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The book feels very fast paced however this also feels kind of correct because it feels like how a person would remember things if it happened to them like they remember the really important things and that's what matters because it's what's interesting And that's good.
yo why does this have the same summary/premise as doomsday online: Supreme blessing. who is copy and pasting vroooooooooooooom vroom vroooom
you should not take this review seriously i am just righting this to get the daily reward for writing a review on a story. this book is great.
wonderful wording it's very detailed. Love everything about your book hope you have a great day and continue making stories such as this one. [img=update][img=recommend]
This Is a pretty good one. I enjoyed reading it and had some fun. I think that it was overall pretty well developed, Though the characters could have used a little more work.
Nice story, i like the plot and the environment, i hope it gets to get pick up so i can enjoy it. It reminds me one other the (Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God)
This novel is a typical example of unbalanced game play. Which makes it dreadfully boring, because after 10 chapters it is already clear, that the only way for the MC to face any setback at all is for him to make stupid mistakes. After reading 30+ chapters, I can only stop because it is stupidly boring. Comparing it to doomsday online is doing a disservice to doomsday online, because in this novel the MC becomes a God compared to everyone else in less than 10 chapters. And there are no side characters, side quests, interesting story twists or literally anything good about this novel to balance that flaw. You want proof? Author needs to use a timeskip of 7 days (compared to the 1 actually described) in the first few chapter. Literally 80% of the time is skipped before chapter 40(I didn't read more). The power progression, time line, cost-benefit ratio, level progression, admin behavior etc. makes absolutely no sense in this novel. Example: MC reaches level 10 in 1/2 day. Others need 5-7 days to reach level 10. Mc needs those 5-7 days to reach level 15, but many others who needed at least 5 days to reach 10 are already at level 12 on day 7. Mc has a monopoly on field bosses, areas, quests and literally anything else for at least 4 days, while possessing at least 2 times the stats of any other player and 3 times more and better skills(at least 6 purple skills) in addition to gaining perfekt loot every hour. But MC leveling in those skipped days, in which he did not leave his room and only played that one game, is worse than any other random noop from a guild. The MC is portrait as a random every day guy, but his first day he is literally the God of speed runs, who makes no mistakes, uses his environment for his advantage and hoards overpowering skills like no other. Then he is a noop during timeskip and returns to being a perfect arrogant gaming God right after. Of course, not because he is actually competent, no, the rest of the characters are just incompetent and brain dead. Giving a single coin, fast pass or wathever to this novel is simply a waste. Don't read this shit, it's an abomination.
When I saw this book I wanted to read it and this book is good but I think it needs some pictures so we can see the characters and the monsters.
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lol like the character and funny story wait I think this is th wrong novel I'm sorry I shall leave never to return again for I am in the wrong place
Dear God this is so low effort it hurts For starters the writing, while not overly terrible. It uses alot of wrong terms and sentences that simply dosent make any sense not sure if it's the translation or source material The story starts out with some pretty basic mmo stuff, which I honestly quite like. But It pretty quickly because a low effort circle jerk. Everyone gets a grade B and up talent, yet the Mc only seem to use it, while everyone else is utterly incompetent. The Mc dosent even try to make an effort to befriend the 2 known guild leaders when approached the first time The npcs are said to act like real people, but that's not the case in the actual writing. I've read alot of si fanfics which are miles ahead of this garbage. You could probably still enjoy it if you are tired enough. But to me this just hurts to read Best of luck
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
网游 之 天眷 战神 original name .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I may not be a fan of these types of novels i find it decent to read so far¥¥¥I may not be a fan of these types of novels i find it decent to read so far.....
Haven't read it yet... But is there any point to this plot? I mean how many novels have mcs with bad luck? Or even normal luck? Where we would have read novels with unreasonable power ups and drops, here the author can simply use luck points. Well other than that hopefully there will be some important plots rather than luck dominates all sh!t.
If you want novel about gaming and op luck and Main character this the novel for you. When will we get more chapters??????????????????????
The novel is good to read and the story development and grammer is also good. But the downside is the luck stat is 99 and the mc can activate it almost on every battle, it would be best if it activates randomly or has a cooldown time and a particular condition to activate
The story is a fast pace one. talks about a guy who's going into a rough time in a few paragraphs then has insane luck in the next paragraph. at least they made a reason why the main character has game broken luck. 30 chapters in and already level 30. its a good mindless read. but the only bummer is that they don't give you a chapter or 2 about the real world. like I would like to read where he is living or his daily life that change. the only paragraph that they give u is about him finally leave his apartment for a few days to eat a big meal and see his old class mate but that was literally just one sentence. all in all dont expect big things or changes, the story about reincarnation of the guardian is like heaven and earth Compare to this mud and dirt.. but ill keep reading it for the mindless entertainment.
just did this for xp ...................tjegjetjeymehmetkegkwgkeykeymeykehmehmrhmrhmrylrykrgkeyk2tkwtk3tkwtketkwtketkeyketketketkeykeyk3yl3ykeykeyk
it was very very good I would try not to spoil it but I will tell you now let me get something else I'm telling you he is very very good very very very good I respect everything he did
Membuka SPOILER
Not sure what they use as a method of choosing these but I've read better SI fanfic's of Harry Potter on this site than 90% of the filth they keep adding on review. Candy crush has more complex gameplay and system than the game here. MC cheat is retarded. Item rarity and stats mean nothing just stuff randomly throw together with author pulling out numbers out of his áss that change between chapters. Combat is = random number, mob uses random skill that does something, mc uses random skill that does something, MC alive because avoiding damage not explained how, cheat activate random normal beginner mob drops 10 items that are perfect upgrade for MC including highest rank skills and weapons because it makes sense tutorial area gives endgame lvl stuff. Oh and almost forgot you buy in-game currency with real money so P2W is included just like all the other Chinese mobile games or clones of one game released in new skin again and again. There's no world building no character progress and overall it feels like a novel written by a 10 year for a school essay. Then again it has the MMORPG in the title so maybe they have like a template where you just write some random names and it generates yet another one of these novel copies with same plot as the rest of them. Now that I think of it its like a clone of China's game market same shít paddled with different name and microtransactions included...
Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
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Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ...
It’s not a bad book, I won’t question any plotholes or stuff since I have terrible perception. So overall, I think the standards of the virtual-reality-MMORPG-based novel is the similiar to the standards of other similiar novels. *Shrugs* Although that might be just me
Very good ............ .. . .......................... ............................................. ............. ...................................
bommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmlmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm tô ostei muito da história meus parabéns ao escritor[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
do you know what I hate,when the mc kills monsters above his level but it takes a hundred million enemies to level up,it does not make sense
The book feels very fast paced however this also feels kind of correct because it feels like how a person would remember things if it happened to them like they remember the really important things and that's what matters because it's what's interesting And that's good.
yo why does this have the same summary/premise as doomsday online: Supreme blessing. who is copy and pasting vroooooooooooooom vroom vroooom
you should not take this review seriously i am just righting this to get the daily reward for writing a review on a story. this book is great.
wonderful wording it's very detailed. Love everything about your book hope you have a great day and continue making stories such as this one. [img=update][img=recommend]
This Is a pretty good one. I enjoyed reading it and had some fun. I think that it was overall pretty well developed, Though the characters could have used a little more work.
Nice story, i like the plot and the environment, i hope it gets to get pick up so i can enjoy it. It reminds me one other the (Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God)
This novel is a typical example of unbalanced game play. Which makes it dreadfully boring, because after 10 chapters it is already clear, that the only way for the MC to face any setback at all is for him to make stupid mistakes. After reading 30+ chapters, I can only stop because it is stupidly boring. Comparing it to doomsday online is doing a disservice to doomsday online, because in this novel the MC becomes a God compared to everyone else in less than 10 chapters. And there are no side characters, side quests, interesting story twists or literally anything good about this novel to balance that flaw. You want proof? Author needs to use a timeskip of 7 days (compared to the 1 actually described) in the first few chapter. Literally 80% of the time is skipped before chapter 40(I didn't read more). The power progression, time line, cost-benefit ratio, level progression, admin behavior etc. makes absolutely no sense in this novel. Example: MC reaches level 10 in 1/2 day. Others need 5-7 days to reach level 10. Mc needs those 5-7 days to reach level 15, but many others who needed at least 5 days to reach 10 are already at level 12 on day 7. Mc has a monopoly on field bosses, areas, quests and literally anything else for at least 4 days, while possessing at least 2 times the stats of any other player and 3 times more and better skills(at least 6 purple skills) in addition to gaining perfekt loot every hour. But MC leveling in those skipped days, in which he did not leave his room and only played that one game, is worse than any other random noop from a guild. The MC is portrait as a random every day guy, but his first day he is literally the God of speed runs, who makes no mistakes, uses his environment for his advantage and hoards overpowering skills like no other. Then he is a noop during timeskip and returns to being a perfect arrogant gaming God right after. Of course, not because he is actually competent, no, the rest of the characters are just incompetent and brain dead. Giving a single coin, fast pass or wathever to this novel is simply a waste. Don't read this shit, it's an abomination.
When I saw this book I wanted to read it and this book is good but I think it needs some pictures so we can see the characters and the monsters.
Bdjdhdbxjdjdjdhdbbdbddbdb it is Okayyy butty needsssssdddsssssss someeee moreeee loveeeeeee for reaalllll like this is greatttttttt i loveee itttttt and other peope shoudld asl well
lol like the character and funny story wait I think this is th wrong novel I'm sorry I shall leave never to return again for I am in the wrong place
Dear God this is so low effort it hurts For starters the writing, while not overly terrible. It uses alot of wrong terms and sentences that simply dosent make any sense not sure if it's the translation or source material The story starts out with some pretty basic mmo stuff, which I honestly quite like. But It pretty quickly because a low effort circle jerk. Everyone gets a grade B and up talent, yet the Mc only seem to use it, while everyone else is utterly incompetent. The Mc dosent even try to make an effort to befriend the 2 known guild leaders when approached the first time The npcs are said to act like real people, but that's not the case in the actual writing. I've read alot of si fanfics which are miles ahead of this garbage. You could probably still enjoy it if you are tired enough. But to me this just hurts to read Best of luck
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
网游 之 天眷 战神 original name .........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I may not be a fan of these types of novels i find it decent to read so far¥¥¥I may not be a fan of these types of novels i find it decent to read so far.....
Haven't read it yet... But is there any point to this plot? I mean how many novels have mcs with bad luck? Or even normal luck? Where we would have read novels with unreasonable power ups and drops, here the author can simply use luck points. Well other than that hopefully there will be some important plots rather than luck dominates all sh!t.
If you want novel about gaming and op luck and Main character this the novel for you. When will we get more chapters??????????????????????
The novel is good to read and the story development and grammer is also good. But the downside is the luck stat is 99 and the mc can activate it almost on every battle, it would be best if it activates randomly or has a cooldown time and a particular condition to activate
The story is a fast pace one. talks about a guy who's going into a rough time in a few paragraphs then has insane luck in the next paragraph. at least they made a reason why the main character has game broken luck. 30 chapters in and already level 30. its a good mindless read. but the only bummer is that they don't give you a chapter or 2 about the real world. like I would like to read where he is living or his daily life that change. the only paragraph that they give u is about him finally leave his apartment for a few days to eat a big meal and see his old class mate but that was literally just one sentence. all in all dont expect big things or changes, the story about reincarnation of the guardian is like heaven and earth Compare to this mud and dirt.. but ill keep reading it for the mindless entertainment.
just did this for xp ...................tjegjetjeymehmetkegkwgkeykeymeykehmehmrhmrhmrylrykrgkeyk2tkwtk3tkwtketkwtketkeyketketketkeykeyk3yl3ykeykeyk
it was very very good I would try not to spoil it but I will tell you now let me get something else I'm telling you he is very very good very very very good I respect everything he did
Membuka SPOILER Not sure what they use as a method of choosing these but I've read better SI fanfic's of Harry Potter on this site than 90% of the filth they keep adding on review. Candy crush has more complex gameplay and system than the game here. MC cheat is retarded. Item rarity and stats mean nothing just stuff randomly throw together with author pulling out numbers out of his áss that change between chapters. Combat is = random number, mob uses random skill that does something, mc uses random skill that does something, MC alive because avoiding damage not explained how, cheat activate random normal beginner mob drops 10 items that are perfect upgrade for MC including highest rank skills and weapons because it makes sense tutorial area gives endgame lvl stuff. Oh and almost forgot you buy in-game currency with real money so P2W is included just like all the other Chinese mobile games or clones of one game released in new skin again and again. There's no world building no character progress and overall it feels like a novel written by a 10 year for a school essay. Then again it has the MMORPG in the title so maybe they have like a template where you just write some random names and it generates yet another one of these novel copies with same plot as the rest of them. Now that I think of it its like a clone of China's game market same shít paddled with different name and microtransactions included...
Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends
Good ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ... Just stop stereotype guilds ...
It’s not a bad book, I won’t question any plotholes or stuff since I have terrible perception. So overall, I think the standards of the virtual-reality-MMORPG-based novel is the similiar to the standards of other similiar novels. *Shrugs* Although that might be just me
Very good ............ .. . .......................... ............................................. ............. ...................................
bommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmlmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm tô ostei muito da história meus parabéns ao escritor[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
do you know what I hate,when the mc kills monsters above his level but it takes a hundred million enemies to level up,it does not make sense