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CYCLE SWORD DOULUO
4.49 (14 peringkat)
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A story about a soldier who know as ANCIENT SWORD died from destroying a SPECIAL FORCED that can be a threat to world.Why he was know as ANCIENT SWORD?You need to check it yourself.....
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Hello there, FLAME_LORD99. I love to give 5 stars because is. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like the characteristic of all your characters especially your main lead. I also hope that you continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works to create this great novel and I hope you donโt drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day or week if you not too busy or sick. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
The author made the same mistake that other authors do. They made their mc too powerful. Too many cheats ruin the story just like loser mc ruins the story. The problem with this is the mc will become too powerful and to have any kind of story you will wither need to nerf him or make his enemies more powerful.
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la historia en si es buena, la explicaciรณn inicial al sistema de poder es temprana lo que facilita n poco las cosas, asi que le doy buena calificaciรณn sin embargo, aunque la escritura es entendible y esta bien pero la redacciรณn de la historia no me da como mucho interes,parece a veces apresurado o sin fuerza, no sabrรญa decirlo solo en mi opiniรณn no se lee bien, por lo demรกs esta bien
I like. I like what is not harem and I would like you not to make the protagonist too powerful, little by little is fine, and also do not use power ups in each dangerous situation as at the beginning. Hence everything great.
this is rare for me to write this much, oh well 1. the grammar problem, 'shrugs' at least it is readable 2. book cover, it doesn't make someone intrested into reading this fic 3. the plot is good but sometime there are something that you forgot / put incorrectly, like the ring age, ect. 4. the character name, some chapter is different 5. the plot hole, killing most of em is pretty bad choice yknow.
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The story is good and I would love to read more, the world background characters on story development are good ,updating stability is ok, but you need the writing quality better because it can confuse people reading it . Other than that great story keep writing
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Saya harap ini tidak dijatuhkan... Lanjutkan... Semangat untuk terus membuat novelnya.... Terbaiklah pokoknya.... ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
The title is kinda off-putting and Samsara Sword Douluo is a much better title. To be honest I dont even know how you thought it was better to replace Samsara with Cycle. It sounds totally different than what you think it sounds like even if it might make sense in your mind. And to readers its quite good except that the Author has a bad naming sense and gramar but being able to understand it should be enough.