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In short, this is an attempt at a story about Tony Stark getting back in time after using the Infinity Stones. I recently saw a story with a similar premise on this site which made me remember that I wrote this looooong ago.
It is one of my very old drafts. I wrote this about a year ago and it was 'gathering dust', unfinished with me having no motivation to continue. I decided to just post whatever was already written in hopes it would provide someone with an enjoyable evening. It is a better alternative than me just deleting it, no?
I'll give you a fair warning. The probability of encountering grammatical mistakes is fairly high as I don't feel like proofreading an old draft of mine.
As for the cringe name... it is what it is :).
The story has exactly 85 chapters written and I will be posting 4 per week because of course I can't just dump it here all at once. Where would be the fun in that?
Enjoy.
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I started reading the story with little expectation but was mind blow the more I continued reading. I couldn't stop without reading all the currently available chapters. If you like marvel, then this fanfic will blow your mind. Tony's character is perfectly portrayed by the author and the story as well as the other characters are very well fleshed out. The plot progression is specially brilliant as I can't wait for further chapters. Definitely should give this a try.
Initial Evaluation: Average at best. Less to no mistake grammatical errors, well thought chapters wherein dealing with the what ifs, however, it's a misrepresentation of THE TONY STARK. this is more on an emotional side of author-san when it comes to marvel Tony stark. I highly recommend reading comics pertaining to Tony stark back in time so you can correctly portray Tony stark. You are kinda devaluing him in this FF which is a bummer.
Bro is back with another bomb................. Nice story.. ....,. 🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡🫡....,..........................
Bravo. You know, I also felt that Tony was underappreciated by his team. I mean, they didn't come for him in 5 years, and when they came, they were asking for a time machine. I was surprised by how he didn't shoot them then.
Superior Quality Writing in Webnovel's Standards - Stability is good as it was a old draft - Story Development is also good - Character Design is special - World Background is Marvel Comics 616ish.
I will say that this is one of the best if not the best Marvel fanfic I have read so far, and I have read close to a hundred by now. Of course, most of them are dropped and this is no exception. Which sucks because the other Marvel Fan-fics were mediocre compared to this. I want to recommend reading it. But at the same time, I don't. The reason why is because it's dropped. Even though it was a great read it will never be finished. So if you do decide to do so and you are used to reading dropped Marvel fanfics like me. Then read it, you won't be disappointed till you reach chapter 85. This would have been a five-out-of-five-star story for me. But since it was dropped I cannot find myself giving it that rating. I will keep it in my Library for now in the hopes that the Author would grace us with more chapters.
This is a great fanfic, I wonder how long till he interacts with the X-Men and if the Fantastic Four is going to be in it. I can’t go read more
I only wish that you author-san would have completed this story. Really liked it. Do give it a read... 5/5[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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*pikes author a lot* Hey author, you still alive? This has been an amazing story so far so please notify us readers if you're taking a break or story dropped
Very good story, author is very good at showing Tony's character and overall story writing is good. I really enjoyed this story. I hope author continues this at some point.
I didn't expect much from this story but DAYYYYMN ITS GOOD. Please tell me it's an ongoing story and well see an update a week or two later.
Great grammar and decent story. however, the MC is such a distorted version of Tony, one even death and time wouldn't create. He believes himself the ultimate victim, while throwing shade at himself slightly to try and not be obvious. kinda emo. Such a depressing outlook on everyone and everything in the beginning. I know its to create a version of Tony to fit your story but its just all a bit much and and a bit farfetched. this is definitely not the MCU but could be a different universe that is very similar because this Tony ain't the one we know. Give the story a try before moving on. A serious Tony is a boring Tony.
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{38 Chapters in} | Marvel Comics 616ish World Background - Iron Man x Black Widow [Both from sacrificed comics timeline with no mutants] Early Romance - Writing Quality is superior in webnovel's standard - Story Development is good with Iron Man as the MC as he learns from Kamar Taj and is a Genius at that & he is not in the hero business anymore - [Neutral Evil] as he kills Obadiah Stane after he is thrown to jail by the FBI/SHIELD - He only cares for Pepper, Happy [married to Pepper 2 years], Rhodey & now Natasha as he regrets being the cash cow of Avengers in first timeline. The story starts after Iron Man comes back alive from the Ten Rings capture - [Prologue] After Iron Man snaps his fingers, he is in a weird orange Realm where he relives his life on a screen very slowly from different perspectives where he discovers that no-one cares for him and he is only used by everyone. - GOOD READ - RECOMMENDED.