Instant Mastery In Harry Potter (English)

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Memonic

hello friends this is my humble novel, I am a novice writer, who wanted to try my luck and see if I can sustain myself from my writing, I hope you like it and support me, vote as much as you can and thank you for reading my novel. English is not my first language so I translated it with google.

LV 14

yokedjaguar

Frankly it's just hard to read. Even if your an ******* some of the mistakes shouldn't have been made especially if you've read other stories. In example your overzealous need for the readers to know your mc is the most handsome man to grace the earth. You also need to learn how to write in general. Hope you'll strive to better your work but at the moment I don't think your up for it. Good luck.

LV 3

creepycatisawesone

Now let me be honest. THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY. I have read other stories like this with smart and manipulative MC who is not dark and I easily find it among the top 3 of such novel's in webnovel as far as characters and story is concerned. This is unique as the MC is transmigrated in pre book era and is an *****. Moreover the creativity is good though I find some ideas like goblin copied. Also it is the dark lord Dumbledore version so yeah idiots who like dumbles it's not for u. Updates for now are quite good and much better than many others of same genre(though it may be cause it's new) Now the only problem I find, other than few plotholes (which are genuinely quite Less compared to other FFs ) , is THE LANGUAGE , don't take me wrong as it is perfectly readable but Still it depreciates the quality of Novel as some minor confusion while reading can leave u with a bad taste BUT ULTIMATELY IT IS STILL TOP 5 In the Smart Male Self Insert in Harry Potter type novels (and I don't read novel's with female MCs So I don't know about that ) I still suggest the author to work on language as it would improve the quality of Novel a lot .

LV 14

Aeternabilis

I'm not gonna lie, this has very interesting ideas but to me, it was poorly executed. The mc is just way too strong it is a joke. He is basically a god... I loved his backstory (other than the part where the fam should have been killed by Grindelwald and not Voldemort) For me, his three wishes should have been the family background, his looks and maybe something like potent magic power? Then it should have shown the mc growing up, learning all the secrets of his house and the things with the dragons maybe even getting his own. So he won't be a god but is still pretty op from the things he learns in his travels and from his family. We can watch him learn these feeling closer to the character. Then he comes back to do everything mainly build his city and focus on that. Forget all these other things such as controlling muggle world all the magical market's etc He can link his islands as resorts etc that you teleport to from the city, create the private school, the stadium etc. This can then grow and build on into canon and see how it affects the world. Maybe even have it mixed into marvel or something. Having your own magical city in marvel etc. I feel these would have been much more interesting to read tbh. Cause instead I feel what I am reading is a god mc where everything just jumps about, skipping massive parts, making random sht up and adding it in with no thought... It goes way to fast to the point you get confused about what has happened and how. Like he is suddenly friends with the goblin nation, he has all these girls that he gains in seconds etc etc The book is also wayy to focused on how amazingly handsome the mc is and how every girl or person that sees him is start struck and want to worship him... it's honestly like half the story is about this. I hope the author reads this and slows down, think about the plot more etc gl to him

LV 5

animadrop

Hard to read. Surprisingly, the general grammar is better than pure mtl, but sadly that doesn't change the fact that the story is no better in its own categories than the grammar.

LV 5

Adict

i'll be honest. it's clearly a first work, the first chapter skips the begining of the story so there's no development and goes straight to the problem. i'm not gonna get annoying listing all bad things to me here, but when your story starts with a women thinking how handsome and awesome the mc is and how big his dick is... well i knew this is not for me

LV 3

uflesh940

It's completely unreadable. Also, his wishes are 90% garbage. For his backstory, he asks for a pureblood family, asks for them all to have died, and asks to look nice ("golden eyes", "white skin"). For his actual wishes, it's even worse Fir his first wish, he wants access to a magical library of some sort, presumably from another fandom. For his second wish, he wants the library to have every book ever written. And for his third wish, which is, by the way, the only halfway decent opinion the MC has expressed to this date, he wants instant mastery.

LV 14

SYIHAAKIRA

Hello there Memonic. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.

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pointbreak_101

horrible Grammer 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 too hard to read 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮 writer cannot even differentiate him and her 🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

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DaoOfCopying

"Did Author died? This is my Favorite HP FanFic for real i've read 160+ HP FanFic and this one is on top." [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Groenendaal

terrible grammar, almost unreadable.

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UnholyFalseHeaven

what's up? ? is it dropped or not ? i've had it in my library for about 2 months .... 😂 ........................ ........ .. ...

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Lardeen

Author dont know when should use him her!! Very often writing wrong genre and its so messed story. You should rewrite it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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J4ke

[img=recommend]Love it, and i certainly love the expanding universe. Love the black sisters and romanov. ...................................

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mohammediq

thank you for the story whis is very good :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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zoink

thank you for the story whis is very good :).....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

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Cutejohn1234

its so interesting that people dont like this story i remember this because i like it so much it was one of first i read on webnovel and forgot about it but after reading it i wanted something similar that i read so many overpower reincarnation hp story however it just wasnt the same this story does something right that others dont match up.

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Agent_Lama_0665

i thought its gonna be a skyrim harry potter crossover and man am i disappointed grammar is bad (almost as bad as mine) and the story is boring (read until chapter 12) mc has nothing interesting but it is harry potter and author tried someting different, failed but he tried