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I'm not really one for in-depth reviews, but I think this novel deserves more attention, so here goes. I’ve read up to chapter 97, and I’ve got to say—this is a very enjoyable novel. It has many elements that the traditional cultivation stories have nowadays, but with a more realistic feel to them, which I find surprisingly refreshing since not many stories have detailed descriptions about strength development and whatnot, so it's honestly a nice aspect about it. The characters are portrayed nicely as they all have their own distinctive backstories and motives, especially the protagonist, Mira. Her backstory and past lives make you feel for her, considering how dark and brutal they are, so be prepared for her aggressive personality when you begin reading, but that’s what’s honestly good about her IMO. Especially her strange but close friendship with Maria, which always cracks me up!😂😂 I’m not picky when it comes to grammar, but I think it's still really good and easy to read, but hey, I’m not that good myself. I guess the only bad side, but this could be counted as my opinion as well, is the lengthy paragraphs, which takes up an entire page and more, but again, it’s my personal preference, so many might not mind it overall. Update stability is good, and hopefully, it stays that way, which I’m guessing will, considering the consistency up until the current chapter.👍 The world background hasn’t been explored that much yet, but it's still enough to give you a feeling of how vast and significant the world is, which is a big plus in these types of novels. Not much else to say, really, since I’m not one for these kind of reviews. So keep up the good work author!😃
this story is one of my favorite cultivation type novels. it has a really fun vibe while also being able to get dark when it needs to. Story: it's a bit too fast paced for my tastes, but not overly so. you have time to comprehend the previous arc before the next one begins, but there's barely any filler in between. I find it annoying that a lot of novels have pages of filler and take ages to get the story moving again. it also keeps improving and innovating, not just repeating the same ark with different context. the mc is op, but not so much that she has no difficult fights, or that she never dies. this story also illustrates the difficulties of cultivating very well. most story's have the mc gain power with barely any struggle, and this book puts into perspective how hard it actually would be. Character development: The characters are much better than you would expect from a normal novel on this site. they each have separate motives for what they do, and they change over time. there's no static or one dimensional characters. even the antagonist has a bit of depth to him, but since he only shows up rarely, it's barely noticeable. this will probably improve later on though. Grammar: there's about as much mistakes as you would expect a native English speaker to make. It's rare, but typos do happen occasionally, and considering that the mc and her best friend's names are one letter apart, it can make it confusing at times. this barely takes away from the story though, and considering some novels I've seen on here, it's essentially perfect.
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This is a very good web novel. I believe that this novel is one of the ones that got me into the cultivation genre. I hope that you will finish the story because I have seen many great novels get stopped because they pushed to hard.
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This novel is wonderful. However, it's a pity that my favorite character Maria was almost completely eliminated out of the story for almost 300 chapters. I think this was a wrong decision. It’s good that Mira sometimes think about her, but it’s not enough. For me, she is the second main character and deserves a lot more time (maybe 25-40%), even if she does something separately. In addition, she is a character, who needs significant development and growth. And this cannot be done without devoting time to it. I think that some of the necessary triggers for this have already been laid down. In any case, I like observing Maria much more than others in this story.
Good novel, i wouldn’t delve deep into the story but the MC is refreshing something new in those seas of stupid novels. The evolution and struggles of the MC and those around her is amazing to say the least the plot isn’t repetitive, the pain and saddnest that accompanies every her decision is reflected onto others not forgotten by the plot, and I love the fact that the characters aren’t circling around the mc withot any self-development. The Mortal Realm world bulding is still vague, other than the continent she in we have no imporant clue about other continents, but the story is fulfilling. The story is starting to get interesting and exciting, I can only wait and fantasize about the battles to come. But the thing I love the most is that the mc race change is something more unique like a fox for example now all the novel I see that have race change are following the routine: human -> dragon or like getting the innate body of chaos or something similar, but this one has finally chosen something unique. The romance and emotions she has closed of for thousands of years aren’t destroying the plot but making it more unique and stable. I recommend reading it
a pain to read.... lots of boring info dump I often feel drowsy... unlikeable love interest... I've no motivation to read further
i dont like tragedys in generals for me a novel that is a tragedy will be 1-0 star DEFAULT but the author know how to balance that much i like that she has a tragedy past but that is starting changing for the better and i like the fact that author dont kill the current loved ones of the mc and overtorture the mc yes... i like the fact that the personality that the mc is changing for his loved ones but remain the same for everyone else... well i like foxes in generals is a plu... cough cough i'd like that she remain like this... soft for loved ones and indiffernt for everyone else well... the 5 star is deserved but the review can change like the story.
Good but I hate most the side characters e specially Maria in the couple hundred chapters I read I have hoped that she would get killed off multiple times and then when you made her the love interest made me lose a lot of motivation to read this story
this one is a really great novel if you looking for ruthless female mc let start with mc. MC: she doesn't care about anyone, mostly treat everyone with indifferent except those close to her. She can killed anyone whatever it innocent ppl or not if it for her goal (become stronger). the mc also has some char development too but it pretty slow Story: it pretty fast at the early chapter slow down in later chapter. There no young master trope (if there is then it properly explained) Romance: It a slow-romance with yuri, no harem or 2 girl. world building: honestly this one is pretty bad cuz it focused on a mc who don't have any knowledge about the world she in and she not actively find it too, you may go like 100+ ch and just know the geography of each continent, maybe 200+ for all mortal lvl. It still got explained sometime so not too bad.
very good story in my opinion. keep it up! after all, we wanna see this story grow till it's over! WOOOOO!
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Story reviewed preemptively at Chapter 88, will most likely be taken down by myself and redone again when I reach the middle part so know that this might not be exact as of later chapters. I'm doing this now to give the author my take on the story and some (constructive) criticism as it seems like there's only been praises so far, and no one has told them any actual negatives about the story. Before anything else, I'd like to point out the most major thing keeping this story from being a solid 4+ stars, and that is that it suffers quite heavily from the violation of the "show, don't tell" rule. For quite a lot of it, we are told, not shown. For example, in chapter 88 when Maria was fighting our protagonist. "Mira got into range and made a move like she was about to roundhouse kick Maria in the upper thigh. Maria decided now would be a good time to take a swing, but immediately regretted this decision", we are never shown in details what is happening, only told of it. Wording is important in fights, much less the story itself, and so is a good repertoire in vocabulary. It makes it so that you can show better what is happening instead of making it seem like it's being told. It's something required for the reader to be able to empathize with characters and immerse into the story. Which brings me to the second problem of the story, it lacks exactly that. Which, to me makes it feel like the reader is disconnected from the series, unable to empathize with characters and their struggles. The details feel too little at times, and too much at times. Never "just right", we're barely shown facial expressions, emotions. and such at the end of dialogue, it ends with just. There is little gravitas included, and I feel that if these problems were to be fixed, the story would become much more enjoyable than it currently is. Personally saying, I'd advice you take a look at your earlier chapters and remake them a bit, improve them and make edits that will make the story early on more enjoyable before fully focusing on making new chapters. Even if later on it gets much better, people won't be motivated to read that far in if they can't enjoy the first parts of it, no? Anyways, besides those problems the story has been quite enjoyable so far, the pacing is good. Most of the time it's neither too fast nor too slow and there hasn't been any moment so far I felt like there has been no progress and that we are at a standstill. The world is great for something that is Xianxia/Xuanhuan, and there are some nice spins to it that I can really appreciate. The cast of character so far is really nice, and Maria, even if she can at times be unbearable or too generic, gives a much needed source of character interaction and positive atmosphere to the story, and acts as a counterbalance to Mira's character- no matter how much I love her. TLDR; as of ch.88, a great story that is weighted down by the violation of "Show, don't tell", and the lack of repertoire in vocabulary.
I've never had anything bad to say about this book, it's probably one of the top 0.1% of books on this platform in terms of quality and quantity
I've been having a good time reading this. Good balance of conflict, setbacks, and progress. I will say though that it's kind of slow burn, it's a cultivation novel, 500 chapters in, and only got to golden core stage recently, but the MC is always making at least some visible progress in one way or another. Which is important because I don't feel like I'm wasting my time. Although I will say that I am slightly annoyed by one thing. Mira's almost compete inability to sit down, focus, and perfect just one thing. Most of the time just relying on fortunate encounters. I understand that she is on a timeline, but that wasn't really the case before. I'm caught up and I'm super curious how the heck the MC is going to dig herself out of the current dilemma. I won't go into details, but it's BAD. Like REALLY BAD. There's several groups and individuals going around and slowly tightening the noose around our MC. While the MC is vaguely aware of what's happening as there's MANY precedents, she can't really do anything about it unless it's in front of her. The author is probably going to have to work some actual miracles just to make it fair, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things play out.
amazing story so beautiful. everything about it is amazing hard to believe its your first work.
as far as I've read it seems like a very interesting and good book but there are way too many info dumps hence why I haven't read very far
Frankly not much to say. (50 chapters) A story with potential but ruined. We have a character who joins the mc who is forced, the person sucks but gradually becomes a genius out of nowhere just with a little practice. As soon as she faces a problem she can't solve it, so she fails but then bounces back each time, boring. The biggest problem is that the mc is supposed to be 100 times stronger but there is no diff and it's always on its lower cultivation. Another very annoying thing is the kilo and km units, they are so exaggerated that it loses all the immersion. Problem in the mc's emotions too (SPOILER: The mc is all happy, then loses his parents and becomes cold and does not smile anymore, not logical it seems that he did not have the life experience of his last lives.) AND last and huge concern we do not see the interest of her last lives... Whether it is in the understanding of the dao of her weapon or just on the dao in general we have the impression that she discovers it while her former life was devoted entirely to learning his scythe and cultivation. I'm only quoting that but there are many other misunderstandings... Not to mention the repeated shots either. If I should say something positive, it's that we don't find the never-ending coincidences that we normally find in this kind of novel. Not that there aren't any, but they aren't too forced. Conclusion: Kill Maria or make her leave. And highlight her former lives more, because in the end they are only reflected in the fact that she has a cultivation method and she has a weapon. I say a lot of negative but if you pass these problems which may not be for certain, it is still a good read to pass the time.
I enjoyed this story for a while, it has an interesting setup and all the true and tested cultivation hooks. Lots of training, treasure hunting and inheritance trials. Some bad guys here and there and an evil god for good measure. The world has it's own unique system of Cultivation, and it's always fun to see how the protagonist find their way to obtain extraordinary strength. Unfortunately, I do feel that there's a little too much focus on the training aspect and not nearly enough on setting an interesting overall narrative. It's hard to keep interest when it feels we're just following the protagonist from one training arc to another with little to no plot moving along. To make things worse, I felt that the more I learn about the protagonist's history the less it makes sense. Everything about her past and personality is exaggerated to a crazy degree. So, I'd say it's a decent read if you are patient and like anti-hero type protagonists
I still gave 5 star for writing quality even though at the beggining there's been a bit of grammatical error, but its get better so fast that i dont mind them anymore. The Author just keep getting better and better ❤️❤️❤️ She's so cold, cruel, bully, brutal, evil and she nags.. this story is so refreshing. The MC is a real villain and not like the other story when they thought shes a villain but actually a very good person.. She is the real deal.. 😈😈... Its so refreshing and i love it very much.. Also there's NO LOVE story
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this isn't a actual review and just wanted to post a meme. complimentary 5 star review tho. and now I need a word count for this to actually post this. done
É simplesmente a melhor novel que eu já li é tudo muito bem feito desde o crescimento do personagem tanto emocionalmente e em força é muito bem feito para que ela seja forte mas não invencível e tenha depois que nerfa o personagem para que a luta tenha graça além de que o autor (ou autora eu não sei ) é muito bom em desenvolver e mostrar a personalidade dos personagens e não só da protagonista (e eu não sei inglês por isso do escrevendo em português)
bom eu não sei o que dizer além de que é tudo muito bem feito o mundo o desenvolvimento do personagem a única coisa é que por mais que essa seja a forma de que a mira agiria é tão frustante quando ela tem momento perfeito para acontecer um yuri mas não acontece mas ao mesmo tempo é perfeito porque não quebra o personagem então eu só vou continuar com as fantasias na minha cabeça até chegar o yuri e por favor autor faz com que tenha yuri mesmo que seja no final da novel espero que você continue com a novel e obrigado por esse trabalho magnífico que você fez
the novel is generally good , but Maria 's presence is a little excessive , and I hope she will subject this immoral guy to all kinds of abusrd tortures
This is definitely one of the best cultivation novel on this site. If you like a very independent OP female MC with a fascinating history who kills without hesitation giving "death goddess" vibes and constantly works hard to improve themselves then this is the right novel for you!
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Great Novel but I came her to read Mira’s story not Maria’s ever since she came on this journey the story start going downhill for me, I don’t care about her character at all because I didn’t click on this novel for this. The synopsis made me read this and it’s completely different. She’s just getting babysitted by our MC…. Great premise but ruined because of the insertion of the typical female MC companion that follows her on her travels. This cliché is even worse than young masters in my opinion. I don’t know why but the moment we first saw her I knew this would happen but I continued reading expecting for a development of the plot instead of making a useless girl one of the main characters of a story. She has no place here… A couple of grammar errors but is still readable, doesn’t bother me. Author please respond to me, will Maria stay as a main character or will we finally focus on Mira? If yes until when should I read?
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Author shamelessly giving their work 5-stars. This is my first time writing a novel. What I am writing is something mainly for me. I want to write something that has everything I want in a novel. It may not be exactly what you want, but I will try to keep everything interesting and make sure there are no plotholes. I want to share my journey with others which are part of the reason I am posting it on Webnovel. The other reason is to keep me motivated. If I have at least 1 person willing to spend their time reading my novel every day, then I can also stay motivated and spare my time to create more chapters every day. My goal is to complete the story. Then I can go back and read through my novel and enjoy a novel that was tailor-made for me HAHA. Hopefully, people can enjoy reading my story as much as I enjoy writing it. I will do my best to upload chapters every day and any feedback you have, I will take them into consideration. Thanks for checking out my novel and I hope you enjoy it. Thanks!!
I'm not really one for in-depth reviews, but I think this novel deserves more attention, so here goes. I’ve read up to chapter 97, and I’ve got to say—this is a very enjoyable novel. It has many elements that the traditional cultivation stories have nowadays, but with a more realistic feel to them, which I find surprisingly refreshing since not many stories have detailed descriptions about strength development and whatnot, so it's honestly a nice aspect about it. The characters are portrayed nicely as they all have their own distinctive backstories and motives, especially the protagonist, Mira. Her backstory and past lives make you feel for her, considering how dark and brutal they are, so be prepared for her aggressive personality when you begin reading, but that’s what’s honestly good about her IMO. Especially her strange but close friendship with Maria, which always cracks me up!😂😂 I’m not picky when it comes to grammar, but I think it's still really good and easy to read, but hey, I’m not that good myself. I guess the only bad side, but this could be counted as my opinion as well, is the lengthy paragraphs, which takes up an entire page and more, but again, it’s my personal preference, so many might not mind it overall. Update stability is good, and hopefully, it stays that way, which I’m guessing will, considering the consistency up until the current chapter.👍 The world background hasn’t been explored that much yet, but it's still enough to give you a feeling of how vast and significant the world is, which is a big plus in these types of novels. Not much else to say, really, since I’m not one for these kind of reviews. So keep up the good work author!😃
this story is one of my favorite cultivation type novels. it has a really fun vibe while also being able to get dark when it needs to. Story: it's a bit too fast paced for my tastes, but not overly so. you have time to comprehend the previous arc before the next one begins, but there's barely any filler in between. I find it annoying that a lot of novels have pages of filler and take ages to get the story moving again. it also keeps improving and innovating, not just repeating the same ark with different context. the mc is op, but not so much that she has no difficult fights, or that she never dies. this story also illustrates the difficulties of cultivating very well. most story's have the mc gain power with barely any struggle, and this book puts into perspective how hard it actually would be. Character development: The characters are much better than you would expect from a normal novel on this site. they each have separate motives for what they do, and they change over time. there's no static or one dimensional characters. even the antagonist has a bit of depth to him, but since he only shows up rarely, it's barely noticeable. this will probably improve later on though. Grammar: there's about as much mistakes as you would expect a native English speaker to make. It's rare, but typos do happen occasionally, and considering that the mc and her best friend's names are one letter apart, it can make it confusing at times. this barely takes away from the story though, and considering some novels I've seen on here, it's essentially perfect.
Membuka SPOILER This is a very good web novel. I believe that this novel is one of the ones that got me into the cultivation genre. I hope that you will finish the story because I have seen many great novels get stopped because they pushed to hard.
Why there isn't a new capther for this great novel. Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why Why WHY Why Why Why
This novel is wonderful. However, it's a pity that my favorite character Maria was almost completely eliminated out of the story for almost 300 chapters. I think this was a wrong decision. It’s good that Mira sometimes think about her, but it’s not enough. For me, she is the second main character and deserves a lot more time (maybe 25-40%), even if she does something separately. In addition, she is a character, who needs significant development and growth. And this cannot be done without devoting time to it. I think that some of the necessary triggers for this have already been laid down. In any case, I like observing Maria much more than others in this story.
Good novel, i wouldn’t delve deep into the story but the MC is refreshing something new in those seas of stupid novels. The evolution and struggles of the MC and those around her is amazing to say the least the plot isn’t repetitive, the pain and saddnest that accompanies every her decision is reflected onto others not forgotten by the plot, and I love the fact that the characters aren’t circling around the mc withot any self-development. The Mortal Realm world bulding is still vague, other than the continent she in we have no imporant clue about other continents, but the story is fulfilling. The story is starting to get interesting and exciting, I can only wait and fantasize about the battles to come. But the thing I love the most is that the mc race change is something more unique like a fox for example now all the novel I see that have race change are following the routine: human -> dragon or like getting the innate body of chaos or something similar, but this one has finally chosen something unique. The romance and emotions she has closed of for thousands of years aren’t destroying the plot but making it more unique and stable. I recommend reading it
a pain to read.... lots of boring info dump I often feel drowsy... unlikeable love interest... I've no motivation to read further
i dont like tragedys in generals for me a novel that is a tragedy will be 1-0 star DEFAULT but the author know how to balance that much i like that she has a tragedy past but that is starting changing for the better and i like the fact that author dont kill the current loved ones of the mc and overtorture the mc yes... i like the fact that the personality that the mc is changing for his loved ones but remain the same for everyone else... well i like foxes in generals is a plu... cough cough i'd like that she remain like this... soft for loved ones and indiffernt for everyone else well... the 5 star is deserved but the review can change like the story.
Good but I hate most the side characters e specially Maria in the couple hundred chapters I read I have hoped that she would get killed off multiple times and then when you made her the love interest made me lose a lot of motivation to read this story
this one is a really great novel if you looking for ruthless female mc let start with mc. MC: she doesn't care about anyone, mostly treat everyone with indifferent except those close to her. She can killed anyone whatever it innocent ppl or not if it for her goal (become stronger). the mc also has some char development too but it pretty slow Story: it pretty fast at the early chapter slow down in later chapter. There no young master trope (if there is then it properly explained) Romance: It a slow-romance with yuri, no harem or 2 girl. world building: honestly this one is pretty bad cuz it focused on a mc who don't have any knowledge about the world she in and she not actively find it too, you may go like 100+ ch and just know the geography of each continent, maybe 200+ for all mortal lvl. It still got explained sometime so not too bad.
very good story in my opinion. keep it up! after all, we wanna see this story grow till it's over! WOOOOO!
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Story reviewed preemptively at Chapter 88, will most likely be taken down by myself and redone again when I reach the middle part so know that this might not be exact as of later chapters. I'm doing this now to give the author my take on the story and some (constructive) criticism as it seems like there's only been praises so far, and no one has told them any actual negatives about the story. Before anything else, I'd like to point out the most major thing keeping this story from being a solid 4+ stars, and that is that it suffers quite heavily from the violation of the "show, don't tell" rule. For quite a lot of it, we are told, not shown. For example, in chapter 88 when Maria was fighting our protagonist. "Mira got into range and made a move like she was about to roundhouse kick Maria in the upper thigh. Maria decided now would be a good time to take a swing, but immediately regretted this decision", we are never shown in details what is happening, only told of it. Wording is important in fights, much less the story itself, and so is a good repertoire in vocabulary. It makes it so that you can show better what is happening instead of making it seem like it's being told. It's something required for the reader to be able to empathize with characters and immerse into the story. Which brings me to the second problem of the story, it lacks exactly that. Which, to me makes it feel like the reader is disconnected from the series, unable to empathize with characters and their struggles. The details feel too little at times, and too much at times. Never "just right", we're barely shown facial expressions, emotions. and such at the end of dialogue, it ends with just. There is little gravitas included, and I feel that if these problems were to be fixed, the story would become much more enjoyable than it currently is. Personally saying, I'd advice you take a look at your earlier chapters and remake them a bit, improve them and make edits that will make the story early on more enjoyable before fully focusing on making new chapters. Even if later on it gets much better, people won't be motivated to read that far in if they can't enjoy the first parts of it, no? Anyways, besides those problems the story has been quite enjoyable so far, the pacing is good. Most of the time it's neither too fast nor too slow and there hasn't been any moment so far I felt like there has been no progress and that we are at a standstill. The world is great for something that is Xianxia/Xuanhuan, and there are some nice spins to it that I can really appreciate. The cast of character so far is really nice, and Maria, even if she can at times be unbearable or too generic, gives a much needed source of character interaction and positive atmosphere to the story, and acts as a counterbalance to Mira's character- no matter how much I love her. TLDR; as of ch.88, a great story that is weighted down by the violation of "Show, don't tell", and the lack of repertoire in vocabulary.
I've never had anything bad to say about this book, it's probably one of the top 0.1% of books on this platform in terms of quality and quantity
I've been having a good time reading this. Good balance of conflict, setbacks, and progress. I will say though that it's kind of slow burn, it's a cultivation novel, 500 chapters in, and only got to golden core stage recently, but the MC is always making at least some visible progress in one way or another. Which is important because I don't feel like I'm wasting my time. Although I will say that I am slightly annoyed by one thing. Mira's almost compete inability to sit down, focus, and perfect just one thing. Most of the time just relying on fortunate encounters. I understand that she is on a timeline, but that wasn't really the case before. I'm caught up and I'm super curious how the heck the MC is going to dig herself out of the current dilemma. I won't go into details, but it's BAD. Like REALLY BAD. There's several groups and individuals going around and slowly tightening the noose around our MC. While the MC is vaguely aware of what's happening as there's MANY precedents, she can't really do anything about it unless it's in front of her. The author is probably going to have to work some actual miracles just to make it fair, and I'm looking forward to seeing how things play out.
amazing story so beautiful. everything about it is amazing hard to believe its your first work.
as far as I've read it seems like a very interesting and good book but there are way too many info dumps hence why I haven't read very far
Frankly not much to say. (50 chapters) A story with potential but ruined. We have a character who joins the mc who is forced, the person sucks but gradually becomes a genius out of nowhere just with a little practice. As soon as she faces a problem she can't solve it, so she fails but then bounces back each time, boring. The biggest problem is that the mc is supposed to be 100 times stronger but there is no diff and it's always on its lower cultivation. Another very annoying thing is the kilo and km units, they are so exaggerated that it loses all the immersion. Problem in the mc's emotions too (SPOILER: The mc is all happy, then loses his parents and becomes cold and does not smile anymore, not logical it seems that he did not have the life experience of his last lives.) AND last and huge concern we do not see the interest of her last lives... Whether it is in the understanding of the dao of her weapon or just on the dao in general we have the impression that she discovers it while her former life was devoted entirely to learning his scythe and cultivation. I'm only quoting that but there are many other misunderstandings... Not to mention the repeated shots either. If I should say something positive, it's that we don't find the never-ending coincidences that we normally find in this kind of novel. Not that there aren't any, but they aren't too forced. Conclusion: Kill Maria or make her leave. And highlight her former lives more, because in the end they are only reflected in the fact that she has a cultivation method and she has a weapon. I say a lot of negative but if you pass these problems which may not be for certain, it is still a good read to pass the time.
I enjoyed this story for a while, it has an interesting setup and all the true and tested cultivation hooks. Lots of training, treasure hunting and inheritance trials. Some bad guys here and there and an evil god for good measure. The world has it's own unique system of Cultivation, and it's always fun to see how the protagonist find their way to obtain extraordinary strength. Unfortunately, I do feel that there's a little too much focus on the training aspect and not nearly enough on setting an interesting overall narrative. It's hard to keep interest when it feels we're just following the protagonist from one training arc to another with little to no plot moving along. To make things worse, I felt that the more I learn about the protagonist's history the less it makes sense. Everything about her past and personality is exaggerated to a crazy degree. So, I'd say it's a decent read if you are patient and like anti-hero type protagonists
I still gave 5 star for writing quality even though at the beggining there's been a bit of grammatical error, but its get better so fast that i dont mind them anymore. The Author just keep getting better and better ❤️❤️❤️ She's so cold, cruel, bully, brutal, evil and she nags.. this story is so refreshing. The MC is a real villain and not like the other story when they thought shes a villain but actually a very good person.. She is the real deal.. 😈😈... Its so refreshing and i love it very much.. Also there's NO LOVE story
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É simplesmente a melhor novel que eu já li é tudo muito bem feito desde o crescimento do personagem tanto emocionalmente e em força é muito bem feito para que ela seja forte mas não invencível e tenha depois que nerfa o personagem para que a luta tenha graça além de que o autor (ou autora eu não sei ) é muito bom em desenvolver e mostrar a personalidade dos personagens e não só da protagonista (e eu não sei inglês por isso do escrevendo em português)
bom eu não sei o que dizer além de que é tudo muito bem feito o mundo o desenvolvimento do personagem a única coisa é que por mais que essa seja a forma de que a mira agiria é tão frustante quando ela tem momento perfeito para acontecer um yuri mas não acontece mas ao mesmo tempo é perfeito porque não quebra o personagem então eu só vou continuar com as fantasias na minha cabeça até chegar o yuri e por favor autor faz com que tenha yuri mesmo que seja no final da novel espero que você continue com a novel e obrigado por esse trabalho magnífico que você fez
the novel is generally good , but Maria 's presence is a little excessive , and I hope she will subject this immoral guy to all kinds of abusrd tortures
This is definitely one of the best cultivation novel on this site. If you like a very independent OP female MC with a fascinating history who kills without hesitation giving "death goddess" vibes and constantly works hard to improve themselves then this is the right novel for you!
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Great Novel but I came her to read Mira’s story not Maria’s ever since she came on this journey the story start going downhill for me, I don’t care about her character at all because I didn’t click on this novel for this. The synopsis made me read this and it’s completely different. She’s just getting babysitted by our MC…. Great premise but ruined because of the insertion of the typical female MC companion that follows her on her travels. This cliché is even worse than young masters in my opinion. I don’t know why but the moment we first saw her I knew this would happen but I continued reading expecting for a development of the plot instead of making a useless girl one of the main characters of a story. She has no place here… A couple of grammar errors but is still readable, doesn’t bother me. Author please respond to me, will Maria stay as a main character or will we finally focus on Mira? If yes until when should I read?
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Author shamelessly giving their work 5-stars. This is my first time writing a novel. What I am writing is something mainly for me. I want to write something that has everything I want in a novel. It may not be exactly what you want, but I will try to keep everything interesting and make sure there are no plotholes. I want to share my journey with others which are part of the reason I am posting it on Webnovel. The other reason is to keep me motivated. If I have at least 1 person willing to spend their time reading my novel every day, then I can also stay motivated and spare my time to create more chapters every day. My goal is to complete the story. Then I can go back and read through my novel and enjoy a novel that was tailor-made for me HAHA. Hopefully, people can enjoy reading my story as much as I enjoy writing it. I will do my best to upload chapters every day and any feedback you have, I will take them into consideration. Thanks for checking out my novel and I hope you enjoy it. Thanks!!