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I enjoyed this story however I am also disappointed by a few things...first, the translation is not good, second, I felt very cheated with this novel!! To stretch the number of chapters, some paragraphs are repeated from one chapter to the other throughout. Basically, you pay for 4 chapters to in fact only get 2!! It really isn't fair to the readers to be extorted!
The story is easy to understand and its story development process is also very stable. But the point regarding grammatical mistakes and spellings should be kept in mind. I would like to say that after editing it once , it'll be a very wonderful piece. Best wishes 🕊️
This needs to update faster!! very good novel. This is really interesting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
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Quite simple and easy to read! If you guys want to a not so plot driven story and a romance themed novel then this is definitely worth a try!
the story is great. the characters are not so bad, and the plot line is actually great too, but the novel is in great need of editing. It feels like the novel was translated by a machine. the grammatical errors kill the whole vibe and feeling of the novel. please get someone to edit it. I can also help to edit if you give me access cause this is really a great story that shouldn't go to waste !
The story-line is not bad, but Author you need to improve your writing quality. Description was not very good and lacks liveliness. story development isn't bad, but I'm mostly disappointed in the Character design. Specially FL's character is ridiculous, contradictory and too artificial . I didn't get any proper character. Only ML's character design is PASSABLE. Background is vague and unclear. If you ever edit, please consider these points. The writing quality failed to show characters emotion, just FL's annoying all the time 'Hik hik' crying is too boring and disgusting.
hoping against hope for a day when webnovel gets tired of boyfriends dumping the seemingly 'perfect' FLs for her not so 'perfect ' step sisters
Hello, please check out this book. English might not be the author's first language but you can later see that she will improve in the latest chapters. The story is simple and understandable. 100% recommend if you like the CEO trope.
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The story is good and very interesting.. im waiting your update..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
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Interesting story! More chapter updates please![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Misel, tolong ya hubungi saya di instagram @rsyifazzh untuk membahas PLAGIASI kamu! Sudah mencuri karya orang Fetish diubah dan di upload di sini.
I enjoyed this story however I am also disappointed by a few things...first, the translation is not good, second, I felt very cheated with this novel!! To stretch the number of chapters, some paragraphs are repeated from one chapter to the other throughout. Basically, you pay for 4 chapters to in fact only get 2!! It really isn't fair to the readers to be extorted!
The story is easy to understand and its story development process is also very stable. But the point regarding grammatical mistakes and spellings should be kept in mind. I would like to say that after editing it once , it'll be a very wonderful piece. Best wishes 🕊️
This needs to update faster!! very good novel. This is really interesting.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER Quite simple and easy to read! If you guys want to a not so plot driven story and a romance themed novel then this is definitely worth a try!
the story is great. the characters are not so bad, and the plot line is actually great too, but the novel is in great need of editing. It feels like the novel was translated by a machine. the grammatical errors kill the whole vibe and feeling of the novel. please get someone to edit it. I can also help to edit if you give me access cause this is really a great story that shouldn't go to waste !
The story-line is not bad, but Author you need to improve your writing quality. Description was not very good and lacks liveliness. story development isn't bad, but I'm mostly disappointed in the Character design. Specially FL's character is ridiculous, contradictory and too artificial . I didn't get any proper character. Only ML's character design is PASSABLE. Background is vague and unclear. If you ever edit, please consider these points. The writing quality failed to show characters emotion, just FL's annoying all the time 'Hik hik' crying is too boring and disgusting.
hoping against hope for a day when webnovel gets tired of boyfriends dumping the seemingly 'perfect' FLs for her not so 'perfect ' step sisters
Hello, please check out this book. English might not be the author's first language but you can later see that she will improve in the latest chapters. The story is simple and understandable. 100% recommend if you like the CEO trope.
Membuka SPOILER The story is good and very interesting.. im waiting your update..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Dear, Hello, I am a novel editor of Novelcat, My name is wind. After reading your appealing novels here, I eagerly want readers on our platform to have a chance to enjoy your talent. Are you willing to show your talent and share your works on our platforms?once your book gets exclusive contracted with us, you can get lots of rewards! and we also offer non-exclusive contract, which means half share of subscription fee and free AD! 【my email: kazechanku@gmail.com】 If you are interested, pls send me an email, so that I can send you our doc about what we can offer to author by email. I’m sincerely looking forward to hearing from you. Please forgive me if my message causes any trouble to you.
Membuka SPOILER Interesting story! More chapter updates please![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Misel, tolong ya hubungi saya di instagram @rsyifazzh untuk membahas PLAGIASI kamu! Sudah mencuri karya orang Fetish diubah dan di upload di sini.