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Ye Kai played a game adapted from "The Pirate". He smashed his phone and fell into a coma because he was blocked by the plug-in. When he woke up, he found that he was locked in the world's number one prison-Push City? Ye Kai felt that his life was meaningless, he was lying on the ground like a salted fish, only to find...he was getting stronger even when he breathed! ! At this time, he found that he was carrying a golden finger! It is the plug-in for playing games-100 times the income! This is equivalent to 100 times the training speed! (This story and characters are purely fictitious. Any similarity is purely coincidental and should not be imitated.)

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Daoist_Pun

There are several misnamed things, I assume this is due to translation. There are also Chinese slang/sayings.Example chrysanthemum means butt hole. and those meanings can't be lost due to translation. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - One Piece -> The Pirate Monkey D. Carp -> Karp Gol D. Roger -> Gore D. Roger Impel Down - Pushing city/Push City/Advancing the city Calm Belt -> Pushing zone Marine HQ -> Propulsion City Crimson Hell (level 1) -> red lotus hell Golden lion Shiki ->Golden lion Shiji (probably typo) Sea King nesting grounds -> nest of Neptunes Okama Paradise -> Shemale kingdom Big Mom -> Aunt - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - These are only some of the example I have found in first few Chapters of the fanfic.

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InnerVoice

- I love that it’s a one piece fanfic - Love that he got 100x experience/learning/ reward or whatever else cheat - Love that the novel came out with lots of chapter all at once - Hate the terrible grammar - Hate the misnaming of characters and locations - Hate the fact that I was force to change the names back to the original in my mind every time there is incorrect stuff. - Hate that there’s too many repetition In each chapters

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Hentai_Lord

the names of places and writing style are confusing I don't think I will continue to read. Just at least put it through Grammarly again then change the names to what they originally are in one piece

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g105x7max

Link to original? It is easier to read by google translate, that this. 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10 1/10

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black_lordd

oh God the grammar is so baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad make me sick , try to translate bit by bit . . .

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Farmy
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name of people and place is so confusing [[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[[]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]

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Weirdo

Overall, a good fanfiction idea. But it's a bad, bad read. The original one seems like Chinese, and author use a bad translating apps to translate. Making it all seems like translate by retards. I read it for the idea though, so if you still want to read it, go ahead..

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sagepotatoOAA

all ok or good except the amount of chapters like bro did u drop this or is it paused for months :/

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