Bab 649: Into Furdia
I swam toward the hateful, rising sun. Except for one shark, there were no incidents.
[You have taken twelve points of Lacerating Piercing damage; after armor you have taken eight points. You have 24/40 health remaining.]
I panicked, of course. I hadn't seen a shark on my [Beast Sense]. I had seen and heard nothing to make me think I was in danger.
<Bleh!> She said. <Oh gods, I was WRONG.> she said, fleeing faster than I could follow without engaging an ability. <Oh, oh, it tastes TERRIBLE.>
I know, so much for my self confidence.
<How bad?> one of the other girl-sharks asked.
She broadcast her sense of [Taste.]
Ammonia, check. Bile, check. Proteins for spider venom, check. Phenol, check. I mean, all the stuff that normally goes into my blood was there. I mean, I was low on iron from how much I'd bled out the night before, but...
PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA 
Mike_Kochis
Mike_Kochis I cut a chapter, maybe a chapter and a half from the outline here. His journey was supposed to be longer, and seem harder. BUT I realized... Rhishi wouldn't talk about that. Not to some scribe, in any case.
But.. such things are part of my writing style. Characters do their thing, and I discover it as I go. (Pants-er writing style. The other is deterministic, which I try sometimes, but honestly, the former is closer to how I actually write.)
As always, thank you for your continued readership. It's why I'm writing right now, rather than just sprawled out in bed. Today, YOU (my readers) saved me from an episode of depression; so thank you.
Hadiah
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