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well.. writing quality isn't very good.. but you can read it.. some commas are misplaced or there's a lack of it.. and the phrases are a bit confusing. story development: a lot of time skips in the start, he focuses more on the romantic relationship until chapter 10.. the powers are just told, you don't see growth, even as the mc isn't op from the start, there are no scenes explaining growth truly.. it's a nice pace to things going on season 1.. it's not good, but not bad either. character design: the other reviews I've seen just insults the mc endlessly.. I don't think he is completely dumb, or brain dead.. but he is not the most pragmatic and badass character. he is lazy and tries to act cool, and the fault in this is just the writing, imo.. update stability: from the other reviews it seems good, I don't know yet, but he might've dropped or doesn't have a good stability, the last chapter while I'm writing this was 16 days ago.. and the chapters length are pretty good, so that's a plus. world background: there are some changes.. the characters go in the interpretation of the author, so if you think similar, you probably will like it..
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Well, I don't even feel like giving a good review on how stupid the story is, it's so fucking bad that it seemed to be written by someone while they were having a stroke. The MC is pathetic, dumb, nerdy, among so many things, but what totally ruined the story was the unhelpful and useless treatment it made. God, I got so angry that I could only think of the MC as a pathetic bitch.
one of the best fanfiction's i've read so far it is good to read and i would love to See more of it and it is also nice that you Made the Mc strong but not Overpowerd.
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Dropped within the first chapter lol. The author makes so many stupid decisions that I just couldnβt continue reading. Shame this author was the one to come up with the idea because in the right hands it coupd work.
Right okay so. Writing Quality - fucking typewriter mtl quality brain dead bullshit. If you've read proper stories with good sentence formation then click Browse on the top left and leave this book alone until it get's fucking edited. Updates- Frequent Story Development- Awful dude's trained for goddamn centuries and happens to be the most brain dead, weak ass mc I've seen. Some goddamn bullshit must be happening for this dude to be absolutely outclassed by a goddamn werewolf. Basically don't read it if you want realistic character growth both emotionally and physically. Character Design - just a sponge, dude's got no personality except for what I think would be a goddamn shit-eating grin that adorns his face goddamn 24/7 World Background- It's fucking **** wolf, that shit sucked ass.
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Membuka SPOILER well.. writing quality isn't very good.. but you can read it.. some commas are misplaced or there's a lack of it.. and the phrases are a bit confusing. story development: a lot of time skips in the start, he focuses more on the romantic relationship until chapter 10.. the powers are just told, you don't see growth, even as the mc isn't op from the start, there are no scenes explaining growth truly.. it's a nice pace to things going on season 1.. it's not good, but not bad either. character design: the other reviews I've seen just insults the mc endlessly.. I don't think he is completely dumb, or brain dead.. but he is not the most pragmatic and badass character. he is lazy and tries to act cool, and the fault in this is just the writing, imo.. update stability: from the other reviews it seems good, I don't know yet, but he might've dropped or doesn't have a good stability, the last chapter while I'm writing this was 16 days ago.. and the chapters length are pretty good, so that's a plus. world background: there are some changes.. the characters go in the interpretation of the author, so if you think similar, you probably will like it..
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Well, I don't even feel like giving a good review on how stupid the story is, it's so fucking bad that it seemed to be written by someone while they were having a stroke. The MC is pathetic, dumb, nerdy, among so many things, but what totally ruined the story was the unhelpful and useless treatment it made. God, I got so angry that I could only think of the MC as a pathetic bitch.
one of the best fanfiction's i've read so far it is good to read and i would love to See more of it and it is also nice that you Made the Mc strong but not Overpowerd.
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I hope you don't drop this just because everybody's hating when they've clearly not read through all of it it's dope in my opinion don't see many of these
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood very very very good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dropped within the first chapter lol. The author makes so many stupid decisions that I just couldnβt continue reading. Shame this author was the one to come up with the idea because in the right hands it coupd work.
Right okay so. Writing Quality - fucking typewriter mtl quality brain dead bullshit. If you've read proper stories with good sentence formation then click Browse on the top left and leave this book alone until it get's fucking edited. Updates- Frequent Story Development- Awful dude's trained for goddamn centuries and happens to be the most brain dead, weak ass mc I've seen. Some goddamn bullshit must be happening for this dude to be absolutely outclassed by a goddamn werewolf. Basically don't read it if you want realistic character growth both emotionally and physically. Character Design - just a sponge, dude's got no personality except for what I think would be a goddamn shit-eating grin that adorns his face goddamn 24/7 World Background- It's fucking **** wolf, that shit sucked ass.
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