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Hi new here , first book and I must say the author is doing a good job. Don't believe me read and see for yourself. An interesting and fresh plot.
The story has a fresh idea and the author portrayed her characters so well you can feel what they feel, and the story gets you hooked right from the beginning that you can't help wanting to know the ending
This book is fantastic, interesting, captivating. If you pick it up you wouldn't want to let go and then gbam you are at the last chapter and you are left hanging wanting more and begging the author for more update.
Well, I can see the skill of the Author being flowing through the story- and I find that she is really adjusted on writing a large scaled chapter very easily. My suggestions- 1.Kindly Check the text lengths of your paragraphs- they become too bulky for the eyes to read along. 2. Try giving cliff hanging situations more. 3. Build up more suspense and boost up the intriguing-ness of the initial Chapters. 4. Re-visit and Re-edit your initial chapters, because even if you don't correct the later chapters- the readers mostly get adjusted to the story in the initial Chapters. 5.That's it, Good Luck!
The book is nice and captivating, the idea is fresh and different. You get hooked from the first chapter that you find it hard to put down. Good job Author keep it up.
DISGUSTING…..,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, BUT I CROCO LIKE IT.
Hi guys, my first review, my first story here. This was so cool, the author had me huked from the first chapter that I couldn't stop till I was at the last chapter and I am eagerly waiting for the next upload. Hurry up author...
This is my first story here and I must tell you I am not disappointed. The author joked me right from the first chapter, revealing the emotions of her character so well that you are able to feel what they feel. Give this book a trial and I promise you will be back for more.
the plot is interesting and the writing style is good. i hope you continue writing this story all the way. wish you all the best! Fighting!
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Hello everyone, so I opened the floor for the review of Her Vendetta. Her vendetta is like my test run into story writing there has been a lot of tweaking and Reformation to the story to bring out the best in the characters. I would really love to hear from you readers. Thanks for giving the book a chance.
A good book for those into GL.the book paints the pictures of all characters into the reader's mind making it easier to relate with.my fav character is Jada so far.Elizabeth and Madeline could be something good if not for their fear.
Hi new here , first book and I must say the author is doing a good job. Don't believe me read and see for yourself. An interesting and fresh plot.
The story has a fresh idea and the author portrayed her characters so well you can feel what they feel, and the story gets you hooked right from the beginning that you can't help wanting to know the ending
This book is fantastic, interesting, captivating. If you pick it up you wouldn't want to let go and then gbam you are at the last chapter and you are left hanging wanting more and begging the author for more update.
Well, I can see the skill of the Author being flowing through the story- and I find that she is really adjusted on writing a large scaled chapter very easily. My suggestions- 1.Kindly Check the text lengths of your paragraphs- they become too bulky for the eyes to read along. 2. Try giving cliff hanging situations more. 3. Build up more suspense and boost up the intriguing-ness of the initial Chapters. 4. Re-visit and Re-edit your initial chapters, because even if you don't correct the later chapters- the readers mostly get adjusted to the story in the initial Chapters. 5.That's it, Good Luck!
The book is nice and captivating, the idea is fresh and different. You get hooked from the first chapter that you find it hard to put down. Good job Author keep it up.
DISGUSTING…..,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, BUT I CROCO LIKE IT.
Hi guys, my first review, my first story here. This was so cool, the author had me huked from the first chapter that I couldn't stop till I was at the last chapter and I am eagerly waiting for the next upload. Hurry up author...
This is my first story here and I must tell you I am not disappointed. The author joked me right from the first chapter, revealing the emotions of her character so well that you are able to feel what they feel. Give this book a trial and I promise you will be back for more.
the plot is interesting and the writing style is good. i hope you continue writing this story all the way. wish you all the best! Fighting!
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505
Hello everyone, so I opened the floor for the review of Her Vendetta. Her vendetta is like my test run into story writing there has been a lot of tweaking and Reformation to the story to bring out the best in the characters. I would really love to hear from you readers. Thanks for giving the book a chance.
A good book for those into GL.the book paints the pictures of all characters into the reader's mind making it easier to relate with.my fav character is Jada so far.Elizabeth and Madeline could be something good if not for their fear.