Blue eyes next door

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Madyan_wani

The synopsis is really great but it can be better with a little trimming. The BG and theme is also good. The chemistry is gonna rock . Keep updating author. Hope your book be a mass hit in future.

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Delphin_5623

I'm loving this book more and more n I wish u guys join me to explore this wonderful piece by this sweet author🤗💖💋😂💃💃💃😊💖💖💖💋💋💋💋😘😘😘😘

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Darkswan

this is an awesome novel it is obvious you that you did put a lot of dedication to the book, i love the world background it is nicely arranged

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Magecrafter

An awesome **** novel, it encapsulates the soul and the drama one goes through at this point. This isnt your typical **** novel tho, the drama, suspense and the writer’s creativity really draws me in. Truly one of the best out there. Its a five star for me!

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Ritankar_Sarkar_

Overall story is nice and interesting- the feels are good and lively, along with the world background being nicely arranged. i saw some mistakes in between the paragraphs, but they can be corrected by some editing - I hope the writer fixes them as soon as possible!

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Ativie_Ofure

Reading this book got me so captivated. Each chapter just kept me soo interested. The writer has a way of writing that's awesome.. if you haven't read the book you should give it a try it's worth your time. . dear authorities please update I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Innocent_Author

So, here is the honest review. I'm not reading love stories, so, for me everything was new. The story was great(again, this is my first time reading a love story), there were times when you'll smile without knowing it(Relate). Once work Author, but, why was the last chap uploaded a month ago? Please Update more and make the story more unique :)

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Sailow_Sanchez

good story over all it has a cliche romance vibe to it though. I hope as I read further there'll be some really good plot twists that make it something different and exciting

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Bad_Totodile

AWW DISGUSTING................................................................................................ ............................................................. ................................................................. ............................................................. .................................................... Kidding > good job

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Xyenox_chip

The overall story is pretty good but there are a few grammatical errors here and there, so you should fix them first. However, you still need some time to flesh out the characters and everything. Good Luck man!!

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Chizaru

the genre of the book isn't really trending however this is decently done and some moments made me sad. to start off with, i am impressed about the main character. she is very relatable even for a guy. she is a typical looser with an arrogant personality (at least for me). i like the relationship that relationship between Jake and our main girl. i have only read up to chapter 9 and the plot is simple. Don't make the relationship even more complicated and this book will definitely be a good western slice of life story.

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ameer_hassan

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