I was told that what I did in the last chapter was a mess And that I should write something like this:
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"Do we have the Tully's permission to pass through their lands?"Asked Arslan in the meeting room with his lords.
"Yes, Your Grace, we already have that" Said Lord Yohn.
"And are 'The Claws Of The Falcon' ready?" Arslan asked again.
"Your Grace the army was ready since the day you told us to prepare," said Lord Lyonel.
"Now we should make a plan" said Arslan.
"We don't need that, Your Grace, Even if our Ground Force can't pass through the walls of their strongholds and castles, Our Air Force can." said Lord Lynderly
"I disagree, Our spies told us that they were preparing Ballistas for us" Lord Eon said.
"True, But with the shrieker's defenses, Ballistas won't work." says Lady Anya.
"But what about the riders of the shriekers? When they notice that the Ballistas don't work on the mounts they'll turn to the Riders, You're not planning on sacrificing our men are you?"Lord Egen
"you have a point, What do you suggest we do?" Said Arslan.
"I say we do it the normal way, We siege their castles and search for weakness points on their defenses." said Lord Egen.
"What do you guys think?" Asked Arslan about the plan and they all nod in agreement, "Then it's decided, We'll do it the normal way", "Where do you think we should attack first?".
"I think we should attack 'Golden Thooth' then 'Sarsfield', And from there we attack 'Casterly Rock', But we will have to do it very quickly as to not leave our backs wide open for 'Hornvale' and 'Ashmark'. " says Lord Egen.
"I don't think that's a good idea, Even if we took 'Castery Rock', Wouldn't we be trapped inside by 'Crakehall' And 'Cornfield', 'Clegane Hall', 'Deep Den', 'Hornvale', 'Ashmark', 'Fairecastle' And 'Feastfires'?, If we wanted to retreat to 'Golden Thooth' i Don't think 'Hornvale' And 'Ashmark' will let us out as easily as we entered." says Lady Anya.
"I agree with Lady Anya, I say we do it Slow and Steady, This is Tywin we are dealing with here, It will not be easy, If we just run in, Tywin will have us in his hands to play with us as he wants." Lord Yohn said
"I see, Than how about this, We attack 'Golden Tooth', After we take it we divide our army into three, One will stay and guard 'Golden Thooth', The second will attack 'Hornvale', And the third will attack 'Ashmark', If we take these three, we'll have a good foot in The westerlands, 'Hornevale' will keep 'Deep Den' in check, While 'Ashmark' will stop 'The Crag' and 'Banefort' from sending reinforcements, We can then expand in different directions, What do You think?" Asked Arslan and got nods of agreement for an answer, "Then this matter is decided, Now, For the more important matter" He said with a smile, The lords also smiled, "My wedding will be in Five days from now, So we will march in 6 days, Understood?".
"Yes, Your Grace" they all said.
"Then this meeting is over, You are dismissed" Arslan said as he stood up, The lords left, He then looked at one of the Protectors, "I'm going to 'Harrenhal', I will take just 20 Protectors with me, We are going now", what he is doing now is because of the message he got from Azreal earlier today, [The false king is planning to execute Ned tomorrow], So he is planning to go to Harrenhall which is the closest Castle of the Riverlands to King's landing, He will go there on Aeolus with 20 Protectors from the Air Force and change into horses so they could sneak into King's Landing.
{KING'S LANDING: }
Ned Stark is brought into the platform under the hate and screaming of the audience.
"I AM EDDARD STARK, LORD OF WINTERFELL AND HAND OF THE KING..." Ned says, He then turns to his daughter that nods at him urging him to continue, "I COME BEFORE YOU TO CONFESS MY CRIMES, IN THE SIGHT OF GODS AND MEN, I BETRAYED THE FATE OF MY KING AND THE TRUST OF MY FRIEND ROBERT, I SWORE TO PROTECT AND DEFEND HIS CHILDREN, BUT BEFORE HIS BLOOD WAS COLD, I PLOTTED TO KILL HIS SON AND SEIZE THE THRONE FOR MYSELF.", The audience was enraged and started yelling traitor, One of them even threw a rock at him and was thus hit in the head, But returned to his place by Sandor, "LET THE HIGH SEPTON AND BAELOR THE BLESSED BEAR WITNESS TO WHAT I SAY, JOFFREY BARATHEON IS THE ONE TRUE HEIR TO THE IRON THRONE BY THE GRACE OF ALL THE GODS LORD OF THE SEVEN KINGDOMS AND PROTECTOR OF THE REALM ", The audience went into rage again.
"As, As we sin, So do we suffer, This man has confessed his crimes in sight of gods and men, The gods are Just but beloved Bealor taught us they can also be merciful," said Grand Maester Pycelle who then turned to Joffrey the false king, "What is to be done with this traitor your grace?", The audience once again went into a rage, Joffrey raised his hand and they went quiet.
"My mother wishes me to let Lord Eddard join the Night's watch, Stripped of all titles and powers he would serve the realm in permanent exile." He said, He then turned to Sansa, "And my Lady Sansa, Has begged mercy for her father...", "But they have the soft hearts of women, So long as I'm your king, Treason shall never go unpunished...Ser Illyn...Bring me his head".
Sansa started yelling not to do it while forcefully restrained by a kingsguard, And Cersei advices him against it, even Varys came running to stop him from doing what he is planning to do, Two Kingsguard forced Ned into his knees, as Ser Illyn wore his mask and Took Ice out of it sheath, He then looked at Ned's and prepaired to cut his head off, As Ser Illyn swong Ice, And when it was about 10 cm from Ned's nick.
"TIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNGG"
The sound of metal hitting metal was heard, Everyone stopped what they were doing and focused on the platform, It was an arrow, Before anyone could say or even think of anything, 15 Men in casual clothing attacked the Lannisters And Golden Cloaks While 6 others kept shooting them with arrows, In less than 10 seconds all the soldiers under the platform were killed, And the 15 men started climbing the platform, The kingsguard finally caught up with what's happening they quickly rushed to Joffery and Cersei and started driving them away, The kingsguard that was restraining Sansa was about to drag her away when he got an arrow to the head, the guards restraining Ned got the same with Ser Illyn and a lot of soldiers who wanted to attack or kill the 15 men, 5 of the 15 went and dragged Sansa away, While another 5 Took Ned and the last 5 kept fighting the still coming soldiers, Seeing that Ned and Sansa were safe the last 5 men also retreated with the Archers.
Cheos filled King's landing that day, Golden Cloaks were turning the place upside down searching for Arslan and Ned, However, the two were already on their way to 'Hrrenhal'.
As the 23 people were Galloping away, Ned And Sansa Rode beside Arslan, "Thank you Lord Arslan" said Sansa and got a nod from Arslan.
"What were you thinking? What if something happened to you?" Ned said in a thankful and angry tone.
"That is my question, What in the seven hells were you thinking, My wedding is in 4 days, Do you know what would happen if something happened to you before the wedding, The starks wouldn't come."Arslan said, Ned just smiled, "You are invited by the way, it will be in the Eyrie, The Martells And Tullys are coming, Now the starks are coming as well, right?" He asked, trying to lighten the mood, He didn't notice that Sansa shakes every time he says Wedding.
"Yes, Of course we are coming" Said Ned.
"Well, You have to go and calm your family now, Im going to Send you on Aeolus" Said Arslan.
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TELL ME WHICH ONE YOU PREFER, THIS ONE OR THE ONE IN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER.
Again, Any suggestions...