His Rogue Luna

LV 13

MissMacabre

This story has so much potential, but it’s lost in errors. First, the chapters are not in order, and most chapters are repeated. There are no transitions between paragraphs. It’s very easy to get confused while reading due to the mixed up chapters and non transitional paragraphs. There are a few grammatical and mechanical missteps, those are few, and easy to overlook. The biggest issue is how the author mixes up characters names. There is a character named Amy and a character named Aurora, in one chapter, the author used their names interchangeably. The main MLI is named Aurelius, and around chapter 40, his name suddenly becomes Kieran. The ending of the story drops off. It feels like the author was tired of writing and stopped, called it the end. Like I said, this story has great potential. The plot is good and interesting. It needs reworking. Perhaps, the author can do some editing to fix these things, and re-post it on Webnovel, or another writing/reading platform.

LV 12

Palm_BeachF1

I have to repeat other people's reviews...I really enjoyed this book until the chapters started duplicating and went out of order...tried to persevere but gave up...such a bummer as it's a great start to the book! hopefully the author will clean it up as I would love to read the rest!

LV 11

Sara_Elizabeth_3265

This story has been by far the most annoying story i have read. Multiple upon multiple chapters are continuously repeated, so much so that it was such a waste of any point spent on it. The story was great but didnt actually have an end to it It has 72 chapters but in reality due to the repeated chapters, it was more like 40 chapters that you charged me for 72. Annoyed beyond belief

LV 15

Angel_Moon_1111

I just started this book and am hooked!! I like a book that slowly and methodically causes you to fall hopelessly in love with the mains, so much do that you’re sharing their pain with your own tears and their triumphs with your own pride! So far a great book!

LV 13

NovaLuna

Up until chapter 17, the book is fine. But as soon as you hit chapter 17, you suddenly run into duplicate chapters that you already read. Plot holes of missing information that isn't explained. Either whole chapters are completely missing, or chapters are posted out of order. The author needs to fix these errors, then maybe I'll return to finish reading the story. It's too bad, because the story was actually pretty good until all the chapter upload errors started appearing. Fix the chapters inside the book, and I will update my Review.

LV 15

EjHip

I have lost track of story the chapters are all mixed up and repeat over and again and now the characters are different i dont know what happened.

LV 13

Vanessa_Munns

Fairly annoyed as chapTers were repeated a number of times in the 70, jumbled chaPters with plot all over the place. it had a chance to be awesoMe , but the editing of chaPters Let it down badly

LV 14

Lau_riz

It Is very frustrating to read. Many chapters are repeated in different order tgere is no time line since the chapters are al over the place and repeated more than twic…. is SAD considering is a nice plot

LV 15

Becky_Wilson_0780

This story is riveting until you get to about chapter 20. Then chapters start repeating and chapters are obviously skipped. I am done reading this story unless the author takes responsibility and fixes the chapters.

LV 11

LaWalker00

The story is fantastic! However at Chapter 16 they start skipping crucial scenarios and are repeats... I'm going to finish the book because I spent all my coins pre-unlocking them all but it's nonetheless frustrating.

LV 14

mayathe4th

I really enjoyed the story, but it gets unorganized and chapters are repeating. I just had 3 mixed chapters in a row. that's it for me, I'll drop this. contact me when it's fixed ...

LV 14

BBJ1111

IT is a fast good read; although some of the chapters are repeated and the story has not ended. It starts off great and its non stop climax climbing. Enjoy the ride.

LV 13

Tess_Le_Blanc

The chapters were all mixed up and out of order. And it was often impossible to figure out where the story picked up after the last chapter. And the ending, if it actually was the ending, sucked.

LV 5

Connie_Fratric

unfinished and many chapters out if order and repeat themselves. seriously in need of a good editor. story could be good otherwise, but there are gaps from missing chapters. would not suggest starting it😕

LV 2

Lisa_Iliff

Way too many errors: repeating chapters that waste your passes, missing story information etc. The overall plot is interesting and character development is good. This story has potential. After 3+ years there's no update to fix these errors. Sad.. I'm not wasting any more passes on this.

LV 13

Raven_Brown_4304

if you spending 💰 save it. This could be a good book unfortunately the chapters repeat and are out of order.

LV 4

jami_payne

This would be a great story if it was in order and there wasn’t repeat chapters. I wouldn’t waiste your coin because you might get mad when you figure out you paid for a new chapter and it’s on you already read. An this isn’t a one time time it’s a rear thing.

LV 15

ElleFrost2303

I love the characters, the writing and storyline. Three things : 1. Editing required due to spelling and grammar problems. 2. The chapters are jumbled and repeated. Which ruined the flow of the reading. 3. No ending - you left it on a complete Cliff hanger. It didn’t seem to be on purpose. Please finish your book - I’m dying to find out how everything plays out. Your writing is amazing I really felt like I was there and I was hanging on every word.

LV 15

marijm

This book has a lot potential eoth a great FL chatacter and plot comcept but unfortunately the author seems to have had a lot of problems wirh uploading chapters out of order, duplicating chapters and making amateur errors such as changing the ML name part way through which may also be an issue of not knowing how to exit after uploading. worst of all of course is that no new updates have been provided in at least five months so all readers are left in a cliffhanger situation.

LV 11

AlvarieB

I will first say that I was enjoying this very much, and so I unlocked the whole book, but unfortunately I regret it. The only issue I had, which was a very big issue for me, was that the chapters were out of order and some chapters were repeats. I couldn't take the back and forth chapters that actually spoiled the story. I enjoyed everything that I read but I regret paying the money for it. BTW the chapters do not start messing up until after the free chapters.