do. I love how detailed each part is. it is very moving👍👍👍
You never really understand true tragedy unless you witness everyone's perspective. In this work, I got to experienced everyone's perception in genuine vivid detail. I commend the writer for this difficult feat.
omg please the descriptions are so incredibly detailed and i really enjoy perspectives from a parent because its always so poignant and sad i hope you continue writing like this because i really liked the first couple of chaps
The only regret I have from reading this book is that it's completed! It truly is a surrender to grief and I enjoyed every single chapter of it. You know the feelings when someday you feel the need to cry but can't find out how? This is the book you need. It describes emotions well enough to make the lump in my throat to come out. I haven't finish reading them but I'm adding it to my collection so I can read it later on. Can't be sobbing while I'm at work, can i? 🙈
Although I was only able to read the first couple of chapters, the premise of this book already has some excellent potential. As a fellow author that enjoys writing and reading works that have a poetic style to them, I would highly recommend this book to authors and readers alike. However, the only thing I would point out to work on would be some of the grammar within this book. There are only little things, such as, not capitalizing 'I' or just missing words and punctuation in a sentence that would make it flow better when reading. Nevertheless, this is still a very good book, and although I mentioned the grammar it still does not take away from the author's ability to suck you into their story.
Hi there! Here is my review: I really, really like your writing style. It's very poetic but it doesn't make it boring and lengthy. Poetic stories aren't really my cup of tea, but for this, I make an exception. The emotions are well written, and the feelings of grief and loss are really realistic. So far so good. Oh right, there was one big issue tho: I want more chapters! ;) Keep up the good work!
Everything the characters are feeling and experiencing is very clear and well described. I can picture a lot of the scenes in my mind :) Great job author!
A nice warm story I must say! The writing style and flow of the story is great. My only complaint - more chapters please :) (haha greedy me) Keep up the good work dear!
The story is full of feelings that reach the reader with great delicacy allowing to feel each of the protagonist's thoughts. Go through highly detailed scenes adorned with a beautiful writing style that drags you deep into the words. Very good story :)
Though thr premise was short, it was interesting and the characters are well described. Your writing is very good and the characters emotions are described well. Good job! 👍
Wow. I can say that the author managed to describe everything in such a grave way. As expected from the title itself. The author has a very vivid description for readers to immerse to the MC feelings. There's also some mystery as well (I sensed), but not too clear yet. Waiting for author to keep updating to get readers anticipated about the story!
Aaaahhh!! Ok, first of all, you made me cry! I love it so much-- your play of words, the way you express emotions, your writing style. All of it! I unlocked the 4th chapter because I just wanted more. You're an amazing writer, keep it up ~ 💛
This book starts well. I can't wait to read everything. Nice writing and a good time for the whole vibe. I'm going to keep reading good job!
Everything is nice and the vocabulary of the writer shows his control on the language . The plot of the novel is a bit new and I hope that i it will evolve more.
Hiiiii~~ author here, just want to say thank you and please support my book by sharing it to other people and I'm glad that people checks this out and I appreciate each one of you!! I hope this book did not take much of your time so please leave a review and/or a vote!! :))
There are not many chapters yet but I can see the book sure does have potential. It's definitely one I would love to keep reading. Keep up the good work author. 👍
Though, it is still 3 chapters. All I can say amazing such great weaving of emotions in your creation. The flow of every chapter is not distracting. Such heavy and deep vibes that I feel like drowning in it. My only issue is that there are paragraphs that are too congested. The author could try breaking some parts to make it less dragging. Keep it up! More chapters please!!
This book is really very interesting. I fell in love after reading it for the first time. While reading this book i couldn't take my concentration off. I love it.